Oni2:Slaves of War/Polylectiloquy

A proposal for an Oni 2

Not so much of a story as a setting, at this point at least.

Framed as a Q&A with multiple possible answers to some Qs, when I can't make up my mind or want to see how a certain idea sounds when I write it out.

(bold indicates an answer has been decided upon)

How far after Oni should Oni 2 be?

A. Starting right after Oni (days or months later) would be interesting. There would be a lot more energy at this time period than any other point we could place the sequel at.

B. Long enough that the "new world" is shaping up (a few to several years), so we get an answer to Konoko's question at the end of Oni as to how society will turn out, or what the intermediate stage will be, anyway.

C. So far after Oni that Konoko is gone and a new generation of characters can be introduced. It would be hard to pull people into a sequel without one familiar face (not that we couldn't work out something with clones or what-have-you), but this would free us from worrying about Konoko being too powerful for a sequel.

What happened to the WCG?

It falls apart when member nations fight each other to annex land with working ACCs.

What happened to the TCTF?

Also fragmented. The regional branches are now working for their own nations like National Guard forces.

If Griffin's still kicking when Oni 2 takes place, what's he up to?

A. He could be the head of his country's police (what country is that, now?)

B. He might have disliked the new national thing and is heading his own "rogue" organization. What would it do?

1. Work on getting Chrysalises to people.

2. Work on keeping Chrysalises from people. Those things are dangerous! If Mai is promoting the use of Chrysalises, this would make them enemies again.

I favor the notion of B2, which keeps Griffin as the enemy, but this time an enemy with a solid motivation, not being a jerk (Oni 1's Griffin) or just maniacal (Oni 1's Muro). He knows that humanity can benefit from the Chrysalis in the short run but also feels strongly that giving everyone the Chrysalis will be opening Pandora's Box as the things develop inside people, so he fights to keep them out of the public's hands. This also places him in the anti-authoritarian position, as a rogue or guerilla, which is quite interesting to imagine.

What happened to the Syndicate?

A. Broken into pieces by infighting and panic over Cataclysm; supplying arms to groups fighting to take over neigboring countries with working ACCs.

B. Broken into pieces. One piece (Muro's cronies) has the data on Daodans and is trying to sell it to nations or corporations. This might even give them the edge they need to become the main branch of the Neo-Syndicate. They might have control over a whole nation or two. Heh. Syndicastan.

How many ACCs were there, and how many broken?

There's absolutely no facts to go on (is that true? I thought I saw a number somewhere), so we have to arbitrate. Let's say that a Europe-sized nation has 3-5 on average. They don't cover the whole country, so only parts are inhabited. So if half of a country's ACCs goes offline, and the neighbor country has some working ACCs, and they were never that friendly with their neighbors, they will probably try to win over that territory. Thus starts World War III, but in an every-man-for-himself way, not Allies vs. Axis or something similar.

How bad is the pollution?

People centered around broken ACCs would migrate to working ACCs, and there would be a crush of immigrants; lots of fighting and ugliness.

How did the public get their Chrysalises? How did society change?

A. It's not going to be quick, that's for darn sure. Inevitably large areas where nations are poorer will get neglected. Most of Africa would die for sure. Most of the overpopulated nations like India and China would die; their governments don't have the funds to even think about supplying Chrysalises to over a billion people.

So black people would be rare in Oni 2? Interesting thought. It would make a black character all the more unusual.

B. We shouldn't assume that more ACCs can't be built. Perhaps this is what the nations are focusing on, because of the difficulties with Daodan work.

C. The richer nations will be in upheaval because the high-ups will get theirs first.

Where do they come from?

The Wilderness. Normally they're hostile, like the plant that killed Jamie, but when grown with human DNA in them, they become accustomed to it and can be implanted in a human.

But what do they look like, and what do they do out there? They could just be some flower or something, but it would be more interesting if they were more significant to the altered Wilderness.

Can Chrysalises make a new human on their own without being implanted?

Kerr says that the Daodan organism is a hyper-evolved clone. Clones are independent. He also says the organism was not intended to be implanted. So, presumably, yes, they can. If so, would this benefit anyone?

See "Who was Mukade?" below.

Did Muro actually die?

If not, then he almost automatically would be the villain in Oni 2. He seems past redeeming. At the least, if there's a new big bad dude in town, he will join up with this new guy, all the while planning to overthrow him. But if he doesn't succeed in overthrowing the boss by the end of the game, it makes him seem weak compared to his old self.

If that's the case, we may want him out of the way so we can tread new ground. There seems to be little depth that could be built into his character without retconning and making him out to be somehow well-meaning, which seems lame.

Did Barabas or Mukade die? Either could simply have been KOed. We're not told.

A. "Yes to Barabas, No to Mukade" could explain the Daodan spike after beating Barabas but none after beating Mukade. (Assuming killing leads to a Daodan spike, which Mukade himself indicated it did. This would also mean that Muro is definitely dead.)

B. "Yes to both", and the difference in reaction was that Barabas was semi-Imago and Mukade was not.

But Mukade would have to be semi-Imago to have those powers. So this is not an option.

C. "No to Barabas and Yes to Mukade" isn't desirable simply because Mukade is so much more interesting than Barabas that it is unfair to give us more Barabas and no Mukade in a sequel.

D. "No to both". The difference in reaction could also be that Barabas was a Daodan host and Mukade was an experiment of Navarre's (but then why does Mukade indicate he and Mai are the same and they both are being replaced by something inside them?). I just don't know what to do with Barabas, but I would love to see Mukade out of armor, as a new man. Whoever he is….

Who really was/is Mukade?

A. Straight, boring answer is that he was a ninja, experimentally modified by a Chrysalis. This isn't necessarily a bad answer, as if we want him to live, he can still be alive in Oni 2 and we can build on his character. It's only really boring if he died in Oni.

B. More interesting answer is that he's related to Mai somehow. Since we don't know what happened to her dad, he could be Daddy.

1. But that seems kind of silly, and since when did he turn from professor to master ninja?

2. What if he is a clone of dear old dad, but one gone horribly wrong? The clone was made to serve as a body for a Chrysalis, but was unstable. This would explain Mukade's fatalistic ready-to-die-when-the-Chrysalis-take-over attitude in Oni.

3. He could be a Daodan clone! Raised as part of the Syndicate would have twisted him.

4. He might be Bertram Navarre. One can still ask how a scientist becomes a ninja, but we don't know Navarre at all, so if we want to write him as an athletic guy, or say that he built a suit to help him fight, we can. This would also explain why he doesn't give Konoko a Daodan surge when he is defeated, if he was Navarre or a product of Navarre's own non-Daodan experiments. But he indicates to Konoko in their encounter that they are both Daodan hosts, so this is probably a no-go.

If still alive, what is Mukade doing?

A. He might still be evil, but it seems like he would have self-destructed by now. That kind of personality couldn't last for years without mellowing. If still evil, he probably is running a branch of the disjointed Syndicate.

B. He might have totally turned around after being broken at Konoko's hands. He doesn't even hold a grudge against her. He has resigned himself to serving the people by alternating Daodan harvesting and experimenting with Neo-Agriculture. He is likely to want to avoid fighting so it doesn't bring back his bad tendencies.

What would Mai be doing as the Cataclysm happened?

She and Griffin are the only ones we know of with the knowledge to work with Chrysalises. Well, the Syndicate might have Muro's data. But Mai would be helping people get them, but not in a Florence Nightingale way; she's no doting nurse. She'd be wherever there's a fight over collecting Daodans from the Wilderness or quelling international issues one hotspot at a time.

She might also have issues about her choices at the end of Oni.

Does Mai end up going Imago, at least by the time of Oni 2?

A. Option 1 is that for some reason she doesn't, but the only way I can think of that it wouldn't happen is if she stopped fighting, and that seems unlikely.

B. Option 2 is that she does, but she can un-transform too, so normally she resembles the Mai we knew. This is definitely the option that is most in line with animé tradition.

C. Option 3 is that she is permanently transformed. So how does this affect her? It depends on what she looks like, right?

1. Either she's hideous and she hides her visage like Mukade…

2. Or she's not that different-looking, and goes around like normal. If she transforms like my sketch indicates (need to upload), then she could mask that transformation with sunglasses and a facial mask, like synthetic skin, that makes it look normal-colored.

Isn't a fully-developed Mai going to be too powerful to make the game challenging?

A. See ZOE 2. You're massively more powerful at the end than you were at the start of ZOE. But it's still a challenge. The key is just having tons of enemies or one very strong enemy.

B. She might not always be transformed or able to transform.

C. There's the amnesia option proposed elsewhere, but amnesia wouldn't remove her strength, only her skill. Still, having to re-learn fighting would make the game more challenging. But I am not a fan of a contrived "restart" that wants to drag a character back to where they were.

What would Oni 2 be about?

A. Well, it could be about more than one thing. I would like to see Mai trying to find her father. It should be for more than sentimental reasons, because those would seem trivial when the world is on fire. Perhaps she needs data only he has.

Certainly if she's looking for him, she has to find him. It would be a total tease not to reveal what he's been up to all this time. Maybe finding him is just the start of Act Two, as his work sets a new plot in motion.

B. It could also be about a new development in the Wilderness….

C. Perhaps man is trying to burn away the mutated Wilderness to re-establish a normal ecosphere and Mai feels this is not the right path.

D. Maybe the Syndicate is selling Chrysalises, and Mai and company are trying to prevent it.

E. Maybe someone has released a virus that kills the Chrysalis. Particularly if the Chrysalises being sold are based on one set of genes, this makes the implanted population vulnerable.

Maybe it makes those implantees change somehow.