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Avatara took action to prevent that mass-murder on all Daodan hosts and recycled Traton's infrastructure to establish mind seals. The AI agreed on Kimura's wish to give Japan back some independence, Kimura was blind to see that this status was by then just virtual. And as cost the country became a home for Daodan hosts. Those were also affected by Avatar's peacekeeping measures. After Shinatama broke that system, some Daodan ascend to even more powerful beings and are called monsters, oni, kami and by other names from folklore. Humans under the restriction of mind seals couldn't understand hightechs anymore and thus perceive it as magic.
Avatara took action to prevent that mass-murder on all Daodan hosts and recycled Traton's infrastructure to establish mind seals. The AI agreed on Kimura's wish to give Japan back some independence, Kimura was blind to see that this status was by then just virtual. And as cost the country became a home for Daodan hosts. Those were also affected by Avatar's peacekeeping measures. After Shinatama broke that system, some Daodan ascend to even more powerful beings and are called monsters, oni, kami and by other names from folklore. Humans under the restriction of mind seals couldn't understand hightechs anymore and thus perceive it as magic.
==Pandora und ihre Büchse==
Nukleare Kontamination, giftige Vegetation und Bioc-Pattern treibt Green Village zu Verzweiflungstaten. Um sich vor Tod und Krankheit zu schützen werden HeLa-Zellen mit Daodan-Zellen kombiniert.
Die führende Wissenschaftlerin testet die Zellen an sich selbst. Die Symbiose wird fälschlicherweise als stabil gesehen. Kurz darauf erhalten mehr Personen die Zellen. (Pandora, „die Gaben sendende“. )
Eigentlich soll mit HeLa genügend Biomasse für Massentransplantation liefern, doch es lässt die Daodan-Chrysalis instabil werden. Die Informationsverarbeitung ist gestört. „Negative Stimuli“ werden überinterpretiert. Adaptionen werden viel zu leicht ausgelöst und das Wachstum ist stark beschleunigt. Bloßer Körperkontakt kann Hela-Daodan-Zellen übertragen.
Konoko ist als Sündenbock für den Rest der Welt viel zu klein. Strategen von WCG und META sehen die Chance die infektiösen Mutanten zu stigmatisieren, medienwirksam in Szene zusetzen. Ein Krieg gegen den Terror, um Wiederaufbau und Zukunft zu schützen. GATC und die Griffin nahe TCTF sollen ebenso geopfert werden.
Die Quarantäne wird vorübergehend aufgehoben, damit eine „kontrollierte Infektion“ der Satellitenstadt stattfindet.
Die Verseuchung schreitet immer schneller voran. META erkennt, dass sich der Plan sich  verselbstständigt hat und zwingt „Pandora“ das Problem zu lösen. Das bedeutet die Superspreader zu eliminieren, Gewebeproben (Oni-Cluster?) sicherzustellen und so eine mögliche Heilung für den Rest zu finden. Das schließt auch die Jagd von regulären Daodan-Wirten mit ein. Von Schuldgefühlen zerfressen und nach der Gehirnwäsche von META hat „Pandora“ auch keine Probleme mehr damit ihrer einstige Retterin Konoko zu bekämpfen.
Die Gaben haben sich vermeintlich als Übel entpuppt. Pandora versucht die Übel wieder einzusperren – wiederum ganz im Geiste einer totalitären TCTF.
[Nach Kampf mit BGI (Sarai) und Shin's temporären Übernahme? Oder neues Ende?] In einem Showdown entgegnet Konoko (->Black Phönix Arc?) ihr, dass die Daodan nicht mehr zurückgedrängt werden kann. Die Wahrheit setzt sich letztendlich immer durch. Bevor Konoko (scheinbar) stirbt, bittet sie Pandora die Hoffnung zu bewahren. Ihr tödliches Scheitern kann eine reinigende Erneuerung der Welt sein. Solange das prometischen Feuer brennt – der menschlichen Verstand, die Wissenschaft, und die Daodan als deren fleischgewordenes Symbol. Pandora habe es in der Hand der Welt neues Leben zu schenken.
Pandora ist sich nicht sicher, ob [[Hope#Hope as a form of evil|Hoffnung]] etwas Gutes ist, kann es doch auch zu Selbstbetrug und Selbstzerstörung führen.
META sieht die Hasegawa als (frevelhafte, schwarze) Feuerbringer, (Daodan) Trickster, als Unruhestifter.
[Symbolik: Der rote Phönix als neutraler Feuerbringer. Ermächtigung sich gegen die Kräfte der Natur zu behaupten. Der grüne (Gaia) Phönix(?) als eigene, positive Kreation. Symbiose mit Natur eingehen. Die Natur erneuert sich immer wieder von selbst. Gemeinsam eine Naturgewalt werden. Grüner Phönix als Urmutter des Phyllion? Wozu braucht man noch Flügel, wenn man eins mit der Natur ist und die Sinne selbst in Wasser, Luft und Erde hat?]




==Rebooting the Phönix==
==Rebooting the Phönix==
[Since "booting" can mean "kicking" the chapter name is also a pun. That was not intended, though. ... Give Muro a "brutal" meme?]
[Change Konoko's name to something else. She is not the person she used to be.]
[Change Konoko's name to something else. She is not the person she used to be.]


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"Is this the strength the Syndicate couldn't take? Don't make me laugh."
"Is this the strength the Syndicate couldn't take? Don't make me laugh."


Their fight wasted the other combatants in the bar. They were all collateral damage in a fight between the two alpha-strain symbionts.
Their fight wasted the other combatants in the bar. They were all collateral damage in a fight between the two alpha predators.


“Good. Konoko. Good. But not good enough. Even Saomi could have beat you in the state you are now. She was really going to take you out because you and your friends buried me under that exploded mountain. She had to assume that I was dead. Well, I sort of lost my mind there but then Saomi brought it back. It wasn’t the finest method but I think it will work on you the same way as the degenerated nuthead you are now.”
“Good. Konoko. Good. But not good enough. Even Saomi could have beat you in the state you are now. She was really going to take you out because you and your friends buried me under that exploded mountain. She had to assume that I was dead. Well, I sort of lost my mind there but then Saomi brought it back. It wasn’t the finest method but I think it will work on you the same way as the degenerated nuthead you are now.”
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"Saomi's death made me realize how much wrong I was. You know, slowly crushing bones make very memorable sounds. It's haunting."
"Saomi's death made me realize how much wrong I was. You know, slowly crushing bones make very memorable sounds. It's haunting."


Konoko nose bone was cracking under Muro's punch another time. She staggered a few stepped backwards. The blood was all over her face, dripping down at her chin like rain.
Konoko nose bone was cracking under Muro's punch another time. She staggered a few steps backwards. The blood was all over her face, dripping down at her chin like rain.


"I cannot thank you enough that you burned that goddamn place to the ground. I wished I had done it myself."
"I cannot thank you enough that you burned that goddamn place to the ground. I wished I had done it myself."


Muro and Konoko had reached the semi Imago stages. The flames of their aura was all blazing and swirling lightening up the destroyed room.
Muro and Mai were all fired up. The flames of their aura were all blazing and swirling illuminating the destroyed room. The difference between them was that Muro wasn't tired at all and Mai had become a mere punching bag.


"I already told you: You are capable of so much more."
"I already told you: You are capable of so much more."
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Muro built up body tension. His aura was burning wild in demonic red flames. Electric discharges were shooting through the air.
Muro built up body tension. His aura was burning wild in demonic red flames. Electric discharges were shooting through the air.


He release all his power in this curved kick to the head. It left a colored trailed of glowing particle.
He released all his power in this curved kick to the head. It left a colored trail of glowing particle. [BINA3RAP ;-)]


Konoko's head was deformed on impact, clearly broken. She rotated multiples times on her lateral before smashing into the wall.
Konoko's head was deformed on impact, clearly broken. She rotated multiples times on her lateral before smashing into the wall.
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She was lying there with no more breathing.
She was lying there with no more breathing.


Muro kneeled down to her and removed the bricks.
Muro kneeled down at her and removed the bricks.


"Come on, Mai. Don't leave me here alone."
"Come on, Mai. Don't leave me here alone."
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Nothing happened.
Nothing happened.


"No no no, come one, regenerate."
"No no no, come on, regenerate."


He hit her at the heart. No change.
He hit her at the heart. No change.
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"Don't give up just like that!"
"Don't give up just like that!"


While holding her hand with the left he was punched her heart another time.
While holding her hand with the left he punched her heart another time.


"Fight!"
"Fight!"
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A last discharge went through them.
A last discharge went through them.


Her skin turned purple, little pores opened up as her whole body was stung by a swarm of thousand oversized needles.
Her skin turned purple, little pores opened up as if her whole body was stung by a swarm of thousand oversized needles.


Muro stood up again. He knew that the transformation had begun.
Muro stood up again. He knew that the transformation had begun.
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Chenille threads began to grow out of her skin, warping her up forming crystal patches indicating that the static metamorphosis was working at maximum. Her Chrysalis was in a critical state, completely restoring the body and hopefully her mind in the process. But it would take a while. He knew this all too well.
Chenille threads began to grow out of her skin, warping her up forming crystal patches indicating that the static metamorphosis was working at maximum. Her Chrysalis was in a critical state, completely restoring the body and hopefully her mind in the process. But it would take a while. He knew this all too well.


One of Muro’s men was entering.
One of Muro’s men was entering. [Use a name here from other chapters.]


“Nice decoration.”
“Nice decoration.”
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“What is it?”, Muro demanded.
“What is it?”, Muro demanded.


META is on their way.
"META is on their way."


Muro turned back to Konoko.
Muro turned back to Konoko.
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“I’ve to make a call.”
“I’ve to make a call.”


Why did Muro free Mai from Black Phönix’ grab? Was this part of his start over, the pathetic try to form a new family, or to just do the right thing for one time. He didn’t knew. All he had was hope that it would be better then doing nothing.
Why did Muro free Mai from Black Phönix’ grab? Was this part of his start over, the pathetic try to form a new family, or to just do the right thing for one time. He didn’t knew. All he had was hope that it would be better than doing nothing.


“Ryu, I never really asked you for anything. But right now I could really need your assistance.”
“Ryu, I never really asked you for anything. But right now I could really need your assistance.”
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Comguy 1: "Work on those groups. The others will split up giving you the time."
Comguy 1: "Work on those groups. The others will split up giving you the time."
[Will Avatara be in rage when he reunites with his old proxy that downloaded fragments of Shin's mind?]
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