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 :Rayn (WCG president)
 :Rockwell (MissionFailed-guy, candidate for BlackOps)
-:Saomi (Muro's fency, believes in Sturmanderung -- optional character)
+:Saomi (Muro's fency, believes in Sturmanderung)
 :Takashi (Traton's security chef)
 :Taylor (friend of Nishio)
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-*The prologue is an outlook into the future. -- The new “government” want to celebrate WCG’s fall after one year, having a speech in the Tokio Dom. But instead “terrorists” comes into the stadium and tells the full story to the audience... The prologue ends in the middle of the story. (We don't want to spoil.)
+*The prologue is an outlook into the future. -- The new “government” wants to celebrate WCG’s fall after one year having a speech in the Tokio Dom. But instead “terrorists” come into the stadium and tells the full story to the audience... The prologue ends in the middle of the story. (We don't want to spoil.)
 * current German beta [[Restless_Souls/BC0|HERE]]
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-*Fans might ask want happens right after Konoko battled Muro. Well, this is what the first Chapter starts with. In additional they meets the MissionFailed-guy.
+*Fans might ask what happened right after Konoko battled Muro. Well, this is what the first Chapter starts with. In additional they meets the MissionFailed-guy.
-*WCG is more or less shocked and the Syndicate "headless". Traton (a new character) want to take his chance of becoming the next big boss and flies into the old headquarters. Before that he take care of a mountain compound. It is of no longer use and a threat as evidence for TCTF and WGC so he activates the self-destruction. He picks up a hostile but injured and unconscious unit, his name; Manson. His cybernetics wasn't TCTF-like. That made Traton curious. He release the man on place with a modified radio set, ready to pass a copy transmission at the Syndicate...
+*WCG is more or less shocked and the Syndicate became "headless". Traton wants to take his chance of becoming the next big boss and flies into the old headquarters. Before that he activates the self-destruction of the mountain compound. It is of no longer use and a evidence of their activities towards TCTF and WGC. He picks up a hostile but injured and unconscious TCTF unit, his name is Manson. But his cybernetics wasn't TCTF-like. That made Traton curious. He release the man on place with a modified radio set, ready to pass a copy transmission at the Syndicate...
 *Konoko is back at the TCTF but gets a chance working for an independent power called GATC. They decoy Konoko’s self-interest – promising to support the search of her missing father Hasegawa.
 * current German beta [[Restless_Souls/BC1|HERE]]
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-==Chapter 4: Burnt Soil==
+==Chapter 4: Scorched Earth==
-<strike>"Trügerische Ruhe" - "Deceitful Peace"</strike> again changed to: "Verbrannte Erde"
+<!--changed from "Trügerische Ruhe" - "Deceitful Peace"-->"Verbrannte Erde"
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-* Burnt Soil... GATC stops Green Village’s infiltration by bombing it like "if we cannot have it then they too". -- A official explanation to GATC soldiers: "In additional: Negotiations between Syndicate and WCG becomes that way more unlikely.")
+* Scorched earth... GATC stops Green Village’s infiltration by bombing it like "if we cannot have it then they too". -- A official explanation to GATC soldiers: "In additional: Negotiations between Syndicate and WCG becomes that way more unlikely.")
 * But the effect was under their expectancy. Some complex areas are still intact.
 * At same time poison air reach first cities.