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Genre-wise Oni is for the most part action and science-fiction and in some parts a detective story and drama. Since action is more suited for movies, games and other visual mediums the | Genre-wise Oni is for the most part action and science-fiction and in some parts a detective story and drama. Since action is more suited for movies, games and other visual mediums the prequel and sequels in their written form concentrate less on action but the others, forenamed genres. Oni CB is meant to close story gaps while exploring possible past events. | ||
Special notes are set in bracket signs []. | |||
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While Hanna was flying to Russia she received messages from Curtis. | While Hanna was flying to Russia she received messages from Curtis. | ||
"You wanted me to | "You wanted me to contact you when we know the source of your MRSA strain. I must warn you, it could be an emotional burden if I tell you." | ||
"Hey I'm no sissy like you." | "Hey I'm no sissy like you." | ||
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"I peeled potatoes." | "I peeled potatoes." | ||
He laughed. "That's the world we are living in now, ''watch out for the killer potatoes''. ... Ah... Sorry." | He laughed. "That's the world we are living in now, ''watch out for the killer potatoes''. ... Ah ... Sorry." | ||
"It's okay, Curtis. I asked for it. -- Thank you for telling me the truth." | "It's okay, Curtis. I asked for it. -- Thank you for telling me the truth." | ||
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The fact that the sample was stolen from a high-security lab leads to conclusion that the Syndicate or another highly criminal group looks for a bio-weapon. | The fact that the sample was stolen from a high-security lab leads to conclusion that the Syndicate or another highly criminal group looks for a bio-weapon. | ||
Hanna used this conclusion in the meeting with Green Village's human resource manager. The director suspects her to be part of that group as her time of arrival seems an unlikely | Hanna used this conclusion in the meeting with Green Village's human resource manager. The director suspects her to be part of that group as her time of arrival seems an unlikely coincidence. They decided to give her a position in hope to learn more about that terror group. | ||
[1 - At a later time Kimura also | [1 - At a later time Kimura also succeeded in stealing a sample from Green Village. The incidence has no connection to Hanna whatsoever so her monitoring is set to standard like that of other GV employees. A nuclear suspicion remains.] | ||
[2 - Hanna visited Walker during her limited days of vacations. She left him messages with reference to GATC, a direct hint to the letters of the genetic code. "Look for GATC." The anti-espionage section of WCG misunderstood this as a reference to GATC, the merc company that partly destroyed GV in an later airstrike. Right after the cataclysm the WCG was in panic and put Hanna due to that misunderstanding on their terrorist execution list. Can Konoko save her?] | [2 - Hanna visited Walker during her limited days of vacations. She left him messages with reference to GATC, a direct hint to the letters of the genetic code. "Look for GATC." The anti-espionage section of WCG misunderstood this as a reference to GATC, the merc company that partly destroyed GV in an later airstrike. Right after the cataclysm the WCG was in panic and put Hanna due to that misunderstanding on their terrorist execution list. Can Konoko save her?] | ||
[3 - Konoko went to GV in search for her father. | [3 - Konoko went to GV in search for her father. Unfortunately, her presents marks the others sci inmates as also terrorists. WCG had jump to conclusions after finding out that Hanna, Bertram and the others had been using secret communications means. This made the WCG send military in the area.] | ||
[4 - Green Village try to receive outside help by releasing SLD data for mass production. The androids could be used to do outdoor work in the highly toxic environment. The idea is to make technology available to the people so they survive the black season while the civilian support them with things that Green Village does not have. The WCG is raging that their prestige sci prison leaked technologies they kept 30 years secret from civilians and the Syndicate. Meanwhile BGI also entered the quarantine zone of Green Village...] | [4 - Green Village try to receive outside help by releasing SLD data for mass production. The androids could be used to do outdoor work in the highly toxic environment. The idea is to make technology available to the people so they survive the black season while the civilian support them with things that Green Village does not have. The WCG is raging that their prestige sci prison leaked technologies they kept 30 years secret from civilians and the Syndicate. Meanwhile BGI also entered the quarantine zone of Green Village...] | ||
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Hasegawa: "Uh, I mean..." | Hasegawa: "Uh, I mean..." | ||
Kerr had followed Hasegawa's eyes and noticed her reaction. His dark expression was possibly meant for his friend but by having turned around the old lady stood to him face to face. She looked like she would freaking out any moment. She pulled at the leash of her Hachiko. | Kerr had followed Hasegawa's eyes and noticed her reaction. His dark expression was possibly meant for his friend but by having turned around the old lady stood to him face to face. She looked like she would freaking out any moment. She pulled at the leash of her [[wikipedia:Hachikō|Hachiko]]. | ||
Kerr: "We maybe should discuss the details at another location." | Kerr: "We maybe should discuss the details at another location." | ||
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Hasegawa unlocked the door and went through. | Hasegawa unlocked the door and went through. | ||
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Kerr and Hasegawa were sitting in their array of fused | Kerr and Hasegawa were sitting in their array of fused containers and ate instant [[wikipedia:Ramen|ramen]]. | ||
There were screens in the background running legions of numbers and status messages. In the visuals one protein folding followed another. | There were screens in the background running legions of numbers and status messages. In the visuals one protein folding followed another. | ||
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The container walls can be sunk in the ground so that nearby containers can create connected spaces to work in. | |||
The containers themselves can be sunk in the ground and be replaced others that are the same in look and labeling. These false containers are meant to slowdown unwanted visitors and help the sci personal to become evacuated. | |||
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[Kimura | [Kimura wanted to see Hasegawa and Kerr in person before granting more power.] | ||
Kimura entered the container. A sense of danger was immediately in the air. | Kimura entered the container doors. The was wearing a black suit as if he came right back from a funeral. A sense of danger was immediately in the air. | ||
"Hello doctors | "Hello doctors... how are things progressing." | ||
The | The presence of the thug was suddenly very welcome but he left the three alone. | ||
Hasegawa tried to bring him back. "Hey Timmy who is this?" | Hasegawa tried to bring him back. "Hey Timmy, who is this?" | ||
But to no avail. | |||
"Timmy?", Kimura asked. | "Timmy?", Kimura asked. | ||
"That's just how we call him. He refuses to tell us his name." | Kerr nervously laughed. "That's just how we call him. He refuses to tell us his name." | ||
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Kimura organized a sample of Jamie's remnants | Kimura organized a sample of Jamie's remnants | ||
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Let's say we take over the Syndicate. How does that help us to deliver the Daodan to the people. | Let's say we take over the Syndicate. How does that help us to deliver the Daodan to the people. | ||
Kimura: "Create the necessity, make the people welcome it." | |||
Let us work us out the details later. | Let us work us out the details later. | ||
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Kimura: "Well then, the ACC, we can repair them and render the WCG obsolete. [Lookup geyser's notes?] With them out of the picture we can distribute the Daodan." | |||
"Or if the ACC repair spectacularly fails, the WCG will be no help to the people, but the Daodan | "Or if the ACC repair spectacularly fails, God forbid, the WCG will be no help to the people, but the Daodan." | ||
"This or another way the Daodan | "This or another way the Daodan could be given to them, no more interferences." | ||
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They | They finished the Daodan Chrysalis. | ||
The TCTF was about to raid the warehouse they usually work at. So Kimura sent Syndicate troops to evacuate them. | |||
Hasegawa is evacuated, while Kerr hid(?) with the other prototype. He told the TCTF as soon as possible to save Mai. | |||
Hasegawa | Kimura escaped with Hasegawa in a van that uses a dynamic transponder signal and a kind of artificial cephalopod camouflage. | ||
Kimura | Kimura killed the thug to cut lose ends. In a desolate backstreet he called a ''special waste disposal service''. | ||
"Yes, express option please." | |||
Hasegawa: "You guys are sick." | Hasegawa: "You guys are sick." | ||
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Kimura: "Come on, James. You know what you were into when you entered that warehouse." | Kimura: "Come on, James. You know what you were into when you entered that warehouse." | ||
Kimura | Kimura told Hasegawa to find Kerr later. In the meantime they discuss and plan ''Sturmänderung''. | ||
In the new lab. | In the new lab. | ||
Kimura long-term plan was to get Kerr and Mai. But having Ryu, Tomo and the others take his full attention. | |||
After Hasegawa spend so much time with time in isolation with Kimura and Pensatore, Mai would have been potential disruptive for Sturmänderung. Hasegawa might have not be willing to sacrifice Muro if he had Mai and thought that they all could become a happy family again. So Kimura changed his mind and ignored Mai's and Kerr's fate for the most part. | |||
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Hanna was slowly standing up. Clothes soaked with water. Beaten up. Wounds of burn. Bleeding scratches. A laceration at the forehead. And yet the night could have ended much worse. | Hanna was slowly standing up. Clothes soaked with water. Beaten up. Wounds of burn. Bleeding scratches. A laceration at the forehead. And yet the night could have ended much worse. | ||
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[It follows an extra scene. It should be told in retro view (flashback or told memory) to not destroy the impact of the lines above.] | |||
Hanna wanted to leave as well until she noticed that she stepped on something. | Hanna wanted to leave as well until she noticed that she stepped on something. | ||