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;The sun has pierced through the thin clouds above. Through the small openings it casts white stripes onto the snakes of mist swarming amidst the ruins.
;The sun has pierced through the thin clouds above. Through the small openings it casts white stripes onto the snakes of mist swarming amidst the ruins.


;There is a large placid flow in the middle. <strike>going downstream</strike> (duh??? [[User:Geyser|geyser]]). It is a river or a canal?
;There is a large placid flow in the middle. It is a river or a canal?


;There's a deserted town in front of us. In the distance, a part of the city is still intact and inhabited.
;There's a deserted town in front of us. In the distance, a part of the city is still intact and inhabited.
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;Now it is clearly a flashback, Konoko on a bridge over the same channel (a large motorway bridge).
;Now it is clearly a flashback, Konoko on a bridge over the same channel (a large motorway bridge).
;'''KONOKO''' notices '''SMALLGIRL''' on the shore: she  is drawing water with an old tank (sic? [[User:Geyser|geyser]]).
;'''KONOKO''' notices '''SMALLGIRL''' on the shore, drawing water with an old tank (see the [[User talk:Guido/Wishlist/Part 3| discussion]]for more details).


:raindrops of yesterday are now dried up
:raindrops of yesterday are now dried up
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;A pool of rainwater, Konoko’s foot ripples its surface.
;A pool of rainwater, Konoko’s foot ripples its surface.


:<strike>musk</strike>mold breathes as you cut it
:mold breathes as you cut it
;(do you really mean [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Musk musk]? or is it mold (fungus/lichen/whatever)? [[User:Geyser|geyser]])


:and there are people carried away from criticisms,
:and there are people carried away from criticisms,


;The asphalt on the route has been fractured by colonies of weed and <strike> musks</strike> mold  
;The asphalt on the route has been fractured by colonies of weed and mold  


;Unearthly colors saturate the vegetation. Konoko follows the route alone, and enters a forest.
;Unearthly colors saturate the vegetation. Konoko follows the route alone, and enters a forest.
[[Image:Smallred.jpg|right|thumb|Small Red<br>[[:Image:Smallred.jpg|(MORE)]]]]
[[Image:Guido - Small Red.jpg|right|thumb|Little Red Riding Hood<br>[[:Image:Guido - Small Red.jpg|(MORE)]]]]


:we delay our anniversaries to the forthcoming years,  
:we delay our anniversaries to the forthcoming years,  
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:in another year
:in another year
:there may be even unseen stars
:there may even be unseen stars


;Shot of small tiny colored fungi lurking in the luxuriant undergrowth.
;Shot of small tiny colored fungi lurking in the luxuriant undergrowth.
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