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 ====Intro====
-It starts with an assault on laboratories by a criminal organization named simply as [[Syndicate|The Syndicate]]; who is being led by a mysterious, yet dangerous man named [[Muro]]. [[Konoko]], through her neural link with the [[TCTF]]'s AI [[Shinatama]] (actually known as an [[SLD]], or Simulated Life Doll: an android programmed with Konoko's brain patterns), her connection with Commander [[Griffin]] and Dr. [[Kerr]], moves in to investigate. All the while, Commander Griffin and Doctor Kerr are seen arguing over Konoko's situation, cut in from time to time by Shinatama reporting on her bodily functions (adrenaline spikes, likewise).
+[[Konoko]] goes through some basic training (not necessarily part of the game's story, but more of a tutorial for the player). She receives messages via a neural link from [[Shinatama]], an [[SLD]] at the [[TCTF]].
+We next see her outside an unnamed warehouse. Her superior, Commander [[Griffin]], and one Dr. [[Kerr]], argue about whether Konoko is ready for the challenge. Griffin commands her to find Chung, a TCTF agent who infiltrated the warehouse to find ties to the [[Syndicate]]. If she can find Chung or the evidence she needs, Griffin can shut the warehouse down or she can shut it down herself. She confirms her readiness, and Shinatama reports a normal spike in adrenaline.
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