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Oni2_talk:Truth Number Zero/French
24 May 2020
→The after-Oni: very meh, because I'm tired, but at least it's done now. enjoy
+1,297
→BGI's fiasco: new paragraph about alternate chronology
+1,512
23 May 2020
→The big fuck-up
+20
→The True Truth: also a bit meh, but mostly feels OK
+8
→BGI against Hasegawa and Muro: the translation of this section is meh; a bit tired
+117
→During Oni
−48
→The New Deal: link to the "truth" hypothesis
+134
→The New Deal
+57
→The Daodan: since they're time-aliens and not space-aliens
m+2
→The Daodan
+2
→The Daodan: adding variants of Daodan discovery
+995
→The Daodan
+17
→The cohesion of the pre-Muro Syndicate
m+1
22 May 2020
→The cohesion of the pre-Muro Syndicate: general considerations complete (so far so crappy)
+49
→The Syndicate/TCTF equilibrium: mostly verbatim
+324
→BGI and other industries: fixing "inaccuracy" about the BGI chapter order
+377
→The pre-Muro Syndicate: fixed some chronological inaccuracies, added mentions of Phase tech and BioCrisis; it's still a stub, though
+1,043
re:preamble
m+1
→The World Coalition Government: so far so crappy
+62
→Toxin levels rising
m+39
→Toxin levels rising: new thought about the "Great Uprising"
+463
→Conflicts and Bio-Crisis: BioCrisis disambig/disclaimer
m+88
→Conflicts and Bio-Crisis
m+13
→Conflicts and Bio-Crisis
m+8
→Conflicts and Bio-Crisis: coverup disambig
m+23
→Conflicts and Bio-Crisis: new idea - Energy Cells
+573
→SLD: trickster puppet
+6
→Daodan
m→Bio-punk: new preamble disambiguating what I mean by "bio-punk"
+370
→Daodan: rephrased/developed the last sentence a bit too much for "verbatim"
+15
→Phase technology
−59
→Alternative history: an earlier fork (in the '90s) is also possible; will see
−31
preamble and section titles
m−22
verbatim English translation, WIP
+32,252