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==Summary== | ==Summary== | ||
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== | ==Rebooting the Phönix== | ||
[Change Konoko's name to something else. She is not the person she used to be.] | [Change Konoko's name to something else. She is not the person she used to be.] | ||
People were talking about Konoko being a devastating force, simply getting every mission done they gave her. | People were talking about Konoko being a devastating force, simply getting every mission done they gave her. | ||
"She's a total strike team by her own. Nothing can stop her. | "She's a total strike team by her own. Nothing can stop her. Wanna see?" | ||
They poured a drink over her head. | |||
"Hold still." | "Hold still." | ||
They set her ablaze. Blunted as Konoko was she endured the pain in dull roars. Muro had heard enough sitting backwards to them at the bar counter. He turned around and walked to Konoko. | They set her ablaze. Blunted as Konoko was she endured the pain in dull roars. | ||
Muro had heard enough sitting backwards to them at the bar counter. He turned around and walked to Konoko. | |||
"Who are you trying to impress here?" | "Who are you trying to impress here?" | ||
He | He slabbed her in the face sending her burning body flying into the wall. | ||
"You are not a brawler. I am." | "You are not a brawler. I am." | ||
Muro | Muro grabbed a bystander and battered with him the rest of the pack. | ||
Konoko wiped the bricks that have fallen on her and raced after Muro. He dodged the tackle making her kiss the ground again. | Konoko wiped the bricks that have fallen on her and raced after Muro. He dodged the tackle making her kiss the ground again. | ||
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"God, what happened? Are you really working for these parasites now? Where is your finesse you used to beat me at the mountain compound?" | "God, what happened? Are you really working for these parasites now? Where is your finesse you used to beat me at the mountain compound?" | ||
Konoko sent him a heavy punch to the cheek. Muro took it on purpose. He turned his | Konoko sent him a heavy punch to the cheek. Muro took it on purpose. He turned his grim face slowly around his green eyes glaring at Konoko. | ||
"Is this the strength the Syndicate couldn't take? Don't make me laugh." | "Is this the strength the Syndicate couldn't take? Don't make me laugh." | ||
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"In a way its also your fault she's dead now. But then again, we were simply enemies. Set up by other people to fight each other." | "In a way its also your fault she's dead now. But then again, we were simply enemies. Set up by other people to fight each other." | ||
"TCTF and Syndicate - we lived at different families yet we both were tools to foreign means. | "TCTF and Syndicate - we lived at different families yet we both were tools to foreign means. Trained, educated, brainwashed. Just to be weapons of mass-destruction. In the end you were the one pushing the button. But if you hadn't done it, I had. So much for not teaming up with me, heh." | ||
"You should have wrote me much earlier. | "You should have wrote me much earlier. Rocking my place wasn't exactly the Christmas invitation I expected." | ||
"Okay, well, screw it. I was a bad boy, still I am. I really enjoyed the things I did. Today I know I was wrong. But I don't feel sorry." | "Okay, well, screw it. I was a bad boy, still I am. I really enjoyed the things I did. Today I know I was wrong. But I don't feel sorry." | ||
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"I know I'm a monster. Luckily I know who turned me into one. And after we have reunited I will pay him a visit." | "I know I'm a monster. Luckily I know who turned me into one. And after we have reunited I will pay him a visit." | ||
" | "Saomi's death made me realize how much wrong I was. You know, slowly crushing bones make very memorable sounds. It's haunting." | ||
Konoko nose bone was cracking under Muro's punch another time. She | Konoko nose bone was cracking under Muro's punch another time. She staggered a few stepped backwards. The blood was all over her face, dripping down at her chin like rain. | ||
"I cannot thank you enough that you burned that goddamn place to the ground. I wished I had done it myself." | "I cannot thank you enough that you burned that goddamn place to the ground. I wished I had done it myself." | ||
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Muro was disappointed and angry. | Muro was disappointed and angry. | ||
" | "You fell from 100 meters out of an aircraft. You jumped into acid. You single-handed beat all the Strikers and even that assassin freak Mukade. You should have been dead so many times." | ||
" | "Don't give up just like that!" | ||
While holding her hand with the left he was punched her heart another time. | While holding her hand with the left he was punched her heart another time. | ||
"Fight!" | |||
A last discharge went through them. | A last discharge went through them. | ||
Her skin turned purple, little pores opened up as her whole body was stung by a swarm of thousand oversized needles. | Her skin turned purple, little pores opened up as her whole body was stung by a swarm of thousand oversized needles. | ||
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Shinatama focused all her remaining energy and snatched his finger. "When will you finally help us?" | Shinatama focused all her remaining energy and snatched his finger. "When will you finally help us?" | ||
More shocks went through Avatara. The last thing he | More shocks went through Avatara. The last thing he perceived was their hands turning to glowing dust, fading into the darkness. | ||
Comguy 1: "Stop tasering him. He is still downloading her memories - unfiltered." | Comguy 1: "Stop tasering him. He is still downloading her memories - unfiltered." | ||
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Comguy 1: "By losing Shinatama we gained one of his avatars." | Comguy 1: "By losing Shinatama we gained one of his avatars." | ||
Comguy 2: "Yea. Our status barely changed. We still need | Comguy 2: "Yea. Our status barely changed. We still need an agreement of all three entities to alter the core functions." | ||
Comguy 1: " | Comguy 1: "Work on those groups. The others will split up giving you the time." | ||