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Wishlist Part 3

Guido's Wishlist : trial scenes for Oni 2 Avatar and Konoko discussion Oldman, Konoko and SmallGirl discussion Mushroom Drunkyard discussion Show me the way to NeoTokyo discussion

even a cloudy sky can concede sunny moments

The sun has pierced through the thin clouds above. Through the small openings it casts white stripes onto the snakes of mist swarming amidst the ruins.

There is a large placid flow in the middle, going downstream (duh??? geyser). It is a river or a canal?

There's a deserted town in front of us. In the distance, a part of the city is still intact and inhabited. But it is in the corner of our field of view, beyond the left shore of the channel.

this hand

casts a tiny shadow on me

makes you laugh

A small girl’s hand casts a shadow on Konoko’s chest. Konoko keeps her eyes closed. We cannot decipher her face. She’s slowly hanging her head.

Konoko hugs the small girl who’s lying on the ground. She is clearly suffering. However we cannot be sure whether the small girl is dying here and now or whether it is a flashback to when Konoko rescued her.

Other bodies are scattered all around.

makes you think

Now it is clearly a flashback, Konoko on a bridge over the same channel (a large motorway bridge). She notices the small girl on the shore, drawing dirty water from an old oil tank (sic? geyser).

raindrops of yesterday are now dried up

A pool of rainwater, Konoko’s foot ripples its surface.

musk breathes as you cut it

(do you really mean musk? or is it mold (fungus/lichen/whatever)?)

and there are people carried away from criticisms,

The asphalt on the route has been fractured by colonies of weed and musks (mold? geyser). Unearthly colors saturate the vegetation. Konoko follows the route alone, and enters a forest.

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we delay our anniversaries to the forthcoming years,

towards new moments of

awaited rain

The highest rises of the trees are grey, reflecting a suffering nature. By contrast, the ground layer has become a daze of disturbing phosphorescences.

in another year

there may be even unseen stars

Shot of small tiny colored fungi lurking in the luxuriant undergrowth.

illnesses and mushrooms coming for us

Fade to black.

OLDMAN (V.O.)

What drove you so far away from Neo Tokyo? Isn’t it time to come back?

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Guido's Wishlist : trial scenes for Oni 2 Avatar and Konoko discussion Oldman, Konoko and SmallGirl discussion Mushroom Drunkyard discussion Show me the way to NeoTokyo discussion