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:once again, a well done scene.
:once again, a well done scene.
::[[User;AF|AF]]
::[[User;AF|AF]]
:Imagine you are spending a few weeks in an endless desolation, wearing the same <strike>dress</strike> clothes, under adverse weather conditions, no water (only something to drink (??? [[User:Geyser|geyser]])), concrete heart (??? [[User:Geyser|geyser]]) to fall asleep onto
:Let us consider how one can be after a day <strike>running</strike>pedaling like <strike>a</strike> mad on a bicycle under the rain, or a whole day climbing a rocky mountain. Then let's try to wonder how one can <strike>seem</strike>look after several days spent like this.
::[[User:Guido|Guido]] 21:29, 26 October 2006 (CEST)
:First, a tentative proofreading (translation, almost :P) (just merge with your entry if accurate, and delete this) :
:First, a tentative proofreading (translation, almost :P) (just merge with your entry if accurate, and delete this) :
::Picture yourself spending a few weeks in a weather-battered wasteland, with no spare clothes, hardly any drinkable water, and nothing but rock-hard soil to sleep on.
::Picture yourself spending a few weeks in a weather-battered wasteland, with no spare clothes, hardly any drinkable water, and nothing but rock-hard soil to sleep on.
::Take someone who's been pedaling uphill, or climbing up a cliff... a whole day long, and under the pouring rain... and then try imagine what they'd look like after several days/weeks/months of such activity.
::Take someone who's been pedaling uphill, or climbing up a cliff... a whole day long, and under the pouring rain... and then try imagine what they'd look like after several days/weeks/months of such activity.
::[[User:Geyser|geyser]] 21:13, 28 October 2006 (CEST) ^^
::originally posted[[User:Guido|Guido]] proofread and re-translated by:[[User:Geyser|geyser]] 21:13, 28 October 2006 (CEST) ^^




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