User talk:Guido/Wishlist/Part 3

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Composition of the second cut
  • The girl is lying on the ground
  • Her hand is casting a shadow on Mai's chest
  • Kon is in a position to hang her head down
So, where's the sun again?
geyser 22:50, 2 October 2006 (CEST)

Deadly fungi
A reference to Nausicaa, I would believe.
May be worth a reference to the episode of Jamie Hasegawa's death as well.
geyser 22:50, 2 October 2006 (CEST)
Good imagery, but push the fungus too far and people will accuse you of stealing from miyazaki.
I understand he's a major influence and the comparison will be made nonetheless, but trying to minimize direct parallels will help.
AF

The forest
That one is quite interesting, especially because of the Red Riding Hood image.
I think I'll be putting my thoughts on the image page for now, and then move them around.
geyser 22:50, 2 October 2006 (CEST)

more or less this way...


"Through the small openings it casts white stripes onto the snakes of mist swarming amidst the ruins."
How on earth do you expect to render this? Just curious.
geyser 23:04, 2 October 2006 (CEST)

"KONOKO notices SMALLGIRL on the shore, drawing water with an old tank"
Picture, please. For the life of me, I don't get what's happening.
How can you draw water (e.g. from the river?) "with" a tank?
What, like with a cup? Dump it in, wait until it fills up, pull it out?
Might be a bit heavy for a little girl (starving/dying/whatever)?
The first version had "Smallgirl in the shoreline drawing dirt water on an old oil tank".
"ON"??? Do you mean she was drinking rainwater off the top of a barrel?
geyser 04:43, 3 October 2006 (CEST)