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:Will you do me a favor, instead? | :Will you do me a favor, instead? | ||
;JOHN | ;JOHN | ||
:You already owe me | :You already owe me one... '''''(gasps) | ||
;KONOKO | ;KONOKO | ||
:Spare your parlor tricks, and tell me where it hurts you. (''as she undoes the first knot and she ties up again the jacket around his leg, this time more tightly''.) | :Spare your parlor tricks, and tell me where it hurts you. (''as she undoes the first knot and she ties up again the jacket around his leg, this time more tightly''.) | ||
;JOHN | ;JOHN | ||
:TCTF will not come down here. You will have no justice. Would you leave me without? | :TCTF will not come down here. You will have no justice. Would you leave me without? | ||
;KONOKO | |||
:I thought you were similar to my father. | |||
;'''''(panting)''''' | |||
:I thought you were it '''''( it??? [[User:Geyser|geyser]])''''' to die. | |||
There is a thing I wish to say, Mai. | ;''Pause'' | ||
:But Mr. Grieve persuaded me you are something more. | |||
;JOHN ''(amazed)'' | |||
:who... | |||
;''(he reflects, then closes his eyes: after a while he realizes) | |||
:There is a thing I wish to say, Mai. | |||
;KONOKO | ;KONOKO | ||
:What, John? | :What, John? | ||
;JOHN | ;JOHN | ||
:Next time, I’d like to see you smile. | :Next time, I’d like to see you smile. | ||
;KONOKO | ;KONOKO ''(cheers up? Does only John see her face? Or can we too from our position?) | ||
; | ;''Does she answer "You already made me do so."? | ||
;''Pause | |||
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;JOHN | ;JOHN | ||
:Where are you going next? | :Where are you going next? | ||
;KONOKO | ;KONOKO | ||
:I am seeking no place. Indeed there’s nothing left for me. | :I am seeking no place. Indeed there’s nothing left for me. | ||
;V.O. | ;V.O. | ||
:"maybe another story will let me in" | :"maybe another story will let me in" | ||
;KONOKO ''stands up, and walks away. There is more people coming in (a couple of mercs and civil personnel), but they seem to ignore her, they are concerned with ''JOHN BLACKWATER'' and the remaining wounded ones. A staff member has probably called them for help with a comlink. | |||
;''We take the view on Konoko’s face as she leaves the compound. | |||
;V.O. | ;V.O. | ||
:Every time I look at my reflection, I see in a hundred women I could have become. And I wonder which version you may love instead of me. | :Every time I look at my reflection, I see in [it] a hundred women I could have become. And I wonder which version you may love instead of me. | ||
:I see my face, | :I see my face, | ||
'''''Same view of Konoko, but the background has changed : it is an open space, a wasteland. She wears rags. | '''''Same view of Konoko, but the background has changed : it is an open space, a wasteland. She wears rags. | ||
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:Is it really all I got from you? | :Is it really all I got from you? | ||
;''Zoom into her right eye: as it suddenly blinks, the movement is reverted (??? [[User:Geyser|geyser]]) | |||
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