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link fix

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archive link for site that is currently down and may never come back

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→‎Troubles: mentioned why MS acquired Bungie; wording on timeline of finishing Oni

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link fix

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link fix

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replaced B&W Konoko concept art with newly rediscovered color version

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moved paragraph about the failure to release the tools/data to the Future section, and moved all the details on the tools to a footnote

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explained the delay between the finalization of assets in Oct. and the actual GMs in Nov., Dec. and Jan.

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archive link

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archive link

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changed the giant disambiguation hatnote to simply point to our new disambig page; moved the sentence about Credits into the lede; now the article can breathe much easier without all that intrusive text at the top

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→‎Completion: better introduction of the term "gold master"

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→‎Hype: linked to magazine cover cat.

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broke out footnotes (mostly-prose references) from citations (references that are primarily source URLs); now the reader can easily identify footnotes, which they're more likely to be interested in

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tweaked some refs, added Alex's other influences, fixed a broken URL in one ref

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oops

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following the experiment in the software paragraph, I've broken out most ref tags onto their own lines where they were making the markup hard to distinguish between article and ref text; it may look crazy at first but I think it makes the markup far more readable

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using quoted ref names, which allows us to use spaces in them

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labeling the lines where the article text resumes in the software paragraph to make the markup easier to read

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a few small wording tweaks and corrections

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the para. on the software BWest used has been expanded with names and numbers (prices); there are so many citations here that I am trying out a new approach to laying out the wiki markup in this para. to make it more readable for editors

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been wondering for a long long time where I read this, so added it as a source

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moved cover image above hatnotes so it can be 250px, which has become sort of the standard size of the images running down the side of the article

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added mention of pt-BR distribution and rearranged a couple sentences

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→‎Future: I spoke too soon… Lorraine is no longer at Bungie

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Metacritic moved the page again

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many wording improvements

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link fix

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linked to "no relation" article in hatnote

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→‎Sequel: linking to WAP version's image category

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→‎Buyout: finessed wording around Peter Tamte to try to make it more accurate (somewhat splitting the difference between varying accounts)

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replaced YT redirect

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→‎Inspiration: wording

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→‎Troubles: a little more detail on the turnover

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→‎Future: your yearly update on the number of former Oni devs still at Bungie: no change

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→‎Completion: added official confirmation of Mac GM on 1/2/01; added PS2 GM date

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better place for Okita wikilink; restoring a wikilink for Lorraine after the last one was removed from an image caption; mentioning that she knew Shirow's work too; removing link to "finalized design" that is clearly not final

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→‎Troubles: adding an Evans quote on the crunch; correcting Seattle back to Redmond!

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→‎Release: added UK price; should be specific about the U.S. release date here too, not just in the lede

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→‎Release: adding PS2 price per Bungie Store; and let's go with $39.95 for the PC version since that's what Bungie listed

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oops, meant to use this URL for the price citation; the price is somehow broken in the later snapshots

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→‎Inspiration: shouldn't have implied here that Lorraine was the one who removed the markings; Okita's later (pre-Lorraine) art doesn't have them either

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added game's original retail price (though I haven't been able to confirm that the PS2 release was also $40) and ESRB rating; added citation for PS2 release date also being Jan. 29

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adding dates for a few more citations; in some cases we only know the year, but that's better than nothing

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→‎Troubles: added another reference for the level rebuild

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→‎Troubles: adding reference to Hardy's video where he talks about needing to change the scale of the levels

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→‎Buyout: elaborating on why "never sold more than 200,000 units" is wrong (unfortunately this claim gets around, thanks to the Xbox book)

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http->https

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fixed a mistake I made 3 years ago – the sell sheet image I wanted is this one listing all the features that never happened; also added a link to the concept art and removed a later interview that wasn't relevant to the hype section

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→‎Buyout: this link to a page of Takahashi's book was killed at some point, but thankfully *someone* archived it ;-)