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;Composition of the second cut

:*The girl is lying on the ground
:*Her hand is casting a shadow on Mai's chest
:*Kon is in a position to hang her head down
:So, where's the sun again?
::[[User:Geyser|geyser]] 22:50, 2 October 2006 (CEST)
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;Deadly fungi
:A reference to [[Miyazaki/Nausicaa interview|Nausicaa]], I would believe.
:May be worth a reference to the episode of Jamie [[Hasegawa]]'s death as well.
::[[User:Geyser|geyser]] 22:50, 2 October 2006 (CEST)
:Good imagery, but push the fungus too far and people will accuse you of stealing from miyazaki.
:I understand he's a major influence and the comparison will be made nonetheless, but trying to minimize direct parallels will help.
::[[User:AF|AF]]
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;The forest
:That one is quite interesting, especially because of the [[:Image:Smallred.jpg|Red Riding Hood image]].
:I think I'll be putting my thoughts on the image page for now, and then move them around.
::[[User:Geyser|geyser]] 22:50, 2 October 2006 (CEST)

 [[Image:GUIDO_whitestripes.jpg|right|thumb|roughsketch<br>[[:Image:GUIDO_whitestripes.jpg|(zoom in)]]]]
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;"Through the small openings it casts white stripes onto the snakes of mist swarming amidst the ruins."
:How on earth do you expect to render this? Just curious.
::[[User:Geyser|geyser]] 23:04, 2 October 2006 (CEST)

more or less this way...

::[[User:Guido|Guido]] 16:42, 25 November 2006 (CEST)
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;"'''KONOKO''' notices '''SMALLGIRL''' on the shore, drawing water with an old tank"
:Picture, please. For the life of me, I don't get what's happening.
:How can you ''draw water'' (e.g. from the river?) "with" a tank?
::What, like with a cup? Dump it in, wait until it fills up, pull it out?
:::Might be a bit heavy for a little girl (starving/dying/whatever)?
:The first version had "Smallgirl in the shoreline drawing dirt water on an old oil tank".
:"ON"??? Do you mean she was drinking rainwater off the top of a barrel?
::[[User:Geyser|geyser]] 04:43, 3 October 2006 (CEST)