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:One good thing with these talk pages is that they can be reorganized at will. | :One good thing with these talk pages is that they can be reorganized at will. | ||
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==Ragged Konoko== | ==Ragged Konoko== | ||
[[Image: | [[Image:Guido - Ragged Konoko.jpg|right|thumb|Ragged Konoko]] | ||
:good. short, sweet, to the point. | :good. short, sweet, to the point. | ||
:I have a hard time imagining konoko ragged -- after all, she's the toughest and quickest to bounce back, and she has a lot of pride -- but that's my only crit. | :I have a hard time imagining konoko ragged -- after all, she's the toughest and quickest to bounce back, and she has a lot of pride -- but that's my only crit. | ||
:once again, a well done scene. | :once again, a well done scene. | ||
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:Picture yourself spending a few weeks in a weather-battered wasteland, with no spare clothes, hardly any drinkable water, and nothing but rock-hard soil to sleep on. | :Picture yourself spending a few weeks in a weather-battered wasteland, with no spare clothes, hardly any drinkable water, and nothing but rock-hard soil to sleep on. | ||
:Take someone who's been pedaling uphill, or climbing up a cliff... a whole day long, and under the pouring rain... and then try imagine what they'd look like after several days/weeks/months of such activity. | :Take someone who's been pedaling uphill, or climbing up a cliff... a whole day long, and under the pouring rain... and then try imagine what they'd look like after several days/weeks/months of such activity. | ||
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:If you choose to picture Konoko as struggling with the environment rather than adapting to it, then you are missing Oni's "symbiosis" completely, and that's a shame. | :If you choose to picture Konoko as struggling with the environment rather than adapting to it, then you are missing Oni's "symbiosis" completely, and that's a shame. | ||
::[[User:Geyser|geyser]] 21:13, 28 October 2006 (CEST) | ::[[User:Geyser|geyser]] 21:13, 28 October 2006 (CEST) | ||
[[Image: | [[Image:Guido - Who said I enjoy acid showers.jpg|right]] | ||
:Well let's take a look at the splashscreen in the end of {{C12}}. | :Well let's take a look at the splashscreen in the end of {{C12}}. | ||
:Konoko doesn't give me the idea she is enjoying the acid bath. | :Konoko doesn't give me the idea she is enjoying the acid bath. | ||
:Do you think she is keen on repeating such an experience? | :Do you think she is keen on repeating such an experience? | ||
::[[User:Guido|Guido]] 23:43, 28 October 2006 (CEST) | ::[[User:Guido|Guido]] 23:43, 28 October 2006 (CEST) | ||
:Hm, yeah, I still have to upload all the other splashscreens and complete the | :Hm, yeah, I still have to upload all the other splashscreens and complete the [[Chapters]]... thanks for reminding me. | ||
:I ''never'' said "enjoy", up there or at all. I said "take". Acid or not, a cold shower is usually not a pleasant experience. | :I ''never'' said "enjoy", up there or at all. I said "take". Acid or not, a cold shower is usually not a pleasant experience. | ||
:Also : | :Also : | ||
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:How much can Konoko suffer? How much does she ''need'' to suffer? (story-wise and ''author''-wise) That's something we ought to set straight. | :How much can Konoko suffer? How much does she ''need'' to suffer? (story-wise and ''author''-wise) That's something we ought to set straight. | ||
::[[User:Geyser|geyser]] 15:07, 30 October 2006 (CET) | ::[[User:Geyser|geyser]] 15:07, 30 October 2006 (CET) | ||
Follow-up discussion moved on [[Talk:Pain]]. | |||
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[[Image: | [[Image:Guido - When you need an umbrella.jpg|right]] | ||
;Ragged Konoko (redux) | ;Ragged Konoko (redux) | ||
:Bottom line for me as for the explanatory sentences : | :Bottom line for me as for the explanatory sentences : | ||
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:"Mrs." means she's married. "Ms." means we don't know. Up to you. | :"Mrs." means she's married. "Ms." means we don't know. Up to you. | ||
::[[User:Geyser|geyser]] 21:13, 28 October 2006 (CEST) | ::[[User:Geyser|geyser]] 21:13, 28 October 2006 (CEST) | ||
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::[[User:Guido|guido]] 22:34, 29 November 2006 (CEST) | |||
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:Either an overlooked "bug" or an understressed "feature" : Ms. Hishikawa instructing Kazuo to take Konoko to the ambulance, and finally accompanying them all the way. | :Either an overlooked "bug" or an understressed "feature" : Ms. Hishikawa instructing Kazuo to take Konoko to the ambulance, and finally accompanying them all the way. | ||
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:After a good look at Konoko, Kazuo reconsiders his initial impressions, maybe Ms. Hishikawa realizes something as well? | :After a good look at Konoko, Kazuo reconsiders his initial impressions, maybe Ms. Hishikawa realizes something as well? | ||
::[[User:Geyser|geyser]] 21:13, 28 October 2006 (CEST) | ::[[User:Geyser|geyser]] 21:13, 28 October 2006 (CEST) | ||
:BTW, whatever "''crusty'' woman" is supposed to mean... The meaning you put into it is ''almost'' clear, but isn't [ | :BTW, whatever "''crusty'' woman" is supposed to mean... The meaning you put into it is ''almost'' clear, but isn't [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Crusty&direction=prev&oldid=124117982#Stereotype "crusty"] completely improper? | ||
as far as I know "crusty" can be referred ''sensu latu'' to a person , like a military officer. | |||
::[[User:Guido|guido]] 22:34, 29 November 2006 (CEST) | |||
:Also, the hearing range of Ms. Hishikawa is minimal because of the downpour | :Also, the hearing range of Ms. Hishikawa is minimal because of the downpour | ||
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:It would help if she's indeed f##ked-up by her exile, but then again I have trouble imagining her f##ked-up, too. | :It would help if she's indeed f##ked-up by her exile, but then again I have trouble imagining her f##ked-up, too. | ||
::[[User:Geyser|geyser]] 21:13, 28 October 2006 (CEST) | ::[[User:Geyser|geyser]] 21:13, 28 October 2006 (CEST) | ||
:I am convinced that the exile is a choice or a status mirroring Konoko's pride rather than a surrender. [...] | |||
::[[User:Guido|guido]] 22:24, 29 November 2006 (CEST) | |||
;Follow-up discussion moved on [[Talk:Pride]]... | |||
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