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:Borrowing the first sentence of a narrative from an existing piece doesn't seem right. No matter how thoughtful and original a book is, you can't just go "pulling a lot out of it" ^^ | :Borrowing the first sentence of a narrative from an existing piece doesn't seem right. No matter how thoughtful and original a book is, you can't just go "pulling a lot out of it" ^^ | ||
:So, verbatim or not verbatim? | |||
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:Not verbatim, different context, but probably recognizable. It works though. | |||
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:If Konoko talks about her moral universe with as much distance as Hedges talks about his, doesn't that make her inconveniently ''lucid''? | :If Konoko talks about her moral universe with as much distance as Hedges talks about his, doesn't that make her inconveniently ''lucid''? | ||
:If she's spent 4 years rationalizing on her past and present, isn't she well-armed enough to face the future? | :If she's spent 4 years rationalizing on her past and present, isn't she well-armed enough to face the future? | ||
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==Narrative== | ==Narrative== | ||
;(FIRST-PERSON NARRATIVE, MORE SPECIFICALLY) | ;(FIRST-PERSON NARRATIVE, MORE SPECIFICALLY) | ||