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What follows is a detailed interpretation of Oni's plot, oriented towards the development of a sequel. It was mainly generated by me, but also incorporated ideas by Guido Codecasa and many others. The primary motivation is to build a consistent "whole" from the already-present content, with a strict minimum of new elements/characters/concepts, to avoid "aggravating" the plot (making it heavier).

The French version is HERE. The digest version is HERE.

General points

Alternative history

Oni's events belong to an "alternative history", which coincides with the real world until 2001 or so, but takes a very different course in the XXI century.

Phase technology

Apart from the usual cybernetic and biological technologies (SLD), Oni has so-called "phase" technologies, which have made it possible to develop non-conventional weapons and entities (force fields, invisibility, etc). The "Phase" can be seen as a parallel world (i.e. another version of planet Earth, with a different geography, other lifeforms, etc). Notably, Oni's "Screaming Cells" come from this world, as well as Mukade's "red ball" and, probably, the Daodan phenomenon. Oni's developers had plans of depicting this parallel world in a hypothetical "Oni 2", and among other things they considered a major confrontation with the Screamers.

Bio-punk

"Bio-punk" is a nod to the cyberpunk culture (in particular to Ghost In The Shell, a major influence for Oni). In Oni, the emphasis is much less on man-made AI and cyberspace - and more on mutation (hyperevolution), man-machine hybrids, artificial organics subjected to pseudo-human learning and growth processes, etc. So, like GITS, but more "bio" rather than "cyber".

Daodan

One of the central concepts in Oni (and the most innovative in my opinion) is the "Daodan Chrysalis": a kind of "smart cancer" or "benevolent tumor" that replaces damaged parts of the host organism with cloned and enhanced cells. These cells are more resilient, totipotent (i.e., they can transform at will into any organ tissue), and can receive a boost from an "aura" that permeates/surrounds the host organism. The nature of this aura is never made clear in Oni, but it can belong to an immaterial being (akin to the Screamers) that achieves a symbiosis with the human organism through the proxy of "daodanized" cells. We can say that the aura is at least powering (if it is a non-sentient entity), and maybe even coordinating (if sentient) the progress of the tumors/metastases through the organism - with the host's survival and integrity as a key priority.

SLD

Some of Oni's androids - like Shinatama - have human-like emotions and reactions, but it is important to note how the personality of such an android is built. Instead of a fake AI construct, an SLD's head contains synthetic tissue which mimics the functioning of a human brain. This brain-like structure is "imprinted" with "engrams" (some sort of elaborate encephalograms) coming from an actual human individual. In the case of Tankers, it is a wrestler who supplied the engrams for a whole army of androids. In Shinatama's case, the engrams are Konoko's, i.e., it is as if Shinatama's personality was cloned from Konoko's shortly after she arrived at the TCTF. Thus, initially, Shinatama is an image of Konoko as a child. Since that time, Shinatama and Konoko have been evolving separately as individuals, but they remain in close contact thanks to the "neural link" implanted by Griffin. The practical aspect of the "neural link" is that Konoko acts like an antenna, constantly sending to Shinatama some info about her surroundings and her internal status (both hers and the Daodan's). Shinatama (and Damocles) analyze this data in real time, and use it to provide Konoko with tactical instructions, and to inform (or misinform) Griffin and his team about the Daodan. But something else is happening as well: Shinatama sees through Konoko's eyes and receives upon her all the violence of Konoko's fighting experience, even though she started off as an innocent soul (a backup of child Konoko). It is as if she saw herself punching and shooting people, feeling all the pain and stress that come with it, unable to look away, unable to do anything to stop all this violence that is pouring at her.

Previous events

Conflicts and Bio-Crisis

At some point in the early XXI century, Oni's Earth apparently went through a world war (or a series of terror acts) with the use of biological weapons. (It is not clear if nuclear weapons exist, although we are aware of compact and powerful explosive devices, the Xiox.) This war, combined with pre-existing pollution, rendered a large part of the world uninhabitable, and the surviving population naturally gathered in cities where atmospheric decontamination processes are introduced. (Oni does not say if the BioCrisis is a relatively new situation or if it goes back to these times of global political turmoil.) At the end of Oni we are told that there are ~400 densely populated "regions", each of them depending on an Atmospheric Conversion Center like the one we see in Chapters 7 and 8. The centralization of the world population contributes to the emergence of a totalitarian government, the WCG.

(EDIT: An alternative hypothesis is that the widespread pollution - BioCrisis -, population decline, and crackdown on technological crime are all more or less direct (and more or less covered-up) consequences of Phase tech. Once discovered/invented, the new phenomena quickly led to major industrial breakthroughs but, like every new technology, the processes were poorly mastered. Catastrophes of various scales may have occurred - both accidental and deliberate - and a more general/durable pollution problem may have emerged as a side effect of, e.g., mass production of Energy Cells.)

Toxin levels rising

There have also been "Freedom Riots" (briefly mentioned in a weapon's description), as well as more or less violent clashes between the WCG state and eco-activists, following the revelations/suspicions about the highly toxic areas surrounding the atmospheric processors. It is in the context of this struggle that Hasegawa and Jamie set off to "trespass" into one of these Zones, where Jamie (according to Hasegawa's record) is "hyper-infected" by the toxic environment and put out of her misery (shot) by Hasegawa himself. Through Jamie's death, this contamination plays a key role in the genesis of Hasegawa's Daodan project (a universal cure that is supposed to defend humans against even the most virulent toxins). And it is the Daodan project which, developed under the Syndicate's wing, eventually sets Oni's whole plot in motion.

(EDIT: Freedom Riots were apparently anti-WCG separatist movements that popped up either shortly after the WCG rose to power and "annexed 80% of the countries of the world", or a few years later, after the authoritarian rule became unbearable. As for the "Great Uprising", it looks like it designates the WCG's rise to power itself, i.e., unlike the "Freedom Riots", the Great Uprising is not an infamous rebellion, but rather the heroic establishment of the New World Order.)

Social model

The World Coalition Government

The WCG is a sort of political "merger" that has been established both to avoid future military conflicts on the collective territory and to solve long-lasting globalization issues (forced outsourcing/delocalization of production, mutual debt, etc), and also - possibly - to deal with the issue of pollution control on a global scale. The WCG apparently absorbed the so-called "rich" or "democratic" countries of the modern world, leaving out the Third-World countries, most of the Arab world and more generally any country that somehow stood its ground or wasn't worth annexing. Countries excluded from the WCG are heavily impacted by the ecological breakdown (BioCrisis - either the consequence of bio-warfare or a side effect of revolutionary technology). Meahwhile, in WCG-controlled territories, the population gathers in big cities (because is it easier to purify the air at the scale of a city than for a whole country) and evolves towards a totalitarian Big-Brother-like social model. Eventually WCG city-dwellers become oblivious of what's going on outside their custom-built areas of self-imposed confinement.

The pre-Muro Syndicate

The Network (and later Syndicate) is a criminal structure that emerged in the pre-WCG world and was consolidated/radicalized into a paramilitary organization in parallel with WCG's establishment. Operating both from WCG territories (underground facilities) and from outposts in renegade countries, the Syndicate took advantage of the increasingly strict legislation (of Phase tech but not only) and crafted a both fluid and reliable black market of illegal technology - also maintaining a stable flow of contraband (weapons and goods) from the WCG to the outcast territories and back (thus allowing renegade countries to survive even though they're left out of official trade channels and decontamination protocols). It is a somewhat improbable criminal monopoly - something like a big world-wide Mafia, very centralized and well-armed - and an appropriate counterpart to the totalitarian WCG. It has strict rules, corporate hierarchy, regular board meetings, etc - law within the outlaw. The two structures (Syndicate and WCG) show some mutual tolerance, since they actually feed on each other.

(EDIT: The growing (para)militarization of the Syndicate prior to Oni's events (and even prior to Muro's coup) can already be seen as a loss of balance. The WCG initially coexisted with a mostly "white-collar" Network, and the cops-and-criminals equilibrium was nothing like an all-out-war. However, as the BioCrisis progressed, the vital ACC installations became a self-sufficient justification of WCG rule, and the Syndicate (i.e., the semi-fake threat of illegal tech) became redundant. The TCTF got more resources and was greenlit to crack down on the Network - and this may have been one of the key reasons behind the transformation of the Network into the Syndicate. For an official ingame-data account of this transition, see HERE.)

BGI and other industries

Oni has large transnational companies (or rather "transregional" since it's all one country) that are monopolies - or quasi-monopolies in their respective technological domains. This is helped by how the governemnt itself is centralized, how the population is densely packed in city hubs, and how - somewhat paradoxically - some regions are relatively isolated (in terms of transportation) because of the environmental collapse. Some of these companies are transparent and serve the WCG, others have ties to the Syndicate and engage in contraband or worse. Thus, for instance, Vago Biotech (the lab in Chapter 3) is an example of a WCG-loyal company, whereas Musashi (Chapter 2), is clearly "joined at the hip" with the Syndicate (although we also see that Musashi is a disposable asset for the Strikers - they use it as a diversion, and nearly slaughter the science staff). We also know that Musashi belongs to a larger conglomerate, BGi - which was supposed to play a much larger part in final version of Oni, if it wasn't for development deadlines. Notably the player (as Konoko) was supposed to infiltrate BGi's HQ, fight the Iron Demon there, and then blow everything up, prior to Chapter 13 (i.e. between the acid bath and confronting Griffin).

The Syndicate/TCTF equilibrium

The public space in Oni cities is covered by a massive surveillance system (apart from the Big-Brother-like "WorldNet" system, the game mentions an array of drones patrolling the city from the air). Security agents guard regular installations, and extra crime-fighting muscle is provided by the Tech Crime Task Force. Officially the low-level TCTF agents follow some kind of due procedure (can't make a move on a suspicious facility without the proper intel), which is a big handicap when dealing with the much more flexible Syndicats. However, the TCTF also has paramilitary divisions (the "Lions" et the "Black Ops"), which can bypass the official procedure and perform armed raids on known Syndicate operations. It can be said that, after an "arms race" that lasted several years, the TCTF and the Syndicate (formerly Network) have achieved a new form of "dynamic equilibrium" between cops and criminals - with more muscle and violence than before the WCG. The "soft" branch of the TCTF fights against minor trafficking as best it can, and collects intel that allow bigger raids from time to time (with support from Lions and Black Ops). Moreover, this constant struggle against "tech crime" provides a permanent justification for "Big Brother". (EDIT: So perhaps the BioCrisis is not making crime redundant after all - BigBrother is harder to justify if dirty air is the only threat.)

The cohesion of the pre-Muro Syndicate

The Syndicate resolves internal conflicts and fights segregationism thanks to a centralized executive power and zero tolerance towards troublemakers. Thus the paramilitary force developed by the Syndicate serves not only for the tactical support of big smuggling operations, but also as an "internal deterrent", ensuring the cohesion of the Syndicate and the respect of the Council's authority.

The Council is not mentioned in Oni (just as there is no real description - apart from the entry at TCTF HQ - of what the Syndicate used to be like before Muro), but it is up to us to give a name to this executive organ, which we know must have existed. One naming possibility is "Hydra", which symbolizes the fact that intimidating or eliminating one of the Council's members is meaningless or dangerous - the rest of the Council will quickly identify the culprits and will dispose of them mercilessly.

In addition to the armed force, an important role was played by the assassins (forerunners of the Ninja that we see in Oni). The multiply redundant Council ("Hydra") could easily eliminate a single offending element, but not vice versa. Moreover, the WCG administration also made occasional use of these same assassins, when the rigidity of the system felt like too much of a constraint.

The BGi conglomerate was a titan-sized double agent: it filled the heavy-industry needs of the WCG, and at the same time provided most of the Syndicate's infrastructure and logistics.

An additional concept (not at all mentioned in Oni), is that of a "virtual government" called AVATARA, which is an anonymous gathering of influential WCG people, BGi executives, and maybe some major assassins. They do not really decide the fate of the world, but arrange more or less regular "round tables" (in cyberspace) to analyze the situation as well as discuss the possible courses of action.



The Daodan

First there was a renegade assassin (Mukade). He was a first-grade fighter and hacker, one of the best. He had access to AVATARA and was tied to BGI.

As an idealist, he was disappointed with the turn taken by the "struggle" between the WCG and Syndicate (primarily the completely frozen social model and the never-ending ecological crisis).

He started by distancing himself both from the WCG and the Syndicate, prepared to deal with the consequences of this move (like fighting off fellow assassins that would be sent after him).

Rather than becoming a hermit, it is possible that he already envisioned founding a Fight Club in the wasteland (a concept that can be developed either in Oni 2 or in an epilogue - originally it appeared in Wasteland Flowers as Guido's idea).

The exact genesis of the Daodan project is unclear, just as the "true" circumstances of how Jamie Hasegawa died (i.e., the nature of the infection from the scratch - if Hasegawa's record is genuine - or whatever else may have happened to her). But, fundamentally, it was about Hasegawa meeting (and teaming up with) Mukade.

Hasegawa absolutely wanted to do something about the toxic "dead end" in which the world was headed at the time (and his determination was even more firm since the loss of Jamie).

Mukade shared these ideals but, having been part of the system, had a much more complete picture of it, with technical details and practical knowledge that Hasegawa lacked.

Conversely, Hasegawa (a biology expert) had the means, wits and motivation to create/develop the extraordinary entity that could shake every balance there was: the Daodan.

This is the time when Mukade provided Hasegawa with more or less specific "tips" for infiltrating/contaminating/alienating the Syndicate via the Daodan project and make it (the Syndicate) into a tool powerful enough to drive an even bigger change. It is also possible that the discovery of the Daodan entity (which triggers and oversees the "hyper-evolution" human cells) was partly due to Mukade himself (he has knowledge of more or less secret research projects - like the Screamers - and may have had "expert access" to transdimensional portals - that's assuming that the Daodan indeed originates from the "Phase").

The basic idea, for Hasegawa, was to work on the Chrysalis right under the Syndicate's nose until they take the bait of the "Universal Soldier" and take over the project. Next, plan A is that Muro (and/or Mai), a human weapon prototype, ends up escaping the Council's control and achieves a coup inside the Syndicate (an otherwise improbable feat).

Plan B is that Hasegawa would have subjected himself to the Daodan protocol, too, even before experimenting on his children, unbeknownst to his colleague and stepbrother Kerr: only Mukade knows.

To increase his chances as the new Syndicate's mastermind, Hasegawa also subjected himself to Mukade's "engrams". Normally only a blank brain can receive someone else's personality (this is how it happens for SLDs), but the advanced integration of Hasegawa's Chrysalis allowed his neurons to adapt to this second self. The drawback is the inevitable schizophrenia and the partial "loss of self", apart pro being eaten up by the Chrysalis as a regula symbiote. The advantage is that Hasegawa inherited Mukade's wisdom, his fighting techniques, his hacking skills, and his deep knowledge of the whole Syndicate/WCG/BGi system, which is essential if one wants to manipulate the system from the inside.

(EDIT: The chronology of the initial phase of the Daodan project - and how the "plan" emerged - is open to interpretation and subject to reshuffling. The Daodan may have been discovered in Hasegawa's legal lab - before he and Kerr became outlaws - or it may have been discovered already in Syndicate labs (with or without Mukade's help), or it may have been a pre-existing phenomenon - a well-kept secret, that Hasegawa became aware of after some preliminary research (again, either by himself or thanks to Mukade). Alternative stories of Daodan discovery include, and are not limited to: (a) "Screamer fishing" gone wrong, i.e., a Daodan was "hooked" out of the Phase instead of a Screamer and impacted a living cell; (b) computer-assisted design of a "quantum biocomputer"; (c) xenoforming of Earth biosphere by an "alien" race, whereby all the lifeforms xenoformed-so-far are already Daodan-enhanced - Hasegawa's challenge, then, was "just" to identify the Daodan and make it work for humans.)



The New Deal

It is plan A that worked (although plan B was activated too). Muro was raised as a human weapon, and the Syndicate (Council/Hydra) was too late in realizing that they could never control him.

New allegiances sprung up. Some were subjugated by Muro's charisma (he is the ultimate alpha male), others simply seized the opportunity to free themselves from the council's authority.

The Council convoked a plenary session that was supposed to vote the termination of the Daodan project, and it is at this moment that Muro struck, eliminating most of the conservative decision-makers and influencers.

A few Syndicate "bosses" (either cautious or lucky) survived the initial purge, but their troops and hired assassins were no match from Muro and the fanatic "Strikers" that assembled around him.

This is, in a nutshell, the story of the "coup" that turned a mostly conservative Syndicate (committed to a stable coexistence with the WCG) into some much more unpredictable and radical ("TITAN"?).


Muro was still a teenage boy at this time, and Hasegawa secured his place as Muro's most infuential advisor. The first task was to suppress all resistance and rule out any resurgence of the "old Syndicate".

Hasegawa (helped by Mukade's engrams) suggested to resort to freelancers: a new generation of assassins and hackers who related to the "wind of change" embodied by Muro's coup (such as Kojiro).

Each of those neo-mercenaries who managed to eliminate one of Muro's major opponents gained access to Hasegawa's "circle of honor" and became a candidate for Daodan/Chrysalis implantation.


This is how a new technocratic and intellectual "core" assembled around Hasegawa. Meanwhile, Muro was continuing to redefine the moral identity of his growing army of "Strikers".

Muro's declared goal was Project STURMANDERUNG: a biological ultimatum to the WCG civilization and, eventually, a forced "hyperevolution" of Mankind (subjected to Muro's authority).

The cynicism of this project (deliberate pollution, anarchy/feudalism) is striking. Such a nightmarish scenario fits in well with Muro's megalomania, but not so much with the supposed altruism of his father! (Muro's "I've accomplished everything our father dreamed of doing." is also very disturbing in that respect, and can be resolved - as one possibility - through the "True Truth" hypothesis.)



During Oni

The "true Mukade" (who has also been called Old Man) stays in the shadows and is never seen. Either he doesn't do anything, or he moved to the wastelands and is busy assembling a "Fight Club" (which may later evolve into Phoenix in Oni2's plot).

One way or another, he is not interfering with the processes that he initiated (or helped to initiate) - that is, Muro's "New Deal" (radicalization of the Syndicats) as well as Mai being sheltered by the TCTF (and eventrually turned into a human weapon by Griffin, as insurance against Muro's Daodan threat).

The story of Mai's upbringing at the TCTF is relatively simple because it happens in a very conservative system (even if you take into account Griffin's cruel pragmatism and overzealousness).


Meanwhile, Muro is gradually repurposing the Syndicate, which is now no longer (or not only) an organized network of tech crime, and is geared towards megalomania and terrorism.

(We can say that Muro is to the Syndicate what Muro's Daodan is to Muro himself - he devours the Syndicate from within, imposing new motivations and levels of consciousness.)

Muro's Syndicate (which by the way no longer refers to itself as "Syndicate") gradually abandons secondary projects and focuses on STURMANDERUNG.

Apart from various low-level smuggling, freak projects like Deadly Brains ou Bertram Navarre's experiments become useless as STURMANDERUNG draws nigh.


The WCG becomes aware of this loss of balance, but does its best to conceal this apparently meaningless/insane radicalization of the Syndicate.

The TCTF continues staging (or faking) small-scale operations against "traditional" tech crime (smuggling, drugs, etc).

That way, the government is maintaining the illusion that Muro and his Strikers - even if they look and behave like maniacs - are still "doing business" like in the good old times of the Network.



BGi against Hasegawa and Muro

In reality, the only stronghold left from the old-school Network/Syndicate, at the time of Oni's events, is the BGi conglomerate along with its child companies (Musashi etc).

BGi, like the WCG, does not welcome the loss of balance brought about by Muro and his Strikers, and is planning to oppose/disrupt the STURMANDERUNG project at the best opportunity...

And then there is Hasegawa. With his scientific genius, the Daodan enhancement, Mukade's engrams and the neo-technocrats gathering around him, he has been providing the Strikers with unprecedented autonomy, i.e. he is capable of making BGI redundant in the logistics-and-infrastructure department. Therefore BGi hates both Muro the megalomaniac and Hasegawa the prodigy.


Muro controls the Strikers mainly through a constant reshuffling of the hierarchy throughout the network.

(This is how terrorist networks work in the modern world, whether there is a leader or not; Fight Club, too.)

When needed, Ninja can be used as a last resort to enforce the internal order (by intimidating or eliminating rogue elements). The Ninja are an army of androids (half-robots, half-SLDs - basically like cyborgs, but with artificially grown brains) imprinted with the "engrams" of Mukade/Hasegawa and sharing a collective consciousness. The also behave as antennas used for surveillance, thereby increasing Mukade/Hasegawa's awareness to practically omniscient/ubiquitous levels.


Apart from the Ninja (as mentioned previously), Hasegawa(Mukade) surrounds himself with "neo-technocrats": a few expert hackers and killers who have earned their rank by tracking down the "old Syndicate" and are now candidates for Daodan implantation.

In addition to the Daodan project, Hasegawa/Mukade&Co may be developing some advanced technology (WMC cannon - possibly -, Mukade's gadgets).

All this - the emergent technocracy and the Ninja army - puts BGi in a precarious situation, without any guarantee of stability.

(and of course there is Muro's megalomania and STURMANDERUNG, which goes against common sense and would mean the triumph of anarchy)


Faced with this situation, BGi reluctantly makes a pact with the WCG, and receives "carte blanche" to contain the threat represented both by human hyperevolution (Daodan) and by the impending bio-terrorist ultimatum (STURMANDERUNG). In this context, BGi secretly develops heavy weapons, cyborgs and robots that are more than a match for Strikers, and an Iron Demon that is capable - at least in theory - of kicking Mutant Muro's ass.



The True Truth

La "Nouvelle Donne" de Muro (radicalisation mégalomane du Syndicat) fait partie du changement prévu par le plan de Hasegawa et Mukade. C'est un sacrifice nécessaire.

La violence engendre la violence, ce qui fait que Muro et les Strikers (des maniaques attirés par son charisme) s'aliènent mutuellement de plus en plus.

Muro est perdu en tant qu'individu (sacrifié). Mais entretemps le réseau mondial de crime organisé est détruit de manière irréversible.


L'étape suivante du plan est que la pollution totale prévue par STURMANDERUNG et qui motive tant Muro et les Strikers, n'aura pas lieu.

Au minimum, le signal envoyé par les satellites de STURMANDRUNG ne déclenchera pas d'"inversion" du fonctionnement des convertisseurs atmosphériques, donc il n'y aura pas d'empoisonnement supplémentaire.

Au maximum, Hasegawa-Mukade et ses Ninjas auront effectué un "sabotage constructif" qui augmentera l'efficacité des convertisseurs atmosphériques au moment de la réception du signal STURMANDERUNG.


A ce moment-là, Muro et ses Strikers se retrouvement royalement baisés. Des terroristes en herbe qui croyaient avoir la bombe ultime, et n'ont finalement rien de tel.

Hasegawa-Mukade et les Ninja vont tout simplement s'éclipser, ainsi que la plupart des technocrates, en sabotant au passage la majorité de l'infrastructure du Syndicat.

Agissant dans l'ombre, les Ninja élimineront les plus durs à cuire (Muro et ses généraux), et le reste des Strikers seront laissées à eux-mêmes.

(et bien sûr on n'aura encore implanté de Chrysalide à personne, à part Barabas, peut-être Kojiro et quelques autres...)

En supposant que Hasegawa-Mukade avait connaissance du pacte BGI-WCG, il y avait aussi la possibilité d'utiliser la force de frappe de BGI pour éliminer Muro et les Strikers en leur donnant des indications.


L'idée, ensuite, est que Hasegawa (avec une aide possible du "vrai Mukade") ira s'occuper du WCG.

Le crime organisé a été démantélé. La menace bioterroriste vient d'être éliminée également. L'environnement est en passe de récupérer de lui-même (Hasegawa a amélioré les Convertisseurs ou prévoit de le faire).

Tout celà a pour effet de déstabiliser le "Big Brother" qu'est le WCG et ouvre la porte à une évolution (ou à une révolution) du modèle social et du système trop autoritaire. Hasegawa-Mukade va délibérer de la meilleure manière d'améliorer le système, et agira. En infiltrant, en manipulant, et en éliminant si nécessaire - tout comme le fait le Daodan à l'échelle de l'organisme de Hasegawa-Mukade lui-même.



The big fuck-up

Au contraire de Muro (ou Mai), Hasegawa a quasiment maîtrisé son Daodan, grâce notamment à la sagesse héritée du "vrai Mukade".

(toutefois, son identité est mise à mal à la fois par l'hyperévolution et par les engrammes de Mukade: il est doublement aliéné)

Malgré tout, il est resté suffisamment humain pour succomber à la nostalgie de Jamie et aller au-devant de Mai, au lieu de l'ignorer.

C'était une très mauvaise idée.


Le but objectif de l'épisode des toits était bien sûr d'analyser Mai et de voir si elle représentait une menace.

(une menace pour le projet STURMANDERUNG, aussi bien les faux projet mené par Muro et le vrai déroulement révu par Hasegawa)
(et, de manière générale, une menace pour la société et l'humanité; il ne s'agit pas de laisser le Daodan faire n'importe quoi)

Mais Hasegawa avait aussi dans l'idée (mauvaise idée!) de sauver Mai de la spirale de violence qui avait déjà englouti son fils.


Sur les toits, Hasegawa a tout d'abord voulu voir si Mai était prête à entendre la vérité sur le Daodan.

  1. Si elle était prête, ils ne combattrait pas: il lui dirait tout, ou du moins lui donnerait des conseils.
  2. Si elle ne l'était pas, il la combattrait et perdrait (ferait le mort). Le CD et Kerr feraient le reste.


Elle n'était pas prête. Une fois qu'il l'a compris, il l'a intimidée puis s'est battu et a perdu en accord avec le plan (2).

Sa grande erreur a été de ne pas faire le mort, pour la (mauvaise) raison qu'il avait senti les doutes de Mai à son sujet.

La volonté de sauver Mai est revenue et il a voulu faire appel à sa merci, ne sachant plus s'il suivait le plan (1) ou (2).

Mai a réagi de manière imprévisible et cruelle (probablement sur une pulsion du Daodan visant à la protéger de trop de doutes et d'émotions nouvelles), en tuant Mukade.


On connaît la suite. Personne n'a informé Mai du sabotage de STURMANDERUNG, et personne ne l'a empêché de faire exploser les Convertisseurs Atmosphériques.

Ainsi la partie la plus cruciale du plan de Hasegawa-Mukade a échoué, principalement à cause de cette rencontre sur les toits.

Laissé pour mort par Mai, Hasegawa a soit récupéré de lui-même, soit récupéré et réanimé par les technocrates (Kojiro & Co).

(pour ce qui est du "vrai Mukade", je pense qu'il est meilleur qu'il garde ses distances pendant tous ces événements)


BGI's fiasco

La force armée de BGI a été développée pour contenir la menace du projet STURMANDERUNG et de l'apparition de Muro Mutant. A l'insu de Griffin, les forces de BGI auraient frappé Muro et les Strikers juste avant qu'il mette son plan à exécution. Mais Mai, en échappant au contrôle de Griffin, représente aussi une menace qui est du ressort de BGI. A plusieurs reprises les troupes de BGI essayent d'éliminer Mai, a partir du Chapitre 7 (Convertisseur atmosphérique), puis sur les Toits, et finalement après le Chapitre 13, lorsque Mai fait irruption au QG de TCTF, met tout le monde KO et traque Griffin jusque dans son bunker. Lorsqu'elle ressort du bunker, l'armée de BGI est là avec la ferme intention de ne laisser aucune chance à Mai, et d'aller ensuite s'occuper du vrai problème (Muro et les Strikers).

Mais c'était compter sans la "badassitude" de Mai, car elle passe au travers des forces de BGI (en tuant tout le monde ou pas), détourne un de leurs transports, remonte jusqu'à leur QG (l'un des chapitres fantômes initialement prévus par Bungie) et plombe toute leur infrastructure militaire, pour aller ensuite en découdre avec Muro. Ainsi Mai a véritablement foutu la merde partout - le plan de Hasegawa est gâché, et le BGI (qui se voulait un contrepoids à Muro et aux Strikers) est fortement pénalisé aussi. Et en plus elle fait exploser les Convertisseurs en polluant des centaines de villes et en tuant des millions (milliards?) de gens. Décidément, quelle fille!



The after-Oni

Les actions de Mai déciment la population mondiale et accentuent la pollution à court et moyen terme, sauf dans les villes dont les Convertisseurs ont été épargnées. Les villes intactes doivent faire face à un énorme afflux de réfugiés, ainsi qu'aux attaques des Strikers. Les Strikers n'ont plus de moyens de terroriser ou de marchander avec le WCG (le secret du Daodan a disparu avec Hasegawa et les technocrates), donc ils essayent tant bien que mal de s'emparer des villes, de l'accès à l'air frais, des convois de vivres etc.

BGI assume son échec face au problème Daodan et au désastre écologique, et se concentre sur l'humanitaire. L'industrie lourde et la haute technologie sont progressivement mises au service des populations survivantes. Les plus alertes des Strikers finissent de passer du côté WCG-BGI, et le tout finira par évoluer vers une utopie (META), contrôlée par un mélange de l'élite WCG-BGI et des "technocrates" de Hasegawa (menés -ou pas - par Hasegawa lui-même ou l'un de ses "seconds"). Puisque cette société utopique est "dopée au Daodan", elle a pour vocation d'opérer, à terme, une "hyperévolution" de la société, en remplaçant progressivement tous les "maillons faibles" par quelque chose de fluide et de totipotent, quasiment extraterrestre - un processus à l'image du Daodan, mais a l'échelle de l'humanité tout entière.

Mai elle-même ne trouve pas facilement sa place dans l'après-Oni immédiat. Elle se rend progressivement compte de la portée dramatique de ses actes (surtout la décision de faire sauter les Convertisseurs, ce qui répand des matériaux toxiques concentrés - les déchets de la conversion atmosphérique - autour de la majorité des métropoles du WCG, vouant à la mort des millions, voire des milliards d'êtres humains). Elle croit d'abord que la Chrysalide apportera la réponse, c'est-à-dire que l'humanité saura d'une manière ou d'une autre s'adapter pour survivre à la catastrophe (soit en utilisant réellement le Daodan, soit à travers une évolution métaphorique). Mais elle va de désillusion en désillusion. Aucune autre Chrysalide ne sera implantée (Hasegawa a disparu, et le secret avec), et Mai est (non sans raison) désignée comme l'unique responsable de la catastrophe, donc elle n'est bienvenue nulle part.

Errant à la périphérie de la civilisation, elle essaie de servir une bonne cause en déjouant quelques attaques des Strikers sur les convois de vivres etc, mais là encore elle se heurte à l'incompréhension et à la violence, et de plus en plus doit lutter contre la seconde nature imposée par sa Chrysalide. Elle finit par s'exiler, poursuivie par le fantôme de Shinatama et les remords par rapport au cataclysme qu'elle a engendré. Elle finit par tomber sur le Viellard (le vrai Mukade) et son Fight Club, ou sur d'autres interlocuteurs (fantômes ou réels) qui lui ouvrent les yeux sur toute l'absurdité de sa situation et lui font comprendre que sa décision de "tout faire sauter" à la fin n'était pas autre chose qu'une pulsion de son alter-ego Daodan, et qu'elle a déterminé sort de l'humanité sur un énorme coup de tête. En résulte une folie suicidaire - or la nature de la Chrysalide rend impossible le suicide - ce qui aboutit à un blocage et une remise à zéro du corps et de l'esprit: un sommeil lethargique suivi d'une amnésie.


More, later...