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==Ragged Konoko== | ==Ragged Konoko== | ||
[[Image:GUIDORaggedKonoko.jpg|right|thumb|Ragged Konoko<br>[[:Image:GUIDORaggedKonoko.jpg|(MORE)]]]] | |||
:good. short, sweet, to the point. | :good. short, sweet, to the point. | ||
:I have a hard time imagining konoko ragged -- after all, she's the toughest and quickest to bounce back, and she has a lot of pride -- but that's my only crit. | :I have a hard time imagining konoko ragged -- after all, she's the toughest and quickest to bounce back, and she has a lot of pride -- but that's my only crit. | ||
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::(proofreading and re-translation by:[[User:Geyser|geyser]] 21:13, 28 October 2006 (CEST) ^^) | ::(proofreading and re-translation by:[[User:Geyser|geyser]] 21:13, 28 October 2006 (CEST) ^^) | ||
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:Quite a few inconsistencies in the first sentence, which I assume to be close to what Konoko is supposed to have experienced before the scene | :Quite a few inconsistencies in the first sentence, which I assume to be close to what Konoko is supposed to have experienced before the scene | ||