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;The sun has pierced through the thin clouds above. Through the small openings it casts white stripes onto the snakes of mist swarming amidst the ruins. | ;The sun has pierced through the thin clouds above. Through the small openings it casts white stripes onto the snakes of mist swarming amidst the ruins. | ||
;There is a large placid flow in the middle | ;There is a large placid flow in the middle. It is a river or a canal? | ||
;There's a deserted town in front of us. In the distance, a part of the city is still intact and inhabited. | ;There's a deserted town in front of us. In the distance, a part of the city is still intact and inhabited. | ||
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;Now it is clearly a flashback, Konoko on a bridge over the same channel (a large motorway bridge). | ;Now it is clearly a flashback, Konoko on a bridge over the same channel (a large motorway bridge). | ||
;'''KONOKO''' notices '''SMALLGIRL''' on the shore | ;'''KONOKO''' notices '''SMALLGIRL''' on the shore, drawing water with an old tank (??? [[User:Geyser|geyser]]). | ||
:raindrops of yesterday are now dried up | :raindrops of yesterday are now dried up | ||
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;A pool of rainwater, Konoko’s foot ripples its surface. | ;A pool of rainwater, Konoko’s foot ripples its surface. | ||
: | :mold breathes as you cut it | ||
:and there are people carried away from criticisms, | :and there are people carried away from criticisms, | ||
;The asphalt on the route has been fractured by colonies of weed and | ;The asphalt on the route has been fractured by colonies of weed and mold | ||
;Unearthly colors saturate the vegetation. Konoko follows the route alone, and enters a forest. | ;Unearthly colors saturate the vegetation. Konoko follows the route alone, and enters a forest. | ||
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:in another year | :in another year | ||
:there may be | :there may even be unseen stars | ||
;Shot of small tiny colored fungi lurking in the luxuriant undergrowth. | ;Shot of small tiny colored fungi lurking in the luxuriant undergrowth. | ||
Revision as of 02:34, 3 October 2006
Wishlist Part 3
- even a cloudy sky can concede sunny moments
- The sun has pierced through the thin clouds above. Through the small openings it casts white stripes onto the snakes of mist swarming amidst the ruins.
- There is a large placid flow in the middle. It is a river or a canal?
- There's a deserted town in front of us. In the distance, a part of the city is still intact and inhabited.
- However, it's in the corner of our field of view, beyond the left shore of the channel.
- this hand
- casts a tiny shadow on me
- makes you laugh
- A small girl’s hand casts a shadow on Konoko’s chest. Konoko keeps her eyes closed.
- We cannot decipher her face. She’s slowly hanging her head.
- Konoko hugs the small girl who’s lying on the ground. She is clearly suffering.
- However, we cannot be sure whether the small girl is dying here and now or whether it is a flashback to when Konoko rescued her.
- Other bodies are scattered all around.
- makes you think
- Now it is clearly a flashback, Konoko on a bridge over the same channel (a large motorway bridge).
- KONOKO notices SMALLGIRL on the shore, drawing water with an old tank (??? geyser).
- raindrops of yesterday are now dried up
- A pool of rainwater, Konoko’s foot ripples its surface.
- mold breathes as you cut it
- and there are people carried away from criticisms,
- The asphalt on the route has been fractured by colonies of weed and mold
- Unearthly colors saturate the vegetation. Konoko follows the route alone, and enters a forest.
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Small Red
(MORE)
(MORE)
- we delay our anniversaries to the forthcoming years,
- towards new moments of
- awaited rain
- The highest rises of the trees are grey, reflecting a suffering nature.
- By contrast, the ground layer has become a daze of disturbing phosphorescent lights.
- in another year
- there may even be unseen stars
- Shot of small tiny colored fungi lurking in the luxuriant undergrowth.
- illnesses and mushrooms coming for us
- Fade to black.
- OLD MAN (V.O.)
- What drove you so far away from Neo-Tokyo? Isn’t it time to come back?