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==Some Notes==
Incoming from [[Oni2_talk:Camp]]
:''You'll be on a safer ground naming-wise if you start with a short, fresh overview of your key characters and entities...''


Auf der einen Seite soll RS natürlich ein Fan-Fiction werden;<br>
'''(work in progress)'''
auf der anderen Seite aber auch ein Science-Fiction mit Zukunftswarnungen.<br>
Ich hoffe, dass man das gut kombinieren kann.


Ob es ein ''Happy End'' gibt? Mal sehen...
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=Entries=
Some name are more or less place holder names'''(*)'''. Any suggestion is welcome.
==Camp Sturmanderung==
Strikers prefer to say "Camp" as code name for the whole complex. Most of of it lies underground.
It's "hosted" by GUR as more or less official maximum security prison. (It was the Syndicate price for helping GUR during the Great Uprising.)
Death penalty is still supported by GUR's law, that way the Syndicate can cover their "new deals" towards their inmates. Sarcastic voices name it also "gladiator farm".
The underground complex contains facilities for research (by supercomputers), production (including Daodan and heavy weapons), and a TITAN module.
Needed electricity is in great part received from a beneath lying [[wikipedia:Geothermal_power|geothermal power]] station which works as [[wikipedia:Closed_system|closed system]].
==GATC==
'''(*)''' Gathered Anti-Terror Commandos
GATC was formed during the Great Uprising in 2032 by a resisting third of the United States known as "New Confederation". (Its constitution was in great part like the old one.)
The [[wikipedia:International_Emergency_Economic_Powers_Act|International Emergency Economic Powers Act]] allowed to claim an "unusual and extraordinary threat... to the national security, foreign policy, or economy of the New Confederation". And GATC was ordered to take down this "threat" because the so-called World Coalition Government ([[WCG]]) was going to be founded in claim for sole representation - no market or nation should be left. Minorities were going to be ignored.
A fight between native people was a no-go. So, GATC took chance to team up with other WCG opponents (including later the "[[Syndicate#History_of_the_Syndicate|Network]]" and the "[[Oni2:Restless_Souls/Shinobi|Shinobi]]").
Africa had many resisting countries so GATC used the situation to set up a "[[wikipedia:Proxy_war|proxy war]]" there.
However, they lost the war. GATC kept operating in the underground - financed by pro-NC concerns mainly military industry. GATC is marked by using cutting-edge technologies in faith to ensure their success that way.
==GATC: Blackstars==
Blackstars is that special platoon (counted 40 units at beginning).
It is GATC's elite executive but their existence is official denied. Sort of a modern "[[wikipedia:Jin-Roh|Jin-Roh]]".
Blackstars claimed itself as mercenary group in 2034 after the war. That way GATC kept on track with the Syndicate which has became hostile towards them.
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==GOP==
'''(*)''' Guardians Of Paradise
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GOP thinks apocalypse is nigh because of the [[BioCrisis]] and the war.
They pray for redemption and believe that god will give back paradise to human kind which is supposed to be on earth.
They are planned to mirroring human's highest wishes. And high-tech seems to make those wishes becomes true. Paradisical life conditions, great knowledge, physical power, immortality, etc.
But in total GOP will be a very minor point.
Related: [[Restless_Souls/Reconstruction#Globale_Entwicklungen|possible future expectations]] (last blue box) (translation comes later)
==Green Village==
Green Village is a huge research complex which had focused on environmental technologies at first, now on the wide field of genetics.
:'''(The existence of smog in Oni is discussable but it would give me a ''nicer'' background. And then there's also a bit that shall explain why smog is reduced ''now'' again...)'''
'''Historical context'''
"[[wikipedia:Global_Warming|Global Warming]]" caused [[wikipedia:Effects_of_global_warming|not only storms]], flood and droughts, it led to new discussion about using "[[wikipedia:Planetary_engineering#Geoengineering|geoengineering]]".
In 2031 harvest rates dropped because of the regions atypical climates. Humans ecological sins seemed to appear now with more strength.
But scientists feared even worse. Now a bit more increasing temperature of oceans would set free a gigantic volume of [[wikipedia:Methane_clathrate|methane hydrate]] (Ergo Proxy note on that side^^) which would heat up the atmosphere for [[wikipedia:Effects_of_global_warming#Methane_release_from_hydrates|another 5 ° and causing mass extinction]].
[...]
'''''Need for smog'''''
The discussion about geoengineering was ongoing but time seemed to be over. The unofficial founder of WCG took a dummy who believed in the chance of "[[wikipedia:Global_Dimming|Global Dimming]]".
[...]
'''After WCG founding'''
The provisional solution  WCG fired their dummy, Green Village became a "[[wikipedia:Black_project|black project]]" and connection to the [[Oni2:AVATARA|AVATARA]] network.
However, a second research complex was build called "Silver Village" (placeholder name). It focused on a solution to decrease both: global warming and dimming. The result were the [[ACC|Atmospheric Conversion Centers (ACC)]]. They left the project on a barely acceptable level which took mainly care of smog and went onto other researches on the wide field of nano-technology.
'''After Strumanderung'''
Muro was killed. That left a power vacuum in the Syndicate. Kumo was one of who tried to became the next big boss.
He ordered a special team to infiltrated and take over Green Village. He wanted WCG's Daodan project. [[Oni2:GATC|GATC]] knew that and decided to bomb the complex. The fusion reactor exploded and contaminated in great parts the area with radioactive materials.
==GUR==
'''(*)''' Great Union of Resistance
(Formed by most of African and a few Middle East countries during the Great Uprising.)
From the [[Restless Souls/BC0|prologue]]:
:''A second front was on cultural basis. Developing countries and states of the Islamic world saw the annexation of their (living and) economic zones as another cheating by the Western World; the "Colonial Legacy" deemed as proof that capitalism brought only harm.''
:''The ongoing radicalization of both sides and smaller escalations gave WCG the possibility to propagandise the "[[wikipedia:Clash_of_Civilizations|Clash of Civilizations]]".''
==META==
Idea here: having META as synergy/fusion of WCG and Syndicate.
==Operation Proteus==
Traton's PR attack and final hit on WCG. He polarizes the masses and let chase them state institutions like TCTF.
==Shinobi==
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(Shinobi: another word for ninja)
Ninja's golden age was during the [[wikipedia:Sengoku_period|sengoku period]] (1477 - 1573). Then the Ninjutsu schools (Ryû) began to disappear again. The rest was further reduced after Japan had lost WWII - they were prohibited to have any martial arts. But, however, some Ryû survived.
Then there was a reviving of the Ninjutsu. WCG's declaration meant also the loss of Japan. Terror groups arose to force their own Government to refuse the this union. These groups weren't very effective despite of modern weapons. Then there was a ''notable''  attack. Three men covered as security personal took down all the others and got the conference under their control. The minister had to read the group's reasons not to join WCG in front of invited reporters. This was ''just'' a warning. The three left as soon as the special forces began to storm the building. This created a new myth of the Ninjutsu.
The Shinobi absorbed other radical forces. But homeland Japan was lost, in the end they couldn't keep pace with WCG security arrangements.
They teamed up with GATC and Syndicate to fight WCG on last battle fields. It was a matter of strength again. GATC fell back - caring their wounds. And Syndicate tried to ''lull'' Shinobi by forming them into a stronger and guerilla-like force. Meanwhile - Mukade worked too closely with Syndicates. Muro's provides him a Chrysalis. (Non-TNZ idea here.) That corrupted Mukade slowly.
The Shinobi were actually never conform. But Mukade create an inner conflict. He was about to win members for the Sturmanderung ideology backed up by reinterpreted Ninjutsu philosophy.
Time passed. The resisting men were quite hopeless and ''said goodbye'' to their homeland already. They realized Sturmanderung's madness but are afraid to rise against Mukade.
If just Mukade wouldn't be...
==Silver Village (place holder name)==
A WCG research complex for nano-technology in the USA. It's newest project: Silver Dawn.
[...]
==Sturmanderung==
Another idea is that Sturmanderung hasn't started with Muro.
[...]
==Syndicate==
'''Streams within the Syndicate'''
* conservatives - BGI and now mainly dead Syndicate heads who thought/think that the situation before Muro was best
* moderates - people like Traton who supported Muro's rising for their own interests and maniacs who believed in the necessity of breaking the WCG until they realized that Muro wants Armageddon
* progressives - ideological goal: recreation of mankind because the "old form" almost destroyed itself ("time for a new evolution" ''and so on'')
'''Hierarchy (suggestion)'''
* professional units (Striker) are "educated in the spirit of Sturmanderung"
* (Strikers aren't directly sworn to the boss or subbosses but to Sturmanderung's ideology)
* they are send to all subbosses to support their regions as long as they aren't ordered to do something that can threat Sturmanderung
* on the other side subbosses have to contribute Sturmanderung by one third of their "incomes"
* subbosses are independent in own doings within their region
* (every subboss has numerous commanders which control one provinces or city)
* commanders have their own thugs, even temporary command on Strikers needs permission from a subboss
(We still don't have an idea on Syndicate's hierarchy, this is a first try.)
==WCG==
'''historical context'''
The environmental crisis (also named [[BioCrisis]]) badly damaged agriculture, industry based on it, and immovables.
That kick off a wave of insurance payments. And banks had to prevent becoming insolvent by cancelling any more credits to the people and the governments which were already blank because of public outcry for financial help of reconstruction. That again caused inflation.
'''founding'''
How was this going to be solved? A ''reset'' seemed the only way out.
They ''banished'' all old debts: covered by dissolving the states; a more resistant agriculture was set up which included new production machines, genetically modified plants, hydroponic farms for wasteland,  [...] [...]
Side notes:
*[[wikipedia:Black Projects|Black Projects]]
*TCTF: [[wikipedia:Black_op|Black Ops]]
=Characters=
Minor characters are:
:Dakosta (takes major action much later)
:Kumo (pro-BGI Syndicate subboss)
:Lynn (GATC soldier, TCTF BlackOps)
:Manson (GATC soldier, TCTF SWAT)
:Rayn (WCG president)
:Rockwell (MissionFailed-guy, candidate for BlackOps)
:Saomi (Muro's fency, believes in Sturmanderung -- optional character)
:Takashi (Traton's security chef)
:Taylor (friend of Nishio)
:Tosahiri (TCTF, [[Restless_Souls/Reconstruction#GOPs_.26_Dakosta.27s_Geschichte|Dakosta's watchdog]])
==Clarg==
WCG member. He'll become president of the new "government" (just another regime which I would call META =) ).
==Daya==
A daodanized Fury which loss her faith in Syndicate's Sturmanderung ideology.
One of RS's topics will be military aspects. (Compare it with Metal Gear if you like.) ''Has a soldier to follow his administration's order no matter what? Or are there limits. If yes which and how to act in such a case? What can be done alone?'' .. things like that. She is supposed to discuss those with other characters - with Mukade and Nishio for sure so far.
==Hasegawa==
Well, actually, somehow, I think the real Hasegawa is dead... (It's just my feeling as wannabe writer.) This will leave a hole in
==Jareth==
He's a WCG "pool reporter". For example he blandished the Wilderness Preserve public reports and new technology released from "controlled research". However, he don't very like to be "conform" but wages fits...
His idol is (insert French name here^^)
==Konoko==
She tries to fight for her own life now. GATC makes her realize that Hasegawa could be still alive. They ensure to support her search in case she joins them. She does (for the start).
==Miller==
He belongs to the inner GATC circle and know almost everything. (Maybe he has access to [[Oni2:AVATARA|AVATARA]].)
==Mukade==
Is it really him or an altered Hasegawa? Open question.
==Nishio==
He don't understand the sense of life so he search his answers in philosophies. He will portrays several directions but ends almost in nihilisms which stands for his world's current spirit of the age .. Zeitgeist.
==Traton==
One of the subbosses who fight for the boss position - and he'll succeed.
But on that way he have to take care on inner enemies like Kumo and Saomi (optional).
=Chapters // synopsis so far=
==Prologue: Smouldering Ember (Part I)==
==Prologue: Smouldering Ember (Part I)==
(Schwelende Glut (PartI))
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* Oni's alte und neue Weltordnung wird in ihren Grundzügen vorgestellt. - Ein totalitäres System übernahm ein anderes. ''Konoko and friends'' versuchen die Öffentlichkeit zu überzeugen, dass die META nicht das ist, wofür sie gehalten wird...
*The prologue is an outlook into the future. -- The new “government” want to celebrate WCG’s fall after one year, having a speech in the Tokio Dom. But instead “terrorists” comes into the stadium and tells the full story to the audience... The prologue ends in the middle of the story. (We don't want to spoil.)
* Der Prolog erklärt auch die GATC nach ihrer eigenen Sicht und lässt aber auch Zweifel offen, die Hunger auf mehr machen sollen.
* current German beta [[Restless_Souls/BC0|HERE]]
* [[Restless_Souls/BC0|current beta]]
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==Chapter 1: Bad News==
==Chapter 1: Bad News==
(Schlechte Nachrichten)
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* Die erste Frage die man sich als Fan sicher fragt, ist wie es nach ''Oni 1'' weitergeht. Naja, genau das soll mit diesem Kapitel beantwortet werden. Desweiteren wird der Beta-Charakter wieder eingebaut. Sein vorläufiger Name: Jack Rockwell.
*Fans might ask want happens right after Konoko battled Muro. Well, this is what the first Chapter starts with. In additional they meets the MissionFailed-guy.
* WCG und Syndikat sind im Moment mit sich selbst beschäftigt. Traton erfährt von kritischen GATC-Actionen. (Der Syndikat Puppet Master ist ein Doppelagent...)
*WCG is more or less shocked and the Syndicate "headless". Traton (a new character) want to take his chance of becoming the next big boss and flies into the old headquarters. Before that he take care of a mountain compound. It is of no longer use and a threat as evidence for TCTF and WGC so he activates the self-destruction. He picks up a hostile but injured and unconscious unit, his name; Manson. His cybernetics wasn't TCTF-like. That made Traton curious. He release the man on place with a modified radio set, ready to pass a copy transmission at the Syndicate...
* Konoko ist zurück. Die lokale TCTF, in der Person Joost, würde sie zu gern in Gewahrsam nehmen. Doch Tracy, Mitglied des Direktorats und Verbindungsmann zur GATC, lässt Konoko auf freien Fuß.
*Konoko is back at the TCTF but gets a chance working for an independent power called GATC. They decoy Konoko’s self-interest – promising to support the search of her missing father Hasegawa.
* Die GATC unterbreitet nun Konoko das Angebot für sie zu arbeiten. Damit sie auch mitmacht, deuten sie an, dass Hasegawa noch im Syndikat sein könnte - sie setzen also auf Konoko's Eigeninteresse.
* current German beta [[Restless_Souls/BC1|HERE]]
* [http://www.webspace-invasion.com/jackd/Alpha.htm#K1 old alpha]
* [[Restless_Souls/BC1|current beta]]
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==Chapter 2: Situation Clearing==
==Chapter 2: Situation Clearing==
(Situationsklärung)
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* Die Handlung springt in das Gebiet der GUR. Das versteckte Sturmanderung-Camp wird vorgestellt.
* Now the plot jumps into South Africa with is territory of the GUR. It’s the Camp’s introduction as second Syndicate base.
* (Vor drei Stunden wurde Mukade reanimiert. Im folgenden lief er Amok. Seine Gefolgsleute vertuschten den Vorfall. Sie nahmen aus ihren Reihen einen Sündenbock und wahrten Mukade's Gesicht. -- Wenn es sich um Hasegawa handelt, könnten wir ähnlich vorgehen. -- Oder sie stellen Mukade ruhig und überlassen Kojiro das Commando.)
* The Camp director is aware of Muro’s death. That’s why he pushed Mukade’s last step of reanimation process forward. "Obviously" somebody didn’t like that and tried to completely erase him. The case is being investigated.
* Nach Muro's Tod möchte Traton in der Hierarchie nachrücken, also trifft er sich mit dem Leiter des Camps. Nicht nur, dass die Ninja sich merkwürdig verhalten, er muss sich auch noch mit Muro's Geliebten auseinandersetzen, die auch Rache sinnt.
* However, Traton need the director to back-up his rising and discuss further actions.
* Kumo, ein Subboss des Syndikats, hat Daya beauftragt den Puppet Master zu schnappen.
* An optional element comes here in. Muro’s fency (Saomi) is making her own plans about the new Syndicate but this includes also Konoko. She wants vengeance.
* Kumo erfährt von Green Village vom Puppet Master. Er sieht eine Chance seine Macht auszubauen und agiert nun weiter auf eigene Rechnung. Er schickt Daya zur nächsten Mission nach Green Villag (in Russland).
* The plot jumps again. There’s another subbboss who wants to raise one position. It is Kumo. He is actually pro-BGI-minded. While Traton waits for a transmission from Manson Kumo let investigated the other clued from him. Manson had contact to the inner WCG circle – it’s a person who is actually a Syndicate mole. But now Traton doubts. Daya discovers that the man is <!--Tony--> Tether’s  "personal advisor" – a puppet master. She receives information about Green Village from him. That research complex runs an advanced Daodan program. Kumo want it in hope to be able fighting for the boss title. (He can also count with BGI’s support.) Daya flies to Green Village (in Russia).
* Traton trifft sich derzeit mit einem Vertreter der GUR und der WCG. Er prüft ob er weitere Verbündete sammeln kann.
* Meanwhile Traton checks WCG and GUR administration for other allies.  
* [http://www.webspace-invasion.com/jackd/Alpha.htm#K2 old alpha]
* Unfinished German beta [[Restless_Souls/BC2|HERE]]
* [[Restless_Souls/BC2|current beta]]
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* '''(Mukade) Hier beginnen die ersten Konflikte bzw. Pluralism. Da man sich für eine Sache entscheiden muss, wären "erst Irrtümer dann Wharheit" eine Möglichkeit. Ein weitere Alternative ist, dass man die Sachen irgendwie aus verschiedenen Blickwinkeln betrachtet, aber keine Lösung gibt oder der Leser selbst entscheidet an was er glauben soll.'''
* '''Eine andere Frage ist ob man Mukade überhaupt wieder reinbastelt.'''
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==Chapter 3: Daily Shadows==
==Chapter 3: Daily Shadows==
(Alltagsschatten) (correct translation: Everyday Life Shadows)
"Alltagsschatten"; correct translation: "Everyday Life Shadows"


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* <font color="#777">Degeneriertes Stadtleben... Gragol ist auf Tour, mal sein Gehirn ''lüften'', als plötzlich die TCTF ihn aufgreift. Gragol ist als Reverse Engineer entlarvt und soll mit der TCTF kooperieren, die Firma für die er arbeitet hochzunehmen. (Die Firma heißt "Reserection Serv" und führt offiziell Reparaturdienste in allen Größen durch.)</font> (Vielleicht sollte ich den Charakter einfach streichen.)
* New thematic: city life and how it will change during the upcoming "black season". [...]
* Ein weiterer neuer Handlungsstrang beginnt. Dakosta, Web-Security und Hacker in eigener Sache, beauftragt einen Reporter mit der Recherche an dem Tod seiner Eltern (welche vor Jahren von der GATC umgebracht wurden.) Für die GATC war es Kollateralschaden, Blackstars sollte dem Syndikat ihre Loyalität beweisen. Der Anschlag auf Daisuke's Vater brachte allerdings nicht den gewünschten Effekt - Blackstars arbeitet von da nie wieder für das Syndikat.)
* Nishio is sort of reverse engineer and works at a repair shop called "Reserection Serv". (The firm policy doesn’t care about patents.) So no wonder, the police are on Nishio’s track. They are about to make a deal with him: if he will come up with heavy evidence for major illegal business they will forget his little doings.
* Jareth nimmt den Auftrag von Dakosta an. Bei der Gelegenheit besucht er ein Kollegen der zuletzt an einer Reportage über die ACC gearbeitet hat, diese aber nie öffentlich wurde...
* Another string comes into play. Jareth (the WCG reporter) is contacted by Dakosta (web security and hacker in own mission). He wants him to investigate a terror act which happened 12 years ago, Jareth has to find his old mentor to get a starting point. He was involved but didn’t released all information...
* (Dakosta wurde als Kind in die Obhut der TCTF gegeben.) '''[[User:Paradox-01/quotes_Tracy_about_Daisuke|<nowiki>[1]</nowiki>]]''' '''[[Restless_Souls/Reconstruction#GOPs_.26_Dakosta.27s_Geschichte|<nowiki>[2]</nowiki>]]''' Tosahiri unterstützte bislang Dakostas Versuche mehr über seine Vergangenheit herauszufinden. Doch er kann nicht länger tolerieren, dass Dakosta TCTF-Datenbanken durchforstet.
* [http://www.webspace-invasion.com/jackd/Alpha.htm#K3 old alpha]
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==Chapter 4: Burnt Soil==
==Chapter 4: Burnt Soil==
(<strike>Trügerische Ruhe - Deceitful Peace</strike> mal wieder geändert: Verbrannte Erde)
<strike>"Trügerische Ruhe" - "Deceitful Peace"</strike> again changed to: "Verbrannte Erde"


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* Verbrannte Erde... Daya's Übernahme des WCG-Forschungskomplexes Green Village wird von der GATC in einem radikalen Weg verhindert.  Nach ihrer Sicht: Wenn der Komplex nicht zu halten ist, fällt er wenigstens nicht ans Syndikate; außerdem erscheinen dann Kompromisse wie META unwahrscheinlicher.
* Burnt Soil... GATC stops Green Village’s infiltration by bombing it like "if we cannot have it then they too". -- A official explanation to GATC soldiers: "In additional: Negotiations between Syndicate and WCG becomes that way more unlikely.")
* Tokio's Prototyp eines Kugelfeldwerfers wird aktiviert. Verseuchte Luft erreicht die Städte.
* But the effect was under their expectancy. Some complex areas are still intact.
* (Offene Frage: Wird Traton am Subboss Kumo ein Exempel statuieren? Will Traton so die Hierarchie klarstellen und gleichzeitig ein Übereifrigen beseitigen?)
* At same time poison air reach first cities.  
* [http://www.webspace-invasion.com/jackd/Alpha.htm#K4 old alpha]
* Traton is about thinking what to do with Kumo. "Making an example of him?"
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==Chapter 5: Neverending==
==Chapter 5: Neverending==
(Problem über alles)
"Problem über alles"


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* Black Season... Flüchtling vom Land flüchten in die Städte. (Es wird bald zu Konflikten kommen.)
* Environmental refugees flow into the cities. It’s just a matter of until conflicts arise between refugees and city habitants.
* Konoko soll die Lage in Green Village aufklären.
* The Syndicate is not the only trace. WCG has also an advanced program. (Or maybe the datas are shared via AVATARA?)
* Mukade wird auf Konoko angesetzt.
*However, Konoko flies to Green Village in hope to collect some information from the undestroyed complex areas and then to guess where Hasegawa is.
* WCG erhält von GATC die Koordinaten des Sturmanderung-Camps.
* Mukade begins to track down Konoko – for his own reason but in official mission because Traton can her as scapegoat. (That would also fits Saomi’s desire for vengeance.)
* '''[http://www.webspace-invasion.com/jackd/Alpha.htm#Total Rest of alphas] (it will differ more and more from now on)'''
* WCG receives Sturmanderung Camp’s coordinates from a covered source – it’s GATC. (They want both down: WCG and Syndicate.)
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==Chapter 6: The Proteus Operation==
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* Die Proteusoperation... Traton lässt Videos von den Menschheitsverbrechen der TCTF und WCG ausstrahlen - teils gefälscht.
* Operation Proteus... Traton's PR attack and final hit on WCG. He polarize the masses and chase them onto state institutions like TCTF.
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'''... work in progress'''
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==Chapter 8: New Friends, Old Foes==
 
==Chapter 8: New Friends, Old Foes (WIP)==
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Revision as of 23:03, 29 March 2008

Incoming from Oni2_talk:Camp

You'll be on a safer ground naming-wise if you start with a short, fresh overview of your key characters and entities...

(work in progress)


Entries

Some name are more or less place holder names(*). Any suggestion is welcome.


Camp Sturmanderung

Strikers prefer to say "Camp" as code name for the whole complex. Most of of it lies underground.

It's "hosted" by GUR as more or less official maximum security prison. (It was the Syndicate price for helping GUR during the Great Uprising.)

Death penalty is still supported by GUR's law, that way the Syndicate can cover their "new deals" towards their inmates. Sarcastic voices name it also "gladiator farm".


The underground complex contains facilities for research (by supercomputers), production (including Daodan and heavy weapons), and a TITAN module. Needed electricity is in great part received from a beneath lying geothermal power station which works as closed system.


GATC

(*) Gathered Anti-Terror Commandos

GATC was formed during the Great Uprising in 2032 by a resisting third of the United States known as "New Confederation". (Its constitution was in great part like the old one.)

The International Emergency Economic Powers Act allowed to claim an "unusual and extraordinary threat... to the national security, foreign policy, or economy of the New Confederation". And GATC was ordered to take down this "threat" because the so-called World Coalition Government (WCG) was going to be founded in claim for sole representation - no market or nation should be left. Minorities were going to be ignored.

A fight between native people was a no-go. So, GATC took chance to team up with other WCG opponents (including later the "Network" and the "Shinobi").

Africa had many resisting countries so GATC used the situation to set up a "proxy war" there.

However, they lost the war. GATC kept operating in the underground - financed by pro-NC concerns mainly military industry. GATC is marked by using cutting-edge technologies in faith to ensure their success that way.


GATC: Blackstars

Blackstars is that special platoon (counted 40 units at beginning). It is GATC's elite executive but their existence is official denied. Sort of a modern "Jin-Roh".

Blackstars claimed itself as mercenary group in 2034 after the war. That way GATC kept on track with the Syndicate which has became hostile towards them.


GOP

(*) Guardians Of Paradise

GOP thinks apocalypse is nigh because of the BioCrisis and the war. They pray for redemption and believe that god will give back paradise to human kind which is supposed to be on earth.


They are planned to mirroring human's highest wishes. And high-tech seems to make those wishes becomes true. Paradisical life conditions, great knowledge, physical power, immortality, etc.

But in total GOP will be a very minor point.

Related: possible future expectations (last blue box) (translation comes later)


Green Village

Green Village is a huge research complex which had focused on environmental technologies at first, now on the wide field of genetics.

(The existence of smog in Oni is discussable but it would give me a nicer background. And then there's also a bit that shall explain why smog is reduced now again...)

Historical context

"Global Warming" caused not only storms, flood and droughts, it led to new discussion about using "geoengineering".

In 2031 harvest rates dropped because of the regions atypical climates. Humans ecological sins seemed to appear now with more strength.

But scientists feared even worse. Now a bit more increasing temperature of oceans would set free a gigantic volume of methane hydrate (Ergo Proxy note on that side^^) which would heat up the atmosphere for another 5 ° and causing mass extinction. [...]


Need for smog

The discussion about geoengineering was ongoing but time seemed to be over. The unofficial founder of WCG took a dummy who believed in the chance of "Global Dimming". [...]


After WCG founding

The provisional solution WCG fired their dummy, Green Village became a "black project" and connection to the AVATARA network.

However, a second research complex was build called "Silver Village" (placeholder name). It focused on a solution to decrease both: global warming and dimming. The result were the Atmospheric Conversion Centers (ACC). They left the project on a barely acceptable level which took mainly care of smog and went onto other researches on the wide field of nano-technology.


After Strumanderung

Muro was killed. That left a power vacuum in the Syndicate. Kumo was one of who tried to became the next big boss.

He ordered a special team to infiltrated and take over Green Village. He wanted WCG's Daodan project. GATC knew that and decided to bomb the complex. The fusion reactor exploded and contaminated in great parts the area with radioactive materials.


GUR

(*) Great Union of Resistance

(Formed by most of African and a few Middle East countries during the Great Uprising.)

From the prologue:

A second front was on cultural basis. Developing countries and states of the Islamic world saw the annexation of their (living and) economic zones as another cheating by the Western World; the "Colonial Legacy" deemed as proof that capitalism brought only harm.
The ongoing radicalization of both sides and smaller escalations gave WCG the possibility to propagandise the "Clash of Civilizations".


META

Idea here: having META as synergy/fusion of WCG and Syndicate.


Operation Proteus

Traton's PR attack and final hit on WCG. He polarizes the masses and let chase them state institutions like TCTF.


Shinobi

(Shinobi: another word for ninja)

Ninja's golden age was during the sengoku period (1477 - 1573). Then the Ninjutsu schools (Ryû) began to disappear again. The rest was further reduced after Japan had lost WWII - they were prohibited to have any martial arts. But, however, some Ryû survived.

Then there was a reviving of the Ninjutsu. WCG's declaration meant also the loss of Japan. Terror groups arose to force their own Government to refuse the this union. These groups weren't very effective despite of modern weapons. Then there was a notable attack. Three men covered as security personal took down all the others and got the conference under their control. The minister had to read the group's reasons not to join WCG in front of invited reporters. This was just a warning. The three left as soon as the special forces began to storm the building. This created a new myth of the Ninjutsu.

The Shinobi absorbed other radical forces. But homeland Japan was lost, in the end they couldn't keep pace with WCG security arrangements.

They teamed up with GATC and Syndicate to fight WCG on last battle fields. It was a matter of strength again. GATC fell back - caring their wounds. And Syndicate tried to lull Shinobi by forming them into a stronger and guerilla-like force. Meanwhile - Mukade worked too closely with Syndicates. Muro's provides him a Chrysalis. (Non-TNZ idea here.) That corrupted Mukade slowly.

The Shinobi were actually never conform. But Mukade create an inner conflict. He was about to win members for the Sturmanderung ideology backed up by reinterpreted Ninjutsu philosophy.

Time passed. The resisting men were quite hopeless and said goodbye to their homeland already. They realized Sturmanderung's madness but are afraid to rise against Mukade.

If just Mukade wouldn't be...


Silver Village (place holder name)

A WCG research complex for nano-technology in the USA. It's newest project: Silver Dawn. [...]


Sturmanderung

Another idea is that Sturmanderung hasn't started with Muro. [...]


Syndicate

Streams within the Syndicate

  • conservatives - BGI and now mainly dead Syndicate heads who thought/think that the situation before Muro was best
  • moderates - people like Traton who supported Muro's rising for their own interests and maniacs who believed in the necessity of breaking the WCG until they realized that Muro wants Armageddon
  • progressives - ideological goal: recreation of mankind because the "old form" almost destroyed itself ("time for a new evolution" and so on)


Hierarchy (suggestion)

  • professional units (Striker) are "educated in the spirit of Sturmanderung"
  • (Strikers aren't directly sworn to the boss or subbosses but to Sturmanderung's ideology)
  • they are send to all subbosses to support their regions as long as they aren't ordered to do something that can threat Sturmanderung
  • on the other side subbosses have to contribute Sturmanderung by one third of their "incomes"
  • subbosses are independent in own doings within their region
  • (every subboss has numerous commanders which control one provinces or city)
  • commanders have their own thugs, even temporary command on Strikers needs permission from a subboss

(We still don't have an idea on Syndicate's hierarchy, this is a first try.)


WCG

historical context

The environmental crisis (also named BioCrisis) badly damaged agriculture, industry based on it, and immovables.

That kick off a wave of insurance payments. And banks had to prevent becoming insolvent by cancelling any more credits to the people and the governments which were already blank because of public outcry for financial help of reconstruction. That again caused inflation.


founding

How was this going to be solved? A reset seemed the only way out.

They banished all old debts: covered by dissolving the states; a more resistant agriculture was set up which included new production machines, genetically modified plants, hydroponic farms for wasteland, [...] [...]


Side notes:


Characters

Minor characters are:

Dakosta (takes major action much later)
Kumo (pro-BGI Syndicate subboss)
Lynn (GATC soldier, TCTF BlackOps)
Manson (GATC soldier, TCTF SWAT)
Rayn (WCG president)
Rockwell (MissionFailed-guy, candidate for BlackOps)
Saomi (Muro's fency, believes in Sturmanderung -- optional character)
Takashi (Traton's security chef)
Taylor (friend of Nishio)
Tosahiri (TCTF, Dakosta's watchdog)


Clarg

WCG member. He'll become president of the new "government" (just another regime which I would call META =) ).


Daya

A daodanized Fury which loss her faith in Syndicate's Sturmanderung ideology.

One of RS's topics will be military aspects. (Compare it with Metal Gear if you like.) Has a soldier to follow his administration's order no matter what? Or are there limits. If yes which and how to act in such a case? What can be done alone? .. things like that. She is supposed to discuss those with other characters - with Mukade and Nishio for sure so far.


Hasegawa

Well, actually, somehow, I think the real Hasegawa is dead... (It's just my feeling as wannabe writer.) This will leave a hole in


Jareth

He's a WCG "pool reporter". For example he blandished the Wilderness Preserve public reports and new technology released from "controlled research". However, he don't very like to be "conform" but wages fits...

His idol is (insert French name here^^)


Konoko

She tries to fight for her own life now. GATC makes her realize that Hasegawa could be still alive. They ensure to support her search in case she joins them. She does (for the start).


Miller

He belongs to the inner GATC circle and know almost everything. (Maybe he has access to AVATARA.)


Mukade

Is it really him or an altered Hasegawa? Open question.


Nishio

He don't understand the sense of life so he search his answers in philosophies. He will portrays several directions but ends almost in nihilisms which stands for his world's current spirit of the age .. Zeitgeist.


Traton

One of the subbosses who fight for the boss position - and he'll succeed.

But on that way he have to take care on inner enemies like Kumo and Saomi (optional).


Chapters // synopsis so far

Prologue: Smouldering Ember (Part I)

"Schwelende Glut" (PartI)

  • The prologue is an outlook into the future. -- The new “government” want to celebrate WCG’s fall after one year, having a speech in the Tokio Dom. But instead “terrorists” comes into the stadium and tells the full story to the audience... The prologue ends in the middle of the story. (We don't want to spoil.)
  • current German beta HERE


Chapter 1: Bad News

"Schlechte Nachrichten"

  • Fans might ask want happens right after Konoko battled Muro. Well, this is what the first Chapter starts with. In additional they meets the MissionFailed-guy.
  • WCG is more or less shocked and the Syndicate "headless". Traton (a new character) want to take his chance of becoming the next big boss and flies into the old headquarters. Before that he take care of a mountain compound. It is of no longer use and a threat as evidence for TCTF and WGC so he activates the self-destruction. He picks up a hostile but injured and unconscious unit, his name; Manson. His cybernetics wasn't TCTF-like. That made Traton curious. He release the man on place with a modified radio set, ready to pass a copy transmission at the Syndicate...
  • Konoko is back at the TCTF but gets a chance working for an independent power called GATC. They decoy Konoko’s self-interest – promising to support the search of her missing father Hasegawa.
  • current German beta HERE


Chapter 2: Situation Clearing

"Situationsklärung"

  • Now the plot jumps into South Africa with is territory of the GUR. It’s the Camp’s introduction as second Syndicate base.
  • The Camp director is aware of Muro’s death. That’s why he pushed Mukade’s last step of reanimation process forward. "Obviously" somebody didn’t like that and tried to completely erase him. The case is being investigated.
  • However, Traton need the director to back-up his rising and discuss further actions.
  • An optional element comes here in. Muro’s fency (Saomi) is making her own plans about the new Syndicate but this includes also Konoko. She wants vengeance.
  • The plot jumps again. There’s another subbboss who wants to raise one position. It is Kumo. He is actually pro-BGI-minded. While Traton waits for a transmission from Manson Kumo let investigated the other clued from him. Manson had contact to the inner WCG circle – it’s a person who is actually a Syndicate mole. But now Traton doubts. Daya discovers that the man is Tether’s "personal advisor" – a puppet master. She receives information about Green Village from him. That research complex runs an advanced Daodan program. Kumo want it in hope to be able fighting for the boss title. (He can also count with BGI’s support.) Daya flies to Green Village (in Russia).
  • Meanwhile Traton checks WCG and GUR administration for other allies.
  • Unfinished German beta HERE


Chapter 3: Daily Shadows

"Alltagsschatten"; correct translation: "Everyday Life Shadows"

  • New thematic: city life and how it will change during the upcoming "black season". [...]
  • Nishio is sort of reverse engineer and works at a repair shop called "Reserection Serv". (The firm policy doesn’t care about patents.) So no wonder, the police are on Nishio’s track. They are about to make a deal with him: if he will come up with heavy evidence for major illegal business they will forget his little doings.
  • Another string comes into play. Jareth (the WCG reporter) is contacted by Dakosta (web security and hacker in own mission). He wants him to investigate a terror act which happened 12 years ago, Jareth has to find his old mentor to get a starting point. He was involved but didn’t released all information...


Chapter 4: Burnt Soil

"Trügerische Ruhe" - "Deceitful Peace" again changed to: "Verbrannte Erde"

  • Burnt Soil... GATC stops Green Village’s infiltration by bombing it like "if we cannot have it then they too". -- A official explanation to GATC soldiers: "In additional: Negotiations between Syndicate and WCG becomes that way more unlikely.")
  • But the effect was under their expectancy. Some complex areas are still intact.
  • At same time poison air reach first cities.
  • Traton is about thinking what to do with Kumo. "Making an example of him?"


Chapter 5: Neverending

"Problem über alles"

  • Environmental refugees flow into the cities. It’s just a matter of until conflicts arise between refugees and city habitants.
  • The Syndicate is not the only trace. WCG has also an advanced program. (Or maybe the datas are shared via AVATARA?)
  • However, Konoko flies to Green Village in hope to collect some information from the undestroyed complex areas and then to guess where Hasegawa is.
  • Mukade begins to track down Konoko – for his own reason but in official mission because Traton can her as scapegoat. (That would also fits Saomi’s desire for vengeance.)
  • WCG receives Sturmanderung Camp’s coordinates from a covered source – it’s GATC. (They want both down: WCG and Syndicate.)


Chapter 6: Operation Proteus

"Operation Proteus"

  • Operation Proteus... Traton's PR attack and final hit on WCG. He polarize the masses and chase them onto state institutions like TCTF.

... work in progress

[...]

Chapter 14: Smouldering Ember (Part II) (WIP)

"Schwelende Glut" (Part II)

  • Jareth's aim is showing the people that they were used to helps another regime's rising. He want them to mobilize once more but his formulation hurts their ego too much. They still don't want to believe that their action was worthless. So Jareth cannot gain much support from them at that time what force him and his group to fall back.