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--I found her! -- she was still alive! She needed to breathe and I gave her the air, and she needs your water now! (''growing upset'') She deserves my help, not yours!�? | --I found her! -- she was still alive! She needed to breathe and I gave her the air, and she needs your water now! (''growing upset'') She deserves my help, not yours!�? | ||
''The place appears something like a former rail depot area in the middle of nowhere.'' | |||
''There are several containers left, and probably a number of barracks or few improvised buildings.'' | |||
''The anonymous plain fades out into a dusty mist a mile away from the brawl.'' | |||
'''OLDMAN''' (''he is perched on a small container –the small girl sits on his side. She is clearly afraid, as she knows no one but Konoko. Oldman observes the mess below in silence, then he rouses suddenly''--) Gentlemen! I said not one by one! Hit her all at once. She is starving: I know the lady, she cannot dodge forever everything you throw her way. | '''OLDMAN''' (''he is perched on a small container –the small girl sits on his side. She is clearly afraid, as she knows no one but Konoko. Oldman observes the mess below in silence, then he rouses suddenly''--) Gentlemen! I said not one by one! Hit her all at once. She is starving: I know the lady, she cannot dodge forever everything you throw her way. | ||
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(''small hiatus, Oldman has probably ordered his men to clear the field'') | (''small hiatus, Oldman has probably ordered his men to clear the field'') | ||
(''SMALLGIRL stands apart but from her distance she cannot hear their words'') | ('''SMALLGIRL''' ''stands apart but from her distance she cannot hear their words'') | ||
(''We see the other ones helping their pales and carrying away the two of them who cannot stand up. Konoko is breathing deeply, closing her eyes- she looks as miserable as ever in defeat'') | (''We see the other ones helping their pales and carrying away the two of them who cannot stand up. Konoko is breathing deeply, closing her eyes- she looks as miserable as ever in defeat'') | ||