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===WISHLIST PART 2=== | ===WISHLIST PART 2=== | ||
{{GuidoWishlist|right}} | <noinclude>{{GuidoWishlist|right}}</noinclude> | ||
'''''(back to a close-up on konoko’s face, as she stays defiant) | '''''(back to a close-up on konoko’s face, as she stays defiant) | ||
;TEXT | ;TEXT | ||
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;''(spits out) | ;''(spits out) | ||
;''(raises her head, she gazes directly at ''OLDMAN'' 's eyes) | ;''(raises her head, she gazes directly at ''OLDMAN'' 's eyes) | ||
:::;''(By now I can’t help figuring him as a combination of traits from [ | :::;''(By now I can’t help figuring him as a combination of traits from [[wp:Liam_Neeson|Liam Neeson]] and [[wp:Hugh_Laurie|Hugh Laurie]]) | ||
--I found her! -- she was still alive! She needed to breathe and I gave her the air, and she needs your water now! (''growing upset'') She deserves my help, not yours! | --I found her! -- she was still alive! She needed to breathe and I gave her the air, and she needs your water now! (''growing upset'') She deserves my help, not yours!�? | ||
:;''The place appears something like a former rail depot area in the middle of nowhere. | :;''The place appears something like a former rail depot area in the middle of nowhere. | ||
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'''SMALLGIRL''': Yes -- but she seems so distant, sometimes. | '''SMALLGIRL''': Yes -- but she seems so distant, sometimes. | ||
(''the brawl has just ended'': KONOKO ''and five opponents lay on the ground''. (''exhausted, groaning''). | (''the brawl has just ended'': KONOKO ''and five opponents lay on the ground''. (''exhausted, groaning''). | ||
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;''(''SMALLGIRL'' stands apart but from her distance she cannot hear their words) | ;''(''SMALLGIRL'' stands apart but from her distance she cannot hear their words) | ||
;''(We see the other ones helping their | ;''(We see the other ones helping their pals and carrying away the two of them who cannot stand up. Konoko is breathing deeply, closing her eyes- she looks as miserable as ever in defeat'') | ||
'''OLDMAN''' (''laughs, as he approaches to her) (he is sincerely amused, there is no malevolence in his voice'') No-- Emery, let her be -- | '''OLDMAN''' (''laughs, as he approaches to her) (he is sincerely amused, there is no malevolence in his voice'') No-- Emery, let her be -- | ||
('''EMERY''' forgoes taking his | ('''EMERY''' forgoes taking his “compensation�? for a broken lip) | ||
'''EMERY''': “-- Sir. | '''EMERY''': “-- Sir.�? | ||
::;''(In the background) | ::;''(In the background) | ||
'''MR. FAULKERS''' (''cannot conceal his disapproval to'' '''EMERY''', ''as they go away''): “Shouldn’t we end it? | '''MR. FAULKERS''' (''cannot conceal his disapproval to'' '''EMERY''', ''as they go away''): “Shouldn’t we end it?�? | ||
::;''(in the foreground) | ::;''(in the foreground) | ||
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-- No… it is not the money they are given -- | -- No… it is not the money they are given -- | ||
:our governments only want us to remember why we need them – | :<strike>our governments only want us to remember why we need them – </strike> | ||
:but now at edge of oblivion--many have realized that a promise of order and peace is no more enough, and there are no more protectors we can commit our obedient consent. | :<strike>but now at edge of oblivion--many have realized that a promise of order and peace is no more enough, and there are no more protectors we can commit our obedient consent. </strike>(''This one will go in another scene... it is redundant here'': [[User:Guido|guido]]) | ||
;KONOKO ''(painfully raises on her knees) | ;KONOKO ''(painfully raises on her knees) | ||
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:But this place is slowly poisoning her. | :But this place is slowly poisoning her. | ||
:Consider this even. | :Consider this even. | ||
<noinclude> | |||
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{{GuidoWishlist|center}}</noinclude> | |||
[[Category:Oni 2]] | |||