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;Sorry Geyser if this edit caused some problems.
;Sorry Geyser if this edit caused some problems. Also, anyone who wants to comment/add/criticise he can, only please don't delete my stuff and write at the beginning of Old brainstorming part.
*We all know story of the first level. Griffin wants to test Konoko's abilities *on field*, so he sends her on quite an easy mission. But when Chung is found dead and Syndicate's armored truck attempts to escape, things starting to be more complicated than Griffin wanted and he is forced to let Konoko ivestigate further.
*We all know story of the first level. Griffin wants to test Konoko's abilities *on field*, so he sends her on quite an easy mission. But when Chung is found dead and Syndicate's armored truck attempts to escape, things starting to be more complicated than Griffin wanted and he is forced to let Konoko ivestigate further.
*My story is similar but I am trying to make it more literature-like (altough I doubt its qualities ^_^'), not just background reason for beating thugs. So...
*My story is similar but I am trying to make it more literature-like (altough I doubt its qualities ^_^'), not just background reason for beating thugs. So...
:;Training level
:;Training level (level 0)
:Konoko's doing her daily exercise (training program will change a bit, no learning how to walk, run etc.). At the end, when last drones are defeated (in shooting range), Casey "surename" enters the room. Casey is Konoko's close friend since they were children, because he was the only one other person with same age as Konoko in the TCTF. But he isn't her boyfriend.
:Konoko's doing her daily exercise (training program will change a bit, no learning how to walk, run etc.). At the end, when last drones are defeated (in shooting range), Casey "surename" enters the room. Casey is Konoko's close friend since they were children, because he was the only one other person with same age as Konoko in the TCTF. But he isn't her boyfriend.
EDIT: This thing is derived from original message posted by some Bungie guy on the oldest forum. He said Casey was planned to be her boyfriend. END EDIT
EDIT: This thing is derived from original message posted by some Bungie guy on the oldest forum. He said Casey was planned to be her boyfriend. END EDIT
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::=> If Konoko loses Casey seems to be delighted. We can learn from his short talk with Konoko that in fact Konoko was always "one step ahead" eq. she was always better. Griffin calls for Konoko. Scene fades into Griffin's office, there are Griffin and some secretary. Konoko enters office (eg se enters camera view). She is talking with Griffin. At the beginning Griffin asks if something happened. Konoko doesn't know about anything important, but she mentions her training and loss with Casey. Things then go the same as if Konoko wins, same forking, only when Casey leaves (Konoko knows) or Konoko leaves (Konoko doesn't know) there is short passage when we can "read Griffin's thoughts". He stands for a while, thinking about possible influencies of something called Chrysalis. Then both scenes continue to the end of the level.
::=> If Konoko loses Casey seems to be delighted. We can learn from his short talk with Konoko that in fact Konoko was always "one step ahead" eq. she was always better. Griffin calls for Konoko. Scene fades into Griffin's office, there are Griffin and some secretary. Konoko enters office (eg se enters camera view). She is talking with Griffin. At the beginning Griffin asks if something happened. Konoko doesn't know about anything important, but she mentions her training and loss with Casey. Things then go the same as if Konoko wins, same forking, only when Casey leaves (Konoko knows) or Konoko leaves (Konoko doesn't know) there is short passage when we can "read Griffin's thoughts". He stands for a while, thinking about possible influencies of something called Chrysalis. Then both scenes continue to the end of the level.


:;Level 1: Syndicate warehouse (aka Trial run)
:;Trial run (level 1-Syndicate warehouse)
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:Camera fades into Griffin's lab. We can see secretary, which leaves lab immediately, Griffin and Kerr. Player comes into arguement of those two. Kerr has doubts about Konoko going on her first mission alone. He suggets giving her some elite agent as it is usual. He highlights that Konoko hasn't been yet in a stressful situation, when she has to decide only on her own. Camera now changes its location, while Kerr still talks. Now we can see Konoko, wearing her blue cop uniform, walking in the street. There are many ordinary people, walking or standing in small groups. Kerr continues: More, obviously she hasn't used to the max powers of her established Chrysalis. Kerr is afraid this whole "trial run" thing will throw state of the Chrysalis off balance. Results can be fatal. Griffin starts his speech. Yes, he is too aware of possible risks. Camera goes back to the Griffin's office. Griffin continues: But there is nothing to be afraid of. Shinatama, SLD with neural bond to Konoko can monitor her all the time, so Griffin can react on any situation which can happen. Plus, there is Casey hidden in the warehouse "for all cases". Camera goes back to Konoko, which is now near the entrance (that one which leads to mirrored starting room and has no furniture) of the warehouse. Griffin continues: Goal of this mission is to see how will Konoko react on field and possible influences on the status of the Chrysalis. Kerr wishes good luck to Konoko, as she enters the warehouse. Door locks after a second and player takes control. Game begins.
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==Old brainstorming==
==Old brainstorming==
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