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==Rebooting the Phönix== | ==Rebooting the Phönix== | ||
[Since "booting" can mean "kicking" the chapter name is also a pun. That was not intended, though. ... Give Muro a "brutal" meme?] | |||
[Change Konoko's name to something else. She is not the person she used to be.] | [Change Konoko's name to something else. She is not the person she used to be.] | ||
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"Is this the strength the Syndicate couldn't take? Don't make me laugh." | "Is this the strength the Syndicate couldn't take? Don't make me laugh." | ||
Their fight wasted the other combatants in the bar. They were all collateral damage in a fight between the two alpha | Their fight wasted the other combatants in the bar. They were all collateral damage in a fight between the two alpha predators. | ||
“Good. Konoko. Good. But not good enough. Even Saomi could have beat you in the state you are now. She was really going to take you out because you and your friends buried me under that exploded mountain. She had to assume that I was dead. Well, I sort of lost my mind there but then Saomi brought it back. It wasn’t the finest method but I think it will work on you the same way as the degenerated nuthead you are now.” | “Good. Konoko. Good. But not good enough. Even Saomi could have beat you in the state you are now. She was really going to take you out because you and your friends buried me under that exploded mountain. She had to assume that I was dead. Well, I sort of lost my mind there but then Saomi brought it back. It wasn’t the finest method but I think it will work on you the same way as the degenerated nuthead you are now.” | ||
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"I cannot thank you enough that you burned that goddamn place to the ground. I wished I had done it myself." | "I cannot thank you enough that you burned that goddamn place to the ground. I wished I had done it myself." | ||
Muro and | Muro and Mai were all fired up. The flames of their aura was all blazing and swirling lightening up the destroyed room. The difference between them was that Muro wasn't tired at all and Mai had become a mere punching bag. | ||
"I already told you: You are capable of so much more." | "I already told you: You are capable of so much more." | ||
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Muro built up body tension. His aura was burning wild in demonic red flames. Electric discharges were shooting through the air. | Muro built up body tension. His aura was burning wild in demonic red flames. Electric discharges were shooting through the air. | ||
He | He released all his power in this curved kick to the head. It left a colored trail of glowing particle. [BINA3RAP ;-)] | ||
Konoko's head was deformed on impact, clearly broken. She rotated multiples times on her lateral before smashing into the wall. | Konoko's head was deformed on impact, clearly broken. She rotated multiples times on her lateral before smashing into the wall. | ||
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She was lying there with no more breathing. | She was lying there with no more breathing. | ||
Muro kneeled down | Muro kneeled down at her and removed the bricks. | ||
"Come on, Mai. Don't leave me here alone." | "Come on, Mai. Don't leave me here alone." | ||