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onto the snakes of mist swarming amidst the ruins. | onto the snakes of mist swarming amidst the ruins. | ||
There is a large placid flow in the middle | There is a large placid flow in the middle. | ||
It is a river or a canal? | It is a river or a canal? | ||
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A pool of rainwater, Konoko’s foot ripples its surface. | A pool of rainwater, Konoko’s foot ripples its surface. | ||
: | :mold breathes as you cut it | ||
:and there are people carried away from criticisms, | :and there are people carried away from criticisms, | ||
The asphalt on the route has been fractured by colonies of weed and | The asphalt on the route has been fractured by colonies of weed and mold. | ||
Unearthly colors saturate the vegetation. | Unearthly colors saturate the vegetation. | ||
Konoko follows the route alone, and enters a forest. | Konoko follows the route alone, and enters a forest. | ||