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'''SMALLGIRL''': Yes -- but she seems so distant, sometimes.
'''SMALLGIRL''': Yes -- but she seems so distant, sometimes.
(''the brawl has just ended'': KONOKO ''and five opponents lay on the ground''.  (''exhausted, groaning'').
(''the brawl has just ended'': KONOKO ''and five opponents lay on the ground''.  (''exhausted, groaning'').


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;''(''SMALLGIRL'' stands apart but from her distance she cannot hear their words)
;''(''SMALLGIRL'' stands apart but from her distance she cannot hear their words)


;''(We see the other ones helping their pal<strike>e</strike>s (??? [[User:Geyser|geyser]]) and carrying away the two of them who cannot stand up. Konoko is breathing deeply, closing her eyes- she looks as miserable as ever in defeat'')
;''(We see the other ones helping their pals (??? [[User:Geyser|geyser]], "pals" not "pales" [[User:Guido|guido]]) and carrying away the two of them who cannot stand up. Konoko is breathing deeply, closing her eyes- she looks as miserable as ever in defeat'')


'''OLDMAN''' (''laughs, as he approaches to her) (he is sincerely amused, there is no malevolence in his voice'') No-- Emery, let her be --
'''OLDMAN''' (''laughs, as he approaches to her) (he is sincerely amused, there is no malevolence in his voice'') No-- Emery, let her be --
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-- No… it is not the money they are given --
-- No… it is not the money they are given --
:our governments only want us to remember why we need them –  
:<strike>our governments only want us to remember why we need them – </strike> ([[Guido:User|guido]])
:but now at edge of oblivion--many have realized that a promise of order and peace is no more enough, and there are no more protectors we can commit our obedient consent.
:<strike>but now at edge of oblivion--many have realized that a promise of order and peace is no more enough, and there are no more protectors we can commit our obedient consent. </strike>


;KONOKO ''(painfully raises on her knees)
;KONOKO ''(painfully raises on her knees)
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