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===WISHLIST PART 3===
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==Wishlist Part 3==
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===Part 3===
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a cloudy sky can even concede sunny moments
:even a cloudy sky can concede sunny moments
The sun has pierced the thin clouds over. 
Through small windows it highlights white stripes upon the snakes of mist swarming amidst the ruins.
There is a large placid flow in the middle, going downstream. It is a river or a canal?
We are in front of a deserted town. A farsighted part of the city is still intact and inhabited.
But it is cornered in our view, beyond the left shore of the water.


;The sun has pierced through the thin clouds above. Through the small openings it casts white stripes onto the snakes of mist swarming amidst the ruins.


this hand
;There is a large placid flow in the middle. It is a river or a canal?


casts a tiny shadow on me
;There's a deserted town in front of us. In the distance, a part of the city is still intact and inhabited.
;However, it's in the corner of our field of view, beyond the left shore of the channel.


makes you laugh
:this hand
:casts a tiny shadow on me
:makes you laugh


A Smallgirl’s hand casts a shadow on Konoko’s chest. Konoko keeps her eyes closed.  
;A small girl’s hand casts a shadow on Konoko’s chest. Konoko keeps her eyes closed.
We cannot decipher her face. She’s slowly hanging her head.
;We cannot decipher her face. She’s slowly hanging her head.


Konoko hugs SmallGirl who’s laying on the ground.  
;Konoko hugs the small girl who’s lying on the ground. She is clearly suffering.
She is clearly suffering. However we cannot be sure whether it is Smallgirl dying,
;However, we cannot be sure whether the small girl is dying here and now or whether it is a flashback to when Konoko rescued her.
or a flashback where we see Konoko when we first rescued her.  
;Other bodies are scattered all around.
Other bodies are scattered all around.


:makes you think


makes you think
;Now it is clearly a flashback, Konoko on a bridge over the same channel (a large motorway bridge).
;'''KONOKO''' notices '''SMALLGIRL''' on the shore, drawing water with an old tank (see the [[User talk:Guido/Wishlist/Part 3| discussion]]for more details).


  Now it is clearly a flashback, Konoko on a bridge at the same river
:raindrops of yesterday are now dried up
            (a large motorway bridge).
  She notices Smallgirl in the shoreline drawing dirt water on an old oil tank.


raindrops of yesterday are now dried up
;A pool of rainwater, Konoko’s foot ripples its surface.
          Pool of rainwater, Konoko’s foot ripples its surface.


musk breathes as you cut it
:mold breathes as you cut it


and there’re people carried away from criticisms,
:and there are people carried away from criticisms,
  The asphalt on the route is fractured by colonies of weed and musks.
  Unearthly colors saturate the vegetation.
  Konoko follows alone the route, and enters a forest.


we delay our anniversaries to the forthcoming years,
;The asphalt on the route has been fractured by colonies of weed and mold


towards new moments of
;Unearthly colors saturate the vegetation. Konoko follows the route alone, and enters a forest.
[[Image:Smallred.jpg|right|thumb|Little Red Riding Hood<br>[[:Image:Smallred.jpg|(MORE)]]]]


awaited rain
:we delay our anniversaries to the forthcoming years,
:towards new moments of
:awaited rain


;The highest rises of the trees are grey, reflecting a suffering nature.
;By contrast, the ground layer has become a daze of disturbing phosphorescent lights.


    The highest rises of the trees are grey, and reflect a suffering nature,
:in another year
    by contrast, below life has become a daze of disturbing  phosphorescences
:there may even be unseen stars
in another year


there may be even unseen stars
;Shot of small tiny colored fungi lurking in the luxuriant undergrowth.
  Shot on small tiny colored fungi lurking in the green gorgeous undergrowth.
illnesses and mushrooms coming for us


        View fading out into black.
:illnesses and mushrooms coming for us


'''V.O. OLDMAN''': What pushed you so far away from Neo Tokyo? Isn’t time for coming back?
;Fade to black.
 
;OLD MAN (V.O.)
:What drove you so far away from Neo-Tokyo? Isn’t it time to come back?
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Revision as of 17:24, 16 April 2013

Wishlist Part 3

Guido's Wishlist : trial scenes for Oni 2

  1. Avatar and Konoko
  2. Oldman, Konoko and SmallGirl
  3. Mushroom Drunkyard
  4. Show me the way to NeoTokyo


even a cloudy sky can concede sunny moments
The sun has pierced through the thin clouds above. Through the small openings it casts white stripes onto the snakes of mist swarming amidst the ruins.
There is a large placid flow in the middle. It is a river or a canal?
There's a deserted town in front of us. In the distance, a part of the city is still intact and inhabited.
However, it's in the corner of our field of view, beyond the left shore of the channel.
this hand
casts a tiny shadow on me
makes you laugh
A small girl’s hand casts a shadow on Konoko’s chest. Konoko keeps her eyes closed.
We cannot decipher her face. She’s slowly hanging her head.
Konoko hugs the small girl who’s lying on the ground. She is clearly suffering.
However, we cannot be sure whether the small girl is dying here and now or whether it is a flashback to when Konoko rescued her.
Other bodies are scattered all around.
makes you think
Now it is clearly a flashback, Konoko on a bridge over the same channel (a large motorway bridge).
KONOKO notices SMALLGIRL on the shore, drawing water with an old tank (see the discussionfor more details).
raindrops of yesterday are now dried up
A pool of rainwater, Konoko’s foot ripples its surface.
mold breathes as you cut it
and there are people carried away from criticisms,
The asphalt on the route has been fractured by colonies of weed and mold
Unearthly colors saturate the vegetation. Konoko follows the route alone, and enters a forest.
File:Smallred.jpg
Little Red Riding Hood
(MORE)
we delay our anniversaries to the forthcoming years,
towards new moments of
awaited rain
The highest rises of the trees are grey, reflecting a suffering nature.
By contrast, the ground layer has become a daze of disturbing phosphorescent lights.
in another year
there may even be unseen stars
Shot of small tiny colored fungi lurking in the luxuriant undergrowth.
illnesses and mushrooms coming for us
Fade to black.
OLD MAN (V.O.)
What drove you so far away from Neo-Tokyo? Isn’t it time to come back?

Guido's Wishlist : trial scenes for Oni 2

  1. Avatar and Konoko
  2. Oldman, Konoko and SmallGirl
  3. Mushroom Drunkyard
  4. Show me the way to NeoTokyo
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