User talk:Guido/Wishlist/Part 3
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- Composition of the second cut
- The girl is lying on the ground
- Her hand is casting a shadow on Mai's chest
- Kon is in a position to hang her head down
- So, where's the sun again?
- geyser 22:50, 2 October 2006 (CEST)
- Deadly fungi
- A reference to Nausicaa, I would believe.
- May be worth a reference to the episode of Jamie Hasegawa's death as well.
- geyser 22:50, 2 October 2006 (CEST)
- Good imagery, but push the fungus too far and people will accuse you of stealing from miyazaki.
- I understand he's a major influence and the comparison will be made nonetheless, but trying to minimize direct parallels will help.
- The forest
- That one is quite interesting, especially because of the Red Riding Hood image.
- I think I'll be putting my thoughts on the image page for now, and then move them around.
- geyser 22:50, 2 October 2006 (CEST)
File:GUIDO whitestripes.jpg
roughsketch
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- "Through the small openings it casts white stripes onto the snakes of mist swarming amidst the ruins."
- How on earth do you expect to render this? Just curious.
- geyser 23:04, 2 October 2006 (CEST)
more or less this way...
- Guido 16:42, 25 November 2006 (CEST)
- "KONOKO notices SMALLGIRL on the shore, drawing water with an old tank"
- Picture, please. For the life of me, I don't get what's happening.
- How can you draw water (e.g. from the river?) "with" a tank?
- What, like with a cup? Dump it in, wait until it fills up, pull it out?
- Might be a bit heavy for a little girl (starving/dying/whatever)?
- What, like with a cup? Dump it in, wait until it fills up, pull it out?
- The first version had "Smallgirl in the shoreline drawing dirt water on an old oil tank".
- "ON"??? Do you mean she was drinking rainwater off the top of a barrel?
- geyser 04:43, 3 October 2006 (CEST)