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==Issues==
:One good thing with these talk pages is that they can be reorganized at will.
:One good thing with these talk pages is that they can be reorganized at will.


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==Ragged Konoko==
==Ragged Konoko==
[[Image:GUIDORaggedKonoko.jpg|right|thumb|Ragged Konoko]]
[[Image:Guido - Ragged Konoko.jpg|right|thumb|Ragged Konoko]]


:good.  short, sweet, to the point.
:good.  short, sweet, to the point.
:I have a hard time imagining konoko ragged -- after all, she's the toughest and quickest to bounce back, and she has a lot of pride -- but that's my only crit.
:I have a hard time imagining konoko ragged -- after all, she's the toughest and quickest to bounce back, and she has a lot of pride -- but that's my only crit.
:once again, a well done scene.
:once again, a well done scene.
::[[User;AF|AF]]
::;AF
:Picture yourself spending a few weeks in a weather-battered wasteland, with no spare clothes, hardly any drinkable water, and nothing but rock-hard soil to sleep on.
:Picture yourself spending a few weeks in a weather-battered wasteland, with no spare clothes, hardly any drinkable water, and nothing but rock-hard soil to sleep on.
:Take someone who's been pedaling uphill, or climbing up a cliff... a whole day long, and under the pouring rain... and then try imagine what they'd look like after several days/weeks/months of such activity.
:Take someone who's been pedaling uphill, or climbing up a cliff... a whole day long, and under the pouring rain... and then try imagine what they'd look like after several days/weeks/months of such activity.
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:If you choose to picture Konoko as struggling with the environment rather than adapting to it, then you are missing Oni's "symbiosis" completely, and that's a shame.
:If you choose to picture Konoko as struggling with the environment rather than adapting to it, then you are missing Oni's "symbiosis" completely, and that's a shame.
::[[User:Geyser|geyser]] 21:13, 28 October 2006 (CEST)
::[[User:Geyser|geyser]] 21:13, 28 October 2006 (CEST)
[[Image:GUIDO Who said I enjoy acid showers.jpg|right]]
[[Image:Guido - Who said I enjoy acid showers.jpg|right]]
:Well let's take a look at the splashscreen in the end of {{C12}}.
:Well let's take a look at the splashscreen in the end of {{C12}}.
:Konoko doesn't give me the idea she is enjoying the acid bath.
:Konoko doesn't give me the idea she is enjoying the acid bath.
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:How much can Konoko suffer? How much does she ''need'' to suffer? (story-wise and ''author''-wise) That's something we ought to set straight.
:How much can Konoko suffer? How much does she ''need'' to suffer? (story-wise and ''author''-wise) That's something we ought to set straight.
::[[User:Geyser|geyser]] 15:07, 30 October 2006 (CET)
::[[User:Geyser|geyser]] 15:07, 30 October 2006 (CET)
Follow-up discussion moved on [[Talk:Pain]].


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[[Image:GUIDO When you need an umbrella.jpg|right]]
[[Image:Guido - When you need an umbrella.jpg|right]]
;Ragged Konoko (redux)
;Ragged Konoko (redux)
:Bottom line for me as for the explanatory sentences :
:Bottom line for me as for the explanatory sentences :
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:"Mrs." means she's married. "Ms." means we don't know. Up to you.
:"Mrs." means she's married. "Ms." means we don't know. Up to you.
::[[User:Geyser|geyser]] 21:13, 28 October 2006 (CEST)
::[[User:Geyser|geyser]] 21:13, 28 October 2006 (CEST)
Mrs.
::[[User:Guido|guido]] 22:34, 29 November 2006 (CEST)
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:Either an overlooked "bug" or an understressed "feature" : Ms. Hishikawa instructing Kazuo to take Konoko to the ambulance, and finally accompanying them all the way.
:Either an overlooked "bug" or an understressed "feature" : Ms. Hishikawa instructing Kazuo to take Konoko to the ambulance, and finally accompanying them all the way.
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:After a good look at Konoko, Kazuo reconsiders his initial impressions, maybe Ms. Hishikawa realizes something as well?
:After a good look at Konoko, Kazuo reconsiders his initial impressions, maybe Ms. Hishikawa realizes something as well?
::[[User:Geyser|geyser]] 21:13, 28 October 2006 (CEST)
::[[User:Geyser|geyser]] 21:13, 28 October 2006 (CEST)
:BTW, whatever "''crusty'' woman" is supposed to mean... The meaning you put into it is ''almost'' clear, but isn't [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Crusty#Stereotype "crusty"] completely improper?
:BTW, whatever "''crusty'' woman" is supposed to mean... The meaning you put into it is ''almost'' clear, but isn't [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Crusty&direction=prev&oldid=124117982#Stereotype "crusty"] completely improper?
 
as far as I know "crusty" can be referred ''sensu latu'' to a person , like a military officer.
::[[User:Guido|guido]] 22:34, 29 November 2006 (CEST)


:Also, the hearing range of Ms. Hishikawa is minimal because of the downpour
:Also, the hearing range of Ms. Hishikawa is minimal because of the downpour
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:It would help if she's indeed f##ked-up by her exile, but then again I have trouble imagining her f##ked-up, too.
:It would help if she's indeed f##ked-up by her exile, but then again I have trouble imagining her f##ked-up, too.
::[[User:Geyser|geyser]] 21:13, 28 October 2006 (CEST)
::[[User:Geyser|geyser]] 21:13, 28 October 2006 (CEST)
:I am convinced that the exile is a choice or a status mirroring Konoko's pride rather than a surrender. [...]
::[[User:Guido|guido]] 22:24, 29 November 2006 (CEST)
;Follow-up discussion moved on [[Talk:Pride]]...
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