User:Guido/Wishlist/Part 3
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Wishlist Part 3
- even a cloudy sky can concede sunny moments
- The sun has pierced through the thin clouds above. Through the small openings it casts white stripes onto the snakes of mist swarming amidst the ruins.
- There is a large placid flow in the middle, going downstream (duh??? geyser). It is a river or a canal?
- There's a deserted town in front of us. In the distance, a part of the city is still intact and inhabited.
- However, it's in the corner of our field of view, beyond the left shore of the channel.
- this hand
- casts a tiny shadow on me
- makes you laugh
- A small girl’s hand casts a shadow on Konoko’s chest. Konoko keeps her eyes closed.
- We cannot decipher her face. She’s slowly hanging her head.
- Konoko hugs the small girl who’s lying on the ground. She is clearly suffering.
- However, we cannot be sure whether the small girl is dying here and now or whether it is a flashback to when Konoko rescued her.
- Other bodies are scattered all around.
- makes you think
- Now it is clearly a flashback, Konoko on a bridge over the same channel (a large motorway bridge).
- She notices the small girl on the shore, drawing dirty water from an old oil tank (sic? geyser).
- raindrops of yesterday are now dried up
- A pool of rainwater, Konoko’s foot ripples its surface.
- musk breathes as you cut it
- (do you really mean musk? or is it mold (fungus/lichen/whatever)? geyser)
- and there are people carried away from criticisms,
- The asphalt on the route has been fractured by colonies of weed and musks (mold? geyser).
- Unearthly colors saturate the vegetation. Konoko follows the route alone, and enters a forest.
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Small Red
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- we delay our anniversaries to the forthcoming years,
- towards new moments of
- awaited rain
- The highest rises of the trees are grey, reflecting a suffering nature.
- By contrast, the ground layer has become a daze of disturbing phosphorescent lights.
- in another year
- there may be even unseen stars
- Shot of small tiny colored fungi lurking in the luxuriant undergrowth.
- illnesses and mushrooms coming for us
- Fade to black.
- OLD MAN (V.O.)
- What drove you so far away from Neo-Tokyo? Isn’t it time to come back?