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:As it seems, you stay amnesiac. Yet, your memory will come again... can you stand up?
:As it seems, you stay amnesiac. Yet, your memory will come again... can you stand up?


''Connors nods as Eve tries and cheers up (eh? [[User:Geyser|geyser]])
''Connors nods and cheers up as Eve successfully tries to stand up on her legs


;Eve
;Eve
''amazed  
''amazed  
:I can’t understand.  I feel no pain at all.  What did you do to me?" (r''ises and goes a few steps forth and back'').  
:I can’t understand.  I feel no pain at all.  What did you do to me?" (''rises and goes a few steps forth and back'').  


''A first glance has been enough, now the young woman has set in good mood with that man. (??? [[User:Geyser|geyser]])
''The young woman has set a good mood.
''She’s just awaken from the coma and she feels so good. Her amnesia seems quite a minor problem...
''She’s just awaken from the coma and she feels so good. Her amnesia seems quite a minor problem...


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;Eve
;Eve
''hasting a reply
''hasting a reply
:Splendid, and you, well... you can call me Eve... it doesn’t sound bad at all. You know, I have some problems at recollecting things. My old life seems to have ended at last. (at last??? [[User:Geyser|geyser]])
:Splendid, and you, well... you can call me Eve... it doesn’t sound bad at all. You know, I have some problems at recollecting things. My old life seems to have ended.  


;Bill
;Bill
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''Connors finds that situation completely weird. Despite his joy, he is worried of the sudden changes in his daughter. Everything is evolving too fast, too easily. A telepathic link was something far beyond his imagination. In his troubled mind there are serious chances that the experiment gets out of control. He is not even sure Emily's cell structure will remain stable. The fear of having created a superman or a monster gets heavier and heavier.
''Connors finds that situation completely weird. Despite his joy, he is worried of the sudden changes in his daughter. Everything is evolving too fast, too easily. A telepathic link was something far beyond his imagination. In his troubled mind there are serious chances that the experiment gets out of control. He is not even sure Emily's cell structure will remain stable. The fear of having created a superman or a monster gets heavier and heavier.


''Connors gazes (glances??? [[User:Geyser|geyser]]) suspiciously at the watchman standing in the entrance. He tries to interpret from his face what he might have grasped of the ongoing discussion.
''Connors glances suspiciously at the watchman standing in the entrance. He tries to interpret from his face what he might have grasped of the ongoing discussion.


;Connors (V.O.)
;Connors (V.O.)
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;Emily
;Emily
''shaking her head in resignation (??? [[User:Geyser|geyser]])
''shaking her head, (in surrender)"[[User:Guido|geyser]]
:I should ask Bill to generate some new cool design for you.
:I should ask Bill to generate some new cool design for you.


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