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completed general review

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applied Ref template

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applied Reflist template

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did removing these quotes cause the reference error?

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general review through the end of Weapons: various clarifications on U.K. vs. U.S., PS2 vs. PC, and Win vs. Mac differences; added editorial note to Scram Cannon text

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adjustment to new footnote: realized that the Flash site also has the missing words "Special Moves" on these lines, so that simplifies the narrative a bit

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many adjustments to sidebox notes, layout; added more details on what the U.K. studio changed; added explanatory note on our "Special Moves" interpolations because they confused me and I had to retrace why we did that

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uh, it was six paragraphs; let's just put it this way

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changed numeric footnote keys to alphabetical ones to indicate that these are notes to look at, not boring citation footnotes

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lede wording; added hatnote pointing to manual scans category

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SON OF A-- just caught mistake I made in 2019

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linking to three source manuals

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→‎Characters Bios - Friends and Foes: localized images; also changed section headers to short names given in manual and added Name: fields with long names -- this more closely matches the manual

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adding note about 2032 not being the date of the Freedom Riots; couple of style corrections

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added unique information from, and comparison with, PDF manual that comes with U.K. release of game

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floating TOC alongside the lengthy lede to make more efficient use of space; link fix

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no, Anchor is better here after all

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wording on note; trying to place Anchor template better

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adding back a section anchor (span id) for "Manifesto" though the section has been renamed "Pre-Mission Briefing" in accordance with the manual

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just found out that a Rockstar fan has duplicated the old Flash site, so let's link to it again

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removing link to Flash site since Flash is dead and an Archive snapshot just says "Adobe Flash Player is missing"

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changing link from http->https

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→‎On-Screen Display: now with pictures!

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adding notes on deviations between Win/Mac and PS2 manuals; correcting a few longstanding typos in our transcription of the manual

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adding text and pics for Useful Items section

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added pics and text for Weapons section

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adding in the text and pics for the Moves section; just didn't look right without it

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more layout improvements

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beginning to rework the page layout to make it more readable with all the corrections and notes

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→‎Tanker - Skirmisher Class (Green): typo

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section names do not need to be in all-caps just because they are in the manual

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TOC was needlessly long

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→‎IMPORTANT INFORMATION: better reason not to contact these people

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okay, I completely changed my mind, because I just realized that "reins" was misspelled in both texts, and all the other differences make the manual slightly better, so it is probably later than the web site

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rewrote lede and some of the inserted comments; made inserted comments bold to help distinguish them from the original text, and broke out a couple into side boxes

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added one last section from manual, "Installation", and tweaked "Bios" a little

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transcribed all missing sections from the printed manual or referred reader to existing transcripts on other pages

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working differences between manual and web site into body of text, adding section YOU AND YOUR JOB from manual

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alignment fix

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→‎THE TECHNOLOGY CRIMES TASK FORCE (TCTF): matching manual; also fixing typo, we don't need to treat the manual as a holy text

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explaining differences between R* and printed manual

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→‎CHARACTER BIOS - FRIENDS AND FOES: matching manual

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→‎TECH NOTE 2: matching manual; let's pretend that the manual spelled Shinatama right...

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→‎THE SYNDICATE: matching manual; hmm, interesting change here, perhaps I am working from a later edition of the manual?

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→‎THE TECHNOLOGY CRIMES TASK FORCE (TCTF): matching manual; these corrections brought to you by the word THE

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→‎THE WORLD COALITION GOVERNMENT: matching manual text

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→‎PRE-MISSION BRIEFINGS: correcting text to match manual; let's just pretend that the manual spelled BRIEFING right, shall we?

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restored the Zombie Shinatama, found a better placeholder for the missing Elite

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→‎Elite Striker - Ogre Class (Green)