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:That gliding sequence can be a semi-flashback (day)dream of Mai's (the story would start when she wakes up). Thus some details can be surreal : her glider, for instance, can stay in the air for longer than "expected". | :That gliding sequence can be a semi-flashback (day)dream of Mai's (the story would start when she wakes up). Thus some details can be surreal : her glider, for instance, can stay in the air for longer than "expected". | ||
:Landing at the end... or not. Also, the picture of destruction can be exaggerated, or echoing other post-apocalyptic references (e.g. in manga). Various dream-friendly artistic effects, too. | :Landing at the end... or not. Also, the picture of destruction can be exaggerated, or echoing other post-apocalyptic references (e.g. in manga). Various dream-friendly artistic effects, too. | ||
:If the narrative covers | :If the narrative covers the skipped period in time (e.g. four years), then you don't even need to put a note saying "FOUR YEARS LATER". | ||
:As for the smooth transition from one narrator to the other, [[User_talk:Geyser/Test#Wucraft|Avatar's plane]] can be shown flying away into no man's land at first, shrink to a tiny winged speck in the distance, and then come back as a gliding Konoko. | :As for the smooth transition from one narrator to the other, [[User_talk:Geyser/Test#Wucraft|Avatar's plane]] can be shown flying away into no man's land at first, shrink to a tiny winged speck in the distance, and then come back as a gliding Konoko. | ||
;[[User:Geyser|geyser]] | ;[[User:Geyser|geyser]] | ||
:As for the landscape over which she'd glide, I'd suggest a snow-covered wasteland (acid/toxic snow, anybody?). Then again, since a 4-year fast-forward is covered by the scene, different seasons can be pictured : spring/summer/autumn would be even closer to Nausicaä's universe (see [[Wilderness Preserve]]). | :As for the landscape over which she'd glide, I'd suggest a snow-covered wasteland (acid/toxic snow, anybody?). Then again, since a 4-year fast-forward is covered by the scene, different seasons can be pictured : spring/summer/autumn would be even closer to Nausicaä's universe (see [[Wilderness Preserve]]). | ||
:The time scale can thus be distorted, similarly to the way (day)[[dream]]s are experienced : the whole (day)dream/nightmare seems to be played back super-fast at the moment you wake up. | :The time scale can thus be distorted, similarly to the way (day)[[dream]]s are experienced : the whole (day)dream/nightmare seems to be played back super-fast at the moment you wake up. | ||