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Incoming from Oni2_talk:Camp
- You'll be on a safer ground naming-wise if you start with a short, fresh overview of your key characters and entities...
(work in progress)
Entries
Some name are more or less place holder names(*). Any suggestion is welcome.
Black Season
Time right after the Big Bang (of Sturmanderung). Marked by chaos and death.
Camp Sturmanderung
Strikers prefer to say "Camp" as code name for the whole complex. Most of of it lies underground.
It's "hosted" by GUR as more or less official maximum security prison. (It was the Syndicate price for helping GUR during the Great Uprising.)
Death penalty is still supported by GUR's law, that way the Syndicate can cover their "new deals" towards their inmates. Sarcastic voices name it also "gladiator farm".
The underground complex contains facilities for research (by supercomputers), production (including Daodan and heavy weapons), and a TITAN module.
Needed electricity is in great part received from a beneath lying geothermal power station which works as closed system.
GATC
(*) Gathered Anti-Terror Commandos
GATC was formed during the Great Uprising in 2032 by a resisting third of the United States known as "New Confederation". (Its constitution was in great part like the old one.)
The International Emergency Economic Powers Act allowed to claim an "unusual and extraordinary threat... to the national security, foreign policy, or economy of the New Confederation". And GATC was ordered to take down this "threat" because the so-called World Coalition Government (WCG) was going to be founded in claim for sole representation - no market or nation should be left. Minorities were going to be ignored.
A fight between native people was a no-go. So, GATC took chance to team up with other WCG opponents (including later the "Network" and the "Shinobi").
Africa had many resisting countries so GATC used the situation to set up a "proxy war" there.
However, they lost the war. GATC kept operating in the underground - financed by pro-NC concerns mainly military industry. GATC is marked by using cutting-edge technologies in faith to ensure their success that way.
GATC: Blackstars
Blackstars is that special platoon (counted 40 units at beginning). It is GATC's elite executive but their existence is official denied. Sort of a modern "Jin-Roh".
Blackstars claimed itself as mercenary group in 2034 after the war. That way GATC kept on track with the Syndicate which has became hostile towards them.
GOP
(*) Guardians Of Paradise
GOP thinks apocalypse is nigh because of the BioCrisis and the war. They pray for redemption and believe that god will give back paradise to human kind which is supposed to be on earth.
They are planned to mirroring human's highest wishes. And high-tech seems to make those wishes becomes true. Paradisical life conditions, great knowledge, physical power, immortality, etc.
But GOP will be a very minor point.
Related: possible future expectations (last blue box)
Green Village
Green Village is a huge research complex which had focused on environmental technologies at first, now on the wide field of genetics.
- (The existence of smog in Oni is discussable but it would give me a nicer background. And then there's also a bit that shall explain why smog is reduced now again...)
Historical context
"Global Warming" caused not only storms, flood and droughts, it led to new discussion about using "geoengineering".
In 2031 harvest rates dropped because of the regions atypical climates. Humans ecological sins seemed to appear now with more strength.
But scientists feared even worse. Now a bit more increasing temperature of oceans would set free a gigantic volume of methane hydrate (Ergo Proxy note on that side^^) which would heat up the atmosphere for another 5 ° and causing mass extinction. [...]
Need for smog
The discussion about geoengineering was ongoing but time seemed to be over. The unofficial founder of WCG took a dummy who believed in the chance of "Global Dimming". [...]
After WCG founding
The provisional solution WCG fired their dummy, Green Village became a "black project" and connection to the AVATARA network.
However, a second research complex was build called "Silver Village" (placeholder name). It focused on a solution to decrease both: global warming and dimming. The result were the Atmospheric Conversion Centers (ACC). They left the project on a barely acceptable level which took mainly care of smog and went onto other researches on the wide field of nano-technology.
After Strumanderung
Muro was killed. That left a power vacuum in the Syndicate. Kumo was one of who tried to became the next big boss.
He ordered a special team to infiltrated and take over Green Village. He wanted WCG's Daodan project. GATC knew that and decided to bomb the complex. The fusion reactor exploded and contaminated in great parts the area with radioactive materials.
GUR
(*) Great Union of Resistance
(Formed by most of African and a few Middle East countries during the Great Uprising.)
From the prologue:
- A second front was on cultural basis. Developing countries and states of the Islamic world saw the annexation of their (living and) economic zones as another cheating by the Western World; the "Colonial Legacy" deemed as proof that capitalism brought only harm.
- The ongoing radicalization of both sides and smaller escalations gave WCG the possibility to propagandise the "Clash of Civilizations".
META
Idea here: having META as synergy/fusion of WCG and Syndicate.
Operation Proteus
Traton's PR attack and final hit on WCG. He polarizes the masses and let chase them state institutions like TCTF.
Shinobi
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(Shinobi: another word for ninja)
Ninja's golden age was during the sengoku period (1477 - 1573). Then the Ninjutsu schools (Ryû) began to disappear again. The rest was further reduced after Japan had lost WWII - they were prohibited to have any martial arts. But, however, some Ryû survived.
Then there was a reviving of the Ninjutsu. WCG's declaration meant also the loss of Japan. Terror groups arose to force their own Government to refuse the this union. These groups weren't very effective despite of modern weapons. Then there was a notable attack. Three men covered as security personal took down all the others and got the conference under their control. The minister had to read the group's reasons not to join WCG in front of invited reporters. This was just a warning. The three left as soon as the special forces began to storm the building. This created a new myth of the Ninjutsu.
The Shinobi absorbed other radical forces. But homeland Japan was lost, in the end they couldn't keep pace with WCG security arrangements.
They teamed up with GATC and Syndicate to fight WCG on last battle fields. It was a matter of strength again. GATC fell back - caring their wounds. And Syndicate tried to lull Shinobi by forming them into a stronger and guerilla-like force. Meanwhile - Mukade worked too closely with Syndicates. Muro's provides him a Chrysalis. (Non-TNZ idea here.) That corrupted Mukade slowly.
The Shinobi were actually never conform. But Mukade create an inner conflict. He was about to win members for the Sturmanderung ideology backed up by reinterpreted Ninjutsu philosophy.
Time passed. The resisting men were quite hopeless and said goodbye to their homeland already. They realized Sturmanderung's madness but are afraid to rise against Mukade.
If just Mukade wouldn't be...
Silver Village (place holder name)
A WCG research complex for nano-technology in the USA. It's newest project: Silver Dawn.
Silver Dawn is a terraforming project .. originally. But WCG try to abuse it as weapon since nuking Camp Sturmanderung failed.
Sturmanderung
Another idea is that Sturmanderung hasn't started with Muro. [...]
Syndicate
Streams within the Syndicate
- conservatives - BGI and now mainly dead Syndicate heads who thought/think that the situation before Muro was best
- moderates - people like Traton who supported Muro's rising for their own interests and maniacs who believed in the necessity of breaking the WCG until they realized that Muro wants Armageddon
- progressives - ideological goal: recreation of mankind because the "old form" almost destroyed itself ("time for a new evolution" and so on)
Hierarchy (suggestion)
- professional units (Striker) are "educated in the spirit of Sturmanderung"
- (Strikers aren't directly sworn to the boss or subbosses but to Sturmanderung's ideology)
- they are send to all subbosses to support their regions as long as they aren't ordered to do something that can threat Sturmanderung
- on the other side subbosses have to contribute Sturmanderung by one third of their "incomes"
- subbosses are independent in own doings within their region
- (every subboss has numerous commanders which control one provinces or city)
- commanders have their own thugs, even temporary command on Strikers needs permission from a subboss
(We still don't have an idea on Syndicate's hierarchy, this is a first try.)
WCG
historical context
The environmental crisis (also named BioCrisis) badly damaged agriculture, industry based on it, and immovables.
That kick off a wave of insurance payments. And banks had to prevent becoming insolvent by cancelling any more credits to the people and the governments which were already blank because of public outcry for financial help of reconstruction. That again caused inflation.
founding
How was this going to be solved? A reset seemed the only way out.
They banished all old debts: covered by dissolving the states; a more resistant agriculture was set up which included new production machines, genetically modified plants, hydroponic farms for wasteland, [...] [...]
Side notes:
- Black Projects
- TCTF: Black Ops
Characters
Minor characters are:
- Dakosta (takes major action much later)
- Kumo (pro-BGI Syndicate subboss)
- Lynn (GATC soldier, TCTF SWAT/BlackOps)
- Manson (GATC soldier, TCTF SWAT/BlackOps)
- Rayn (WCG president)
- Rockwell (MissionFailed-guy, candidate for BlackOps)
- Saomi (Muro's fency, believes in Sturmanderung -- optional character)
- Takashi (Traton's security chef)
- Taylor (friend of Nishio)
- Tosahiri (TCTF, Dakosta's watchdog)
Clarg
WCG member. He'll become president of the new "government" (just another regime which I would call META =) ).
Daya
A daodanized Fury which loss her faith in Syndicate's Sturmanderung ideology.
One of RS's topics will be military aspects. (Compare it with Metal Gear if you like.) Has a soldier to follow his administration's order no matter what? Or are there limits. If yes which and how to act in such a case? What can be done alone? .. things like that. She is supposed to discuss those with other characters - with Mukade and Nishio for sure so far.
Hasegawa
Well, actually, somehow, I think the real Hasegawa is dead... (It's just my feeling as wannabe writer.)
Jareth
He's a WCG "pool reporter". For example he blandished the Wilderness Preserve public reports and new technology released from "controlled research". However, he don't very like to be "conform" but wages fits...
His idol is (insert French name here^^).
Konoko
She tries to fight for her own life now. GATC makes her realize that Hasegawa could be still alive. They ensure to support her search in case she joins them. She does (for the start).
Miller
He belongs to the inner GATC circle and know almost everything. (Maybe he has access to AVATARA.)
Mukade
Is it really him or an altered Hasegawa? Open question.
Nishio
He don't understand the sense of life so he search his answers in philosophies. He will portrays several directions but ends almost in nihilisms which stands for his world's current spirit of the age .. Zeitgeist.
Traton
One of the subbosses who fight for the boss position - and he'll succeed.
But on that way he have to take care on inner enemies like Kumo and Saomi (optional).
Chapters // synopsis so far
Prologue: Smouldering Ember (Part I)
"Schwelende Glut" (PartI)
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Chapter 1: Bad News
"Schlechte Nachrichten"
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Chapter 2: Situation Clearing
"Situationsklärung"
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Chapter 3: Daily Shadows
"Alltagsschatten"; correct translation: "Everyday Life Shadows"
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Chapter 4: Burnt Soil
"Trügerische Ruhe" - "Deceitful Peace" again changed to: "Verbrannte Erde"
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Chapter 5: Neverending
"Problem über alles"
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Chapter 6: Operation Proteus
"Operation Proteus"
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... work in progress
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Chapter 14: Smouldering Ember (Part II) (WIP)
"Schwelende Glut" (Part II)
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