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===Part I=== | ===Part I=== | ||
: - There are a lot of typos. Even I can see that. Why didn't we attempt to fix them? | |||
: - arguable twist: Griffin implanting himself with a Chrysalis felt almost too easy but might work nonetheless (see next line) | : - arguable twist: Griffin implanting himself with a Chrysalis felt almost too easy but might work nonetheless (see next line) | ||
:: - cheesy: talks about himself of being highly morally but easily chooses Mai over his son for Daodan implantation | :: - cheesy: talks about himself of being highly morally but easily chooses Mai over his son for Daodan implantation | ||
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:: Also, stupid anime subboss, hmm. Do we really have to continue that stereotypes here? | :: Also, stupid anime subboss, hmm. Do we really have to continue that stereotypes here? | ||
:+ Introduction of Sarai as embodiment of BGI. Plain and simple right there. | :+ Introduction of Sarai as embodiment of BGI. Plain and simple right there. | ||
====Additionally notes==== | |||
'''Barabus' shockwave''' might be in fact a graphene blast shield originating from his boots. Activating when jumping. Might have been developed to smooth his landing when the jetpack was used. | |||
===Part II=== | ===Part II=== | ||
soon <sup>TM</sup> | soon <sup>TM</sup> | ||
[[Category:Oni 2]] | |||