Iritscen
touch-up, lots of wording improvements, and some elaboration
03:19
+610
+cat
01:30
+26
okay, "Alex Mendoza" isn't a person; we don't seem to know if it was Alex Gray or Jayson Mendoza, so let's mention both
16:36
−151
typo
15:34
adding in the IQ stat for Konoko, which was previously invisible; general rewrite
02:37
+2,568
better wording, and stuff
02:57
+769
oh yeah, and this. also PUNNNN!
03:21
+387
an initial stab at some commentary, feel free to chip in
03:14
+3,249