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;Composition of the second cut | ;Composition of the second cut | ||
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;Deadly fungi | ;Deadly fungi | ||
:A reference to [[Miyazaki | :A reference to [[Nausicaa/Miyazaki interview|Nausicaa]], I would believe. | ||
:May be worth a reference to the episode of Jamie [[Hasegawa]]'s death as well. | :May be worth a reference to the episode of Jamie [[Hasegawa]]'s death as well. | ||
::[[User:Geyser|geyser]] 22:50, 2 October 2006 (CEST) | ::[[User:Geyser|geyser]] 22:50, 2 October 2006 (CEST) | ||
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;The forest | ;The forest | ||
:That one is quite interesting, especially because of the [[:Image: | :That one is quite interesting, especially because of the [[:Image:Guido - Small Red.jpg|Red Riding Hood image]]. | ||
:I think I'll be putting my thoughts on the image page for now, and then move them around. | :I think I'll be putting my thoughts on the image page for now, and then move them around. | ||
::[[User:Geyser|geyser]] 22:50, 2 October 2006 (CEST) | ::[[User:Geyser|geyser]] 22:50, 2 October 2006 (CEST) | ||
[[Image:Guido - White stripes.jpg|right|thumb|roughsketch<br>[[:Image:Guido - White stripes.jpg|(zoom in)]]]] | |||
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;"Through the small openings it casts white stripes onto the snakes of mist swarming amidst the ruins." | ;"Through the small openings it casts white stripes onto the snakes of mist swarming amidst the ruins." | ||
:How on earth do you expect to render this? Just curious. | :How on earth do you expect to render this? Just curious. | ||
::[[User:Geyser|geyser]] 23:04, 2 October 2006 (CEST) | ::[[User:Geyser|geyser]] 23:04, 2 October 2006 (CEST) | ||
:more or less this way... | |||
::[[User:Guido|Guido]] 16:42, 25 November 2006 (CEST) | |||
:Hm, that's reasonably messy for a 15-minute thing | |||
::(not like I ''really'' care how fast you work... ^^ ) | |||
:::(and the composition was thought through earlier...) | |||
:Not 100% convincing as for what's represented | |||
::(too much diagonal "rain or something" : misleading) | |||
:::(without the verbal directions, it's really puzzling) | |||
::(in case it ''is'' rain : is rain compatible with mist? ^^) | |||
:If the striped mist is in the lower center of the picture, | |||
::then I think I get it (not sure I like it, but I get it). | |||
:Since it's a tricky scene, I sorta expected more detail... | |||
:Keep up the feedback. I may get back to you "in time"... | |||
::[[User:Geyser|geyser]] 17:05, 25 November 2006 (CET) | |||
[[Image:Guido - Characters deployment.jpg|right|thumb|Placement of Konoko and Smallgirl]] | |||
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;"'''KONOKO''' notices '''SMALLGIRL''' on the shore, drawing water with an old tank" | ;"'''KONOKO''' notices '''SMALLGIRL''' on the shore, drawing water with an old tank" | ||
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:"ON"??? Do you mean she was drinking rainwater off the top of a barrel? | :"ON"??? Do you mean she was drinking rainwater off the top of a barrel? | ||
::[[User:Geyser|geyser]] 04:43, 3 October 2006 (CEST) | ::[[User:Geyser|geyser]] 04:43, 3 October 2006 (CEST) | ||
[[Image:Guido - Drawing water.jpg|right|thumb|SmallGirl in action ^^]] | |||
:I just hope this will ease your pain, Geyser ... : ) | |||
::[[User:Guido|Guido]] 16:42, 25 November 2006 (CEST) | |||
:That's better (vocabulary choices may have been better). | |||
:As for the picture names, | |||
::since they're attached to a single "node" (talk page), | |||
:::you can set the name accordingly. | |||
:("whitestripes" and especially "character_deployment" | |||
::may well become ambiguous in a foreseeable future) | |||
:Re:Keep it up, there are still a few items for you to sort out ^^ | |||
::[[User:Geyser|geyser]] 17:11, 25 November 2006 (CET) | |||
[[Category:Oni 2]] | |||
Latest revision as of 02:13, 4 May 2022
- Composition of the second cut
- The girl is lying on the ground
- Her hand is casting a shadow on Mai's chest
- Kon is in a position to hang her head down
- So, where's the sun again?
- geyser 22:50, 2 October 2006 (CEST)
- Deadly fungi
- A reference to Nausicaa, I would believe.
- May be worth a reference to the episode of Jamie Hasegawa's death as well.
- geyser 22:50, 2 October 2006 (CEST)
- Good imagery, but push the fungus too far and people will accuse you of stealing from miyazaki.
- I understand he's a major influence and the comparison will be made nonetheless, but trying to minimize direct parallels will help.
- The forest
- That one is quite interesting, especially because of the Red Riding Hood image.
- I think I'll be putting my thoughts on the image page for now, and then move them around.
- geyser 22:50, 2 October 2006 (CEST)
- "Through the small openings it casts white stripes onto the snakes of mist swarming amidst the ruins."
- How on earth do you expect to render this? Just curious.
- geyser 23:04, 2 October 2006 (CEST)
- more or less this way...
- Guido 16:42, 25 November 2006 (CEST)
- Hm, that's reasonably messy for a 15-minute thing
- (not like I really care how fast you work... ^^ )
- (and the composition was thought through earlier...)
- (not like I really care how fast you work... ^^ )
- Not 100% convincing as for what's represented
- (too much diagonal "rain or something" : misleading)
- (without the verbal directions, it's really puzzling)
- (in case it is rain : is rain compatible with mist? ^^)
- (too much diagonal "rain or something" : misleading)
- If the striped mist is in the lower center of the picture,
- then I think I get it (not sure I like it, but I get it).
- Since it's a tricky scene, I sorta expected more detail...
- Keep up the feedback. I may get back to you "in time"...
- geyser 17:05, 25 November 2006 (CET)
- "KONOKO notices SMALLGIRL on the shore, drawing water with an old tank"
- Picture, please. For the life of me, I don't get what's happening.
- How can you draw water (e.g. from the river?) "with" a tank?
- What, like with a cup? Dump it in, wait until it fills up, pull it out?
- Might be a bit heavy for a little girl (starving/dying/whatever)?
- What, like with a cup? Dump it in, wait until it fills up, pull it out?
- The first version had "Smallgirl in the shoreline drawing dirt water on an old oil tank".
- "ON"??? Do you mean she was drinking rainwater off the top of a barrel?
- geyser 04:43, 3 October 2006 (CEST)
- I just hope this will ease your pain, Geyser ... : )
- Guido 16:42, 25 November 2006 (CEST)
- That's better (vocabulary choices may have been better).
- As for the picture names,
- since they're attached to a single "node" (talk page),
- you can set the name accordingly.
- since they're attached to a single "node" (talk page),
- ("whitestripes" and especially "character_deployment"
- may well become ambiguous in a foreseeable future)
- Re:Keep it up, there are still a few items for you to sort out ^^
- geyser 17:11, 25 November 2006 (CET)