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-''Dr. Connors has resolved to carry on a few tests. Eve is computer-controlled run her body to work-load. After that he measures her reflexes and sensitivity. Eve reveals an outstanding physical shape . She’s got the constitution of an highly competitive athlete. Her stealth is outside all common standards and her senses extremely sharp. Despite the objections of the watchmen, Connors insists in bringing Eve to the shooting-range for some training. Eve seems to master everything with impressive skills. Dr. Connors reports enthusiastically all the details: it looks like he has finally obtained a decisive breakthrough in his research.''
+''Dr. Connors has resolved to carry on a few tests. Eve is first introduced in a computer-aided training path, where her body is subjected to different degrees of stress and work-load. After that he measures her reflexes and sensitivity. Eve reveals an outstanding physical shape . She’s got the constitution of an highly competitive athlete. Her stealth is outside all common standards and her senses extremely sharp. Despite the objections of the watchmen, Connors insists in bringing Eve to the shooting-range for some training. Eve seems to master everything with impressive skills. Dr. Connors reports enthusiastically all the details: it looks like he has finally obtained a decisive breakthrough in his research.''
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 ==''SCENE TWO''==