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 :makes you think
-Now it is clearly a flashback, Konoko on a bridge over the same channel (a large motorway bridge).
+Now it is clearly a flashback. '''KONOKO''' on a bridge over the same channel (a large motorway bridge).
-She notices the small girl on the shore, drawing dirty water from an old oil tank (sic? [[User:Geyser|geyser]]).
+'''KONOKO''''' notices '''SMALLGIRL''': she is on the shore, drawing water with an old tank (sic? [[User:Geyser|geyser]]).
 :raindrops of yesterday are now dried up