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→Adding BGI in little places first: added hint at Iron Demon to Ch. 2
02:26
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so much for symmetry: here's a fourth point that's too important to leave out (it's always been in the Overview); also, clarity on the glider
03:05
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added another point under "Big places"; that makes three points under each section, how interesting
01:27
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→Filling in narrative gaps: maybe this was why I originally had her using a parachute at this point
19:51
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Created page with "It would be odd if a new level inserted into the story had no effect on the surrounding levels. Some changes will be necessary to even explain why the BGI level is happening...."
02:01
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