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Setting: Laboratory. A room with, among other things, a capsule, inside of which is a [[:Image: | Setting: Laboratory. A room with, among other things, a capsule, inside of which is a [[:Image:Unknown Fan - Young Mai.jpg|quiet seven year-old girl with a Band-Aid on her arm]] from a fall she got while running yesterday. Today she has been implanted with an alien life-form in her appendix. A middle-aged man is hovering over her protectively, as the instruments continue to monitor her. His name is Dr. [[Kerr]]. | ||
''Kerr, thinking back to earlier in the day, remembers the spasms Konoko went through, and how her little body almost gave out under the stress. The readings on her vital signs were fluctuating wildly. Now, they are even and low, normal for a sleeping girl.'' | ''Kerr, thinking back to earlier in the day, remembers the spasms Konoko went through, and how her little body almost gave out under the stress. The readings on her vital signs were fluctuating wildly. Now, they are even and low, normal for a sleeping girl.'' | ||
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Also, patients who have appendectomies go home after one or two days according to my one minute of research, so it's not too odd that Kerr would want to get her out of the lab as soon as possible and back into her "normal" surroundings. I do, however, think that she would still be all bandaged up from her surgery, so she wouldn't be taking a bath. That's a plot-hole, right there. Well, I'm throwing this out there for now as a rough idea. I'll think of a way out of the plot-hole later. | Also, patients who have appendectomies go home after one or two days according to my one minute of research, so it's not too odd that Kerr would want to get her out of the lab as soon as possible and back into her "normal" surroundings. I do, however, think that she would still be all bandaged up from her surgery, so she wouldn't be taking a bath. That's a plot-hole, right there. Well, I'm throwing this out there for now as a rough idea. I'll think of a way out of the plot-hole later. | ||
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