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(Created page with "It would be odd if a new level inserted into the story had no effect on the surrounding levels. Some changes will be necessary to even explain why the BGI level is happening....") |
m (→Filling in narrative gaps: maybe this was why I originally had her using a parachute at this point) |
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* Konoko seated in the pilot's seat, pressing some buttons to set the auto-pilot. | * Konoko seated in the pilot's seat, pressing some buttons to set the auto-pilot. | ||
* Getting up from her seat to head towards a side door. | * Getting up from her seat to head towards a side door. | ||
* Landing on the roof using her glider. | * Landing on the roof using her glider. (Does she still have this after Chapter 12? Wasn't it left behind? Perhaps she just parachutes out of the dropship.) | ||
* Dropping onto the outer ledge of a window. | * Dropping onto the outer ledge of a window. | ||
* Entering through the window, and jumping to grab a cable and slide down to the light bank. | * Entering through the window, and jumping to grab a cable and slide down to the light bank. |