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"Global markets stabilize after political earthquake" | "Global markets stabilize after political earthquake" | ||
"Growing world population exceeds | "Growing world population exceeds ecological footprint two times" | ||
[[image:Dream_3_ecological_activist_Jamie.jpg|thumb]] | [[image:Dream_3_ecological_activist_Jamie.jpg|thumb]] | ||
"Pesticides contaminate more and more farmland" | "Pesticides contaminate more and more farmland" | ||
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Tubes were not needed anymore as the CO2 was filtered internally. The carbon was captured and the O2 brought back. | Tubes were not needed anymore as the CO2 was filtered internally. The carbon was captured and the O2 brought back. | ||
At the gates there were | At the gates there were disinfection means. A soft-and-yet-strong blazing rain of particle beams was fired from all directions. The cold plasma shined bluish and killed ever possible pathogen on the suit's surface. | ||
They were five in total, all clustered around the long, metallic table. | They were five in total, all clustered around the long, metallic table. | ||
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Nobody has seen such a scene before. The corpse named Jamie had demineralized, porous looking bones, liquefied organs and melted skin. | Nobody has seen such a scene before. The corpse named Jamie had demineralized, porous looking bones, liquefied organs and melted skin. | ||
Her eyes were missing and the mouth | Her eyes were missing and the mouth wide open. | ||
It was as if she screamed silently. | It was as if she screamed silently. | ||
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Curtis noticed a deformation under the skin. He shouted, but it was too late. "No. Wait!" | Curtis noticed a deformation under the skin. He shouted, but it was too late. "No. Wait!" | ||
The decomposing body had built up some gas | The decomposing body had built up some gas. Sprays of liquids splashed over the crew's suits. An alarm went off. Hanna dropped backwards. | ||
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Hanna's quarantine room was in a white gray. It almost looked like one of TCTF's maximum security prison cells. She sat in the corner on her bed, the back leaning against the wall and the legs drawn to the chest. Hanna hold a pen-shaped device in left hand. A beam of blue light flowed | Hanna's quarantine room was in a white gray. It almost looked like one of TCTF's maximum security prison cells. She sat in the corner on her bed, the back leaning against the wall and the legs drawn to the chest. Hanna hold a pen-shaped device in her left hand. A beam of blue light flowed over the other hand. It looked all red and dry, interrupted by yellow patches. The pen move back and fort but her glassy eyes couldn't find a sign of recovery or at least a subtle change. And so she continued. | ||
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