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A number of passages are heavily rearranged, but I am convinced the results stay faithful to the original more than a literal translation could be.
A number of passages are heavily rearranged, but I am convinced the results stay faithful to the original more than a literal translation could be.
Of course improvements and proofreading are welcome. If you have some, then help yourselves!
Of course improvements and proofreading are welcome. If you have some, then help yourselves!
I enjoyed the experiment, I hope you will enjoy the results like me! As for the author, I beg him pardon for how I have micromanaged the text. I know it is not the best thing to start with, but it something to start with nonotheless. [[User:Guido|Guido]]
I enjoyed the experiment, I hope you will enjoy the results like me! As for the author, I beg him pardon for how I have micromanaged the text. I know it is not the best thing to start with, but it something to start with nonotheless. ([[User:Guido|Guido, day unknown]])
 
 
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===CHAPTER I:The C-Serum===
===CHAPTER I:The C-Serum===
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::The TSC filed Connors’ ongoing research as “Project 257�?. What Dr. Connors doesn’t know is that TSC is determined to use his Cell-serum (or C-serum) for military purposes. TSC aims at developing some kind of enhanced soldier, whose body can quickly recover from injuries  and easily replace its parts.
The TSC filed Connors’ ongoing research as “Project 257�?. What Dr. Connors doesn’t know is that TSC is determined to use his Cell-serum (or C-serum) for military purposes. TSC aims at developing some kind of enhanced soldier, whose body can quickly recover from injuries  and easily replace its parts.




::Deep underground, in his laboratory located at the 4th level of the base, '''DR. ANDERSON''' conducts his own activities. He is a specialist in cloning techniques too, but he pursues completely different goals. If only weren’t his research for military clients of highest interest, the TSC board of directors would have not given him so much license as he actually enjoys. As it is said, Dr. Anderson is a deranged man and a self-possessed individual. He has even carried out several experiments in order to artificially enhance and upgrade his own body. But he has also suffered from unwelcome side-effects: his body shows now signs of decay, his skin has degenerated and turned scaly. His psyche has been affected in the process, making him even wicker. Underneath its laboratory, on the 5th floor, the lowest of the installation, Dr Anderson assembled a training area for his own creatures, that he ironically called the zoo. He converted a network of caves linking different natural halls into an mix of artificial landscapes -icy, rocky, jungle, swamp and desert- each simulating different weather conditions. The zoo features a monitoring system which is independent from the rest of the base. Dr. Anderson uses it to delight himself at the deadly perfection of his creations. It is assumed that many a door or an elevator lead into the zoo. Woe to the unaware visitors who eventually disturb him over there!
Deep underground, in his laboratory located at the 4th level of the base, '''DR. ANDERSON''' conducts his own activities. He is a specialist in cloning techniques too, but he pursues completely different goals. If only weren’t his research for military clients of highest interest, the TSC board of directors would have not given him so much license as he actually enjoys. As it is said, Dr. Anderson is a deranged man and a self-possessed individual. He has even carried out several experiments in order to artificially enhance and upgrade his own body. But he has also suffered from unwelcome side-effects: his body shows now signs of decay, his skin has degenerated and turned scaly. His psyche has been affected in the process, making him even wicker. Underneath its laboratory, on the 5th floor, the lowest of the installation, Dr Anderson assembled a training area for his own creatures, that he ironically called the zoo. He converted a network of caves linking different natural halls into an mix of artificial landscapes -icy, rocky, jungle, swamp and desert- each simulating different weather conditions. The zoo features a monitoring system which is independent from the rest of the base. Dr. Anderson uses it to delight himself at the deadly perfection of his creations. It is assumed that many a door or an elevator lead into the zoo. Woe to the unaware visitors who eventually disturb him over there!




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'''COMMANDER GREY''' is Commander in Chief of the base and Head of the security unit. Because of his military achievements and assertiveness he was enticed by Techstar to work in the Antartic base. While in the army, he had to witness so many brave soldiers being arbitrarily replaced by enhanced clones, or killed in open combat against these genetically manipulated freaks. Commander Grey does thus have several reasons to distrust technology. He’d rather count on the loyalty of his men. He holds a deep hatred for clones, however he always tries to stay balanced and crack hard on his decisions.
'''COMMANDER GREY''' is Commander in Chief of the base and Head of the security unit. Because of his military achievements and assertiveness he was enticed by Techstar to work in the Antartic base. While in the army, he had to witness so many brave soldiers being arbitrarily replaced by enhanced clones, or killed in open combat against these genetically manipulated freaks. Commander Grey does thus have several reasons to distrust technology. He’d rather count on the loyalty of his men. He holds a deep hatred for clones, however he always tries to stay balanced and crack hard on his decisions.


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==SCENE 1==
==SCENE ONE==


''Dr. Connors is nailed at his laboratory in the 2nd floor. For the first time in a long time he has done a step forward with his C-serum. Eves, his last patient, has made astonishing progresses.''  
''Dr. Connors is nailed at his laboratory in the 2nd floor. For the first time in a long time he has done a step forward with his C-serum. Eves, his last patient, has made astonishing progresses.''  


=''Eve’s File''=
:''EVE'S FILE''


   ''Time of delivery'': Saturday, 20 April 2030 20:15
   ''Time of delivery'': Saturday, 20 April 2030 20:15
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   Height 1.70 meters
   Height 1.70 meters
   Estimated age:  22 years
   Estimated age:  22 years
   ''Anamnesis and Diagnosis'':  Accident at parachuting, multiple fractures, diffuse internal hemorrhages, head trauma, loss of consciousness.
   ''Anamnesis and Diagnosis'':  Accident at parachuting, multiple fractures, diffuse internal hemorrhages,  
  head trauma, loss of consciousness.
   ''Special attributes'': unusual toughness, resilient immune system
   ''Special attributes'': unusual toughness, resilient immune system
   ''Medic’s notes'': Chances for survival are minimal.
   ''Medic’s notes'': Chances for survival are minimal.
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   ''Therapy'':  Administration of C-serum, through synthesis in culture medium and electro stimulation treatment.
   ''Therapy'':  Administration of C-serum, through synthesis in culture medium and electro stimulation treatment.
   ''Trial results'': Immune system responds positively to C-serum with sudden changes- improved regeneration functions and cellular gain: after few days all injuries have been healed, unusual strength, reprise of awareness functions.
   ''Trial results'': Immune system responds positively to C-serum with sudden changes- improved regeneration functions  
  and cellular gain: after few days all injuries have been healed, unusual strength, reprise of awareness functions.
   ''Side-effects'':  Mutation of the cellular tissues, Impossible to assess.
   ''Side-effects'':  Mutation of the cellular tissues, Impossible to assess.
   ''Prognosis'':  Improved chances of complete healing through improved C-serum  
   ''Prognosis'':  Improved chances of complete healing through improved C-serum  
   ''Requested measures'':  Further analysis and documentation of the ongoing cell mutation
   ''Requested measures'':  Further analysis and documentation of the ongoing cell mutation
''Connors finally releases Eve from the pharmacological coma she has been induced to. Eve wakes up for the first time on Wednesday, May 15th at 7:10 a.m.''
'''Eve''' (''babbles''):
Where … where am I? 
'''Connors''':
everything is going fine, now you are at my laboratory.
'''Eves''' (''looks at him''):
"Who are you?  What happened to me?
'''Connors''':
I am Dr. Connors. Do you remember something about the crash?
'''Eve''' (''shaking her head''):
I was…falling, then hit the ground, otherwise… nothing."
'''Connors''':
What’s your name?
'''Eve''' (''thoughtful''):
I … I cannot say.
'''Connors''':
Do you remember something of your home?
'''Eve''':
… nothing at all.
'''Connors''' (''gently speaking''):
"As it seems, you stay amnesiac. Yet, your memory will come again…can you rise?"
(''Connors nods as Eve tries and cheers up'') 
'''Eves''' (''in amazement''):
I can’t understand.  I feel no pain at all.  What did you do to me?" (r''ises and goes a few steps forth and back'').
(''A first glance has been enough, now the young woman has set in good mood with that man'')
(''She’s just awaken from the coma and she feels so good. Her amnesia seems quite a minor problem…'')
'''Connors''' (''astonished''):
:It’s truly a miracle, if I recall how quickly you have recovered from the accident.
'''Eve''':
Frankly I feel as nothing would have happened… I feel as fit as fiddle.
'''Connors''':
I would like to test your reflexes and have some additional screening. Would you follow me?
"Eve (''as she realizes there’s someone else than the doctor'')
Sure Professor, but why is that watchman here?“
'''Connors''': 
This laboratory is somehow “special?. Security personnel is everywhere.  Orders from above... Just don’t pay attention to him.
''Dr. Connors has resolved to carry on a few tests. Eve is computer-controlled run her body to work-load. After that he measures her reflexes and sensitivity. Eve reveals an outstanding physical shape . She’s got the constitution of an highly competitive athlete. Her stealth is outside all common standards and her senses extremely sharp. Despite the objections of the watchmen, Connors insists in bringing Eve to the shooting-range for some training. Eve seems to master everything with impressive skills. Dr. Connors reports enthusiastically all the details: it looks like he has finally obtained a decisive breakthrough in his research.''
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''Since Emily’s conditions have become critical, Dr. Connors can’t help waiting any longer. He starts administering the newly synthesized C-serum to Emily. Her body was hardly responding to the original C-serum. Two days after the new treatment she is producing striking effects. It is like her body cells have been suddenly revived. Weakened tissues are being replaced with racing speed by new, more resilient ones.''
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=='''SCENE TWO''==
''Last morning Emily was finally able to stand up again and get a rid of her wheelchair. Connors is exultant. He has not only managed to save her daughter - all that he has been striving for in years- but probably her daughter will have an entirely normal life like all the other people. The dream that almost abandoned him is becoming reality.
Bill Johnson has just entered the laboratory. Eves studies with interest the newcomer who conveys so much self-confidence, and a reassuring charm: he’s a man with a the pleasant look, probably on his thirties, slim, and some inches taller than her. It doesn’t take too much before their gazes stay tied together.''
'''Connors''': 
may I introduce you Bill Johnson? When they took you here he got the brilliant idea of finding you a name. He is our computer expert and a friend to our family.
'''Eve''' (''smiles at him''):
nice to meet you, Mr. Johnson.
'''Bill''' (''friendly''): Please, Bill is far enough.
'''Eves''' (''hasting a reply''): 
Splendid, and you, well … you can call me Eve… it doesn’t sound so bad at all. You know, I have some problems at recollecting things. My old life seems to be ended.
'''Bill''' (''gently''):
You are in good hands with Dr. Connors.  He is the best, as far as I know. (then turning after Connors): Professor, I brought Emily along with me. She is waiting now in the next to room. She looks terrific. When you see her you won’t believe your eyes!
'''Eve''' (''stunned'')
How … I can feel her. It’s like a strangely trusted aura. And I wish to acquaint with it.
''Dr. Connors cannot conceal his surprise. As his guests continue their conversation many questions start crowding in upon him.''
'''V.O.''' Has Eve really developed telepathic abilities?  In that case, did her body start some kind of mutation? Oh my god, I modified the C serum by using Eve’s cells. If so, I might have done an unforgivable mistake in administering it to Emily.
''Once again he urges further examinations on Eves.''
''They step into the next room. Emily is standing there waiting for them . She has been sensing Eve’s presence outside the door.  They recognize each other at a first glance, like kindred souls.''
'''Emily''':
"Hi, I am Emily, what is your name?
'''Eves''':
It is quite a complicated story, just call me Eve.
'''Emily''' (''excited''):
did you feel that too? I mean, did you feel me while you were in the laboratory?
'''Eve''': 
I see what you mean.  I have never experienced something like that before.
'''Emily''' (''grinning''):
Me either.
(''Connors finds that situation absolutely weird. Despite his joy, he is worried of the sudden changes on her daughter. Everything is evolving too quickly, too easily. A telepathic link was something far beyond his imagination. In his troubled mind there are serious chances that the experiment gets out of control. He is not even sure her cell structure will remain stable. The fear of having created a superman or a monster gets heavier and heavier''.)
(''Connors gazes suspiciously at the watchman standing in the entrance. He tries to interpret from his face what he might have grasped of  the ongoing discussion''.)
'''V.O'''. What would happen if the board or the security learns of this? Would they classify Emily as a potential threat and take her away from me?
'''Connors''' (''suddenly rushing at Bill''):  Bill, you should be at work by now. And I have to carry on further analyses on Eve and my small princess once again.
'''Emily''' (''getting sulky''):
I am no more a small girl.
'''Connors''':
I see. But I am doing this only for your sake.
'''Bill''' (''disengaging''):
See you later Professor. And what about bringing these two cute girls of yours at dinner?
'''Connors''' (''laughing''):  Hey shouldn’t you be a bit more careful? If Carmen is listening, you will make her jealous.  (''Eve seems now uneasy'')
'''Emily''' (''smiling''):
"Cheerio!" 
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'''Eve''' (''once Bill is outside''):
who is Carmen?
'''Emily''' (''impish''):
The good spirit of the house all seeing, all hearing, in other words she knows everything.
Connors (getting practical): Carmen is the core processor of our computer, an artificial intelligence. All electric units of this complex are driven of it.  Bill named it Carmen. Did "Eves say reflectively: "Hm, it gives therefore also machines name?
Emily (loudly): "C’mon Carmen, show yourself!  You have to meet Eve!" (The surveillance camera in the room projects a green hologram of a young woman. Her body seems to be covered of leader circuital paths.) 
Emily: Eve, this is Carmen. (turning to the hologram) Carmen, this is Eve. Please, be kind with her!“
Carmen: Eve is registered in my database as a trial subject. Friendliness is an extra feature I am not authorized to perform.
Emily (upset): "that’s so rude of you! You’re not always so blunt! Moreover look at yourself! Don’t you have anything else to wear than this stupid leader circuit design?
"Carmen (stolid): I have access to 65536 textures. This one approximates my printed circuit board pretty well. "
Emily (shaking her head in resignation): I should ask Bill to generate some new cool design for you."
Carmen: Actually he did. Do you want to see it?
Connors (trying to distract them): "ahem … another time perhaps, we still have much work to do. You would leave us Carmen now, please?
Carmen (as her hologram fades out): Your orders, Doc. (Eves furrows her brow confused)
Emily (sulky): Oh, what a shame!
Connors (turns back to Eve):  Eve, I have another couple of tests I would like to carry on with you two. The regeneration of your body has gone far beyond all my expectations and I have to understand what’s going on there. Please, stay on this platform. It won’t take so long. 
Eves: Alright. 
(From the ceiling the glass cylinder of an investigation tube is lowered down on Eve. Light rays slowly roam ever Eve’s body, accompanied by a humming noise. Dr. Connors stands in awe in front of the indicators on the display.)
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