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 ::[[User:Geyser|geyser]] 23:04, 2 October 2006 (CEST)
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-;"There is a large placid flow in the middle, going downstream."
+;"'''KONOKO''' notices '''SMALLGIRL''' on the shore, drawing water with an old tank"
-:Why would a large placid flow go upstream? Wind? Estuary?
+:Picture, please. For the life of me, I don't get what's happening.
-::[[User:Geyser|geyser]] 23:04, 2 October 2006 (CEST)
+:How can you ''draw water'' (e.g. from the river?) "with" a tank?
+::What, like with a cup? Dump it in, wait until it fills up, pull it out?
+:::Might be a bit heavy for a little girl (starving/dying/whatever)?
+:The first version had "Smallgirl in the shoreline drawing dirt water on an old oil tank".
+:"ON"??? Do you mean she was drinking rainwater off the top of a barrel?
+::[[User:Geyser|geyser]] 04:43, 3 October 2006 (CEST)